[It'sGray]

Yes. I do, I need help. Here's a draft horse. Now crit it. Please. I havn't gotten any real constructive criticism and I need some to improve... Right now I want to focus on the head/neck/face. Ignore the mane/forelock. I want serious crit... Dont worry about offending me. Be mean. Please no 'ummm it looks rly nice and but maybe make the nostril bigger but idk its rly good i cant draw its lke perfect!' Okay, maybe it should be bigger. Explain! Thanks, I'm hoping this to really help me out.
~Bolix

[Zyroid]

The nose thing(Sorry, i don't know much about horses) looks quite short. Eveeything else is perfect.

[Catalyst]

I agree that the face needs to be a little bit longer but not too much. I think that you need to smooth out the line under the chin, and the bottom of the chin should be lower than the miidle of the face. The nostril i think needs to be a touch higher up, too. Your shading is great, though. I can never get draft horses right and yours looks good.

[It'sGray]

To both of you, thanks very much! ^.^ With draft horses I have a tendancy to make the face too short. I see what you both are saying, and I'll definatly work on it.
Thanks!