[PandoraStables]

Lol well I've been on and off doing this one for the past 3-4? hours. Lol it's 2:21am now and I can't be stuffed doing anymore lol Anyway the story to this is that theres been a storm at our house which started at about 10PM and the wind is like, WOAH! I feel like a trees gunna fall on the house! So I was bored and tired so I randomly just drew this horse in a storm which isn't as bad as this one but still raining and windy...Gee I can't wait to see how many trees have come down tomorrow! Eeek!
Anyway Hope you can try to like this lol

[PandoraStables]

Thoughts? Impressions? I'd love some critque!

[snuggles00]

I think the drawing has a nice theme, and is very well thought out. However you could improve on the legs. Make them thinner around the bottom and clean them up. I think the body is a tiny bit to long, and the head could also improve. Great picture overall, and keep drawing!

[PandoraStables]

Thankyou! Yeah the legs are a bit big lol but I was having trouble with the mouse :S Lol so I just thought I mays well make it a heavy horse so something lol. Not sure about the body, I would have said it may have been too short but thats me. Lol the head sucks I just threw it together Thanks!

[Animall]

You wanted critique? Here is some more;

Everything listed above

The neck is too thick.

And snuggles00 was right, the body is too long.



I really hope this helps, I want to see you improve. ^.^