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Fin- #485 by Northstar.

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Fin- #485

Postby Northstar. » Mon May 20, 2013 1:06 pm

I'm finally finished. I think. <3

This is art for JBD #485. :3
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Re: Help?

Postby Fun4me27 » Mon May 20, 2013 1:08 pm

It looks great the way it is i would do this :clap: :thumbup: :D :) ;)
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Re: Help?

Postby Northstar. » Mon May 20, 2013 1:14 pm

Thanks. ^_^
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Re: Help?

Postby owls-in-october » Mon May 20, 2013 1:54 pm

:D I'm not an expert and JBD anatomy, but I do have a few tips.

First of all, the tail length is fine, but you may want to make the tuft at the tip larger. Secondly, for the front legs, you don't have very much room to work with, and I'd suggest making them slightly shorter before adding the paws. Finally, it looks great so far (especially the moon), but it is a bit messy, so tidying up the coloring should help.

Good luck on winning him! Hope this helped!

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Re: Help?

Postby Northstar. » Mon May 20, 2013 1:59 pm

Thanks so much! I'll try to work on it tomorrow, maybe play around with the legs until I find something that fits. I really appreciate the help. <3
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Re: Help?

Postby Sunnyside » Mon May 20, 2013 5:58 pm

I think the top of the foreleg is a bit too wide; that might be your problem x3 and maybe make the neck a tad wider
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Re: Help?

Postby Northstar. » Tue May 21, 2013 1:05 am

Thanks! I'll test that out. <3
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Re: Help?

Postby Fun4me27 » Tue May 21, 2013 8:27 am

Cool you finished it
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Re: Help?

Postby Northstar. » Tue May 21, 2013 9:19 am

Yep, pretty much. :3 I just need to color and shade(though the shading may be a little wonky). ^_^ And I need to put the JBD on something. Probably pebbles or sand. <3
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Re: JBD 485

Postby Fun4me27 » Wed May 22, 2013 8:59 am

it would be creepy if all of a sudden there were little baby ones (i am not saying you should add baby ones)

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