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Cyanide Entry by The Most Sincere

Artist The Most Sincere [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 3 minutes
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Cyanide Entry

Postby The Most Sincere » Mon Oct 08, 2012 10:19 am

Another entry for a JBD that I'm trying to win.
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Deep in the woods,
In a world of our making.
Lost in each other,
No sense of forsaking.
A simple feel like any other,
Without any room to pretend as another.
But losing our footing on a wire of briers,
Binding and prying in loosening desires,
That not even the strength of
the strongest of motions,
Could calm this tide
Of rising commotions.
Drowning in sinners and falsified thoughts,
With feelings of malice, detachment and loss.
Swimming in circles around the drain,
Sucking the life from every vein.
Draining the soul and leaving it lost...
How much falling till you're finally caught?
And get back to the place your eyes have sought?


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Re: Cyanide Entry

Postby The Most Sincere » Mon Oct 08, 2012 11:56 am

Any critique?
Image
Deep in the woods,
In a world of our making.
Lost in each other,
No sense of forsaking.
A simple feel like any other,
Without any room to pretend as another.
But losing our footing on a wire of briers,
Binding and prying in loosening desires,
That not even the strength of
the strongest of motions,
Could calm this tide
Of rising commotions.
Drowning in sinners and falsified thoughts,
With feelings of malice, detachment and loss.
Swimming in circles around the drain,
Sucking the life from every vein.
Draining the soul and leaving it lost...
How much falling till you're finally caught?
And get back to the place your eyes have sought?


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Re: Cyanide Entry

Postby The Most Sincere » Mon Oct 08, 2012 3:02 pm

Bump...?
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Deep in the woods,
In a world of our making.
Lost in each other,
No sense of forsaking.
A simple feel like any other,
Without any room to pretend as another.
But losing our footing on a wire of briers,
Binding and prying in loosening desires,
That not even the strength of
the strongest of motions,
Could calm this tide
Of rising commotions.
Drowning in sinners and falsified thoughts,
With feelings of malice, detachment and loss.
Swimming in circles around the drain,
Sucking the life from every vein.
Draining the soul and leaving it lost...
How much falling till you're finally caught?
And get back to the place your eyes have sought?


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Re: Cyanide Entry

Postby ~Vanilla~ » Wed Oct 10, 2012 12:54 pm

let me hug your art! so cute!
♡Working on this soon♡
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