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Red line by *QUIT*

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Red line

Postby *QUIT* » Mon Jun 11, 2012 6:54 pm

This actually wasn't too bad.There were only a few mistakes.

.:Big Cat:.

The pelvic bone is clearly distinguished, but The bottom of the tail shouldn't be that visible and instead hidden by the fur on the hind legs. Also, unless you are drawing a snow leopard the tail shouldn't have that much fur at the tip.

Both front and hindpaws need to be larger. In order for a predator to successfully catch it's prey it needs larger feet to give it more 'push' to propel itself forward.

The bottoms of your ears were off. But the tops were the same. So that caused one ear to be larger than the other.

Chest fur doesn't normally stick out that much at the top if the feline has been grooming itself.

.:housecat:.

Less of the top of the tail needs to be shown.

Stomach fur on long-haired cats is very... plush/soft which causes the feline to be larger than it actually is.


Hopes this helps a little!
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