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Re: Silhouette Wolf (First Oekaki!)

Postby squids cx » Sun Nov 02, 2014 11:11 am

I love this!
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Re: Silhouette Wolf (First Oekaki!)

Postby Totoro<3 » Sun Nov 02, 2014 2:38 pm

How is this your first Oekaki? This is really cool! Go ahead and check out my lame drawings if you are REALLY in a good mood... :)
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Re: Silhouette Wolf (First Oekaki!)

Postby Morgentau108 » Sun Nov 02, 2014 10:44 pm

Amazing work! :thumbup:
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Re: Silhouette Wolf (First Oekaki!)

Postby cosmicmoonlily » Mon Nov 03, 2014 1:40 am

Nice work on the feature.
Here's some constructive criticism though to help with future drawings:

The first thing that I noticed {And someone else also commented on this} was the lighting. The lighting would not be able to shine onto the wolf's body like that in any way.
It looks like the sun has set behind the wolf so there should be light around the silhouette to show that the light is shining from that direction. Here are some pictures to show what I mean.

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Secondly the anatomy is slightly off, but it's nothing really noticeable. The back legs are just slightly too long but I'm sure if you study wolves enough you'll get the hang of it in no time. c;

Nice try though for your first time.
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Re: Silhouette Wolf (First Oekaki!)

Postby ★ nirvana, » Mon Nov 03, 2014 2:56 am

    Excellent, especially for someone's first Oekaki!
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Re: Silhouette Wolf (First Oekaki!)

Postby Hialeah » Mon Nov 03, 2014 10:12 am

Wow! Fantastic! I thought this was a photo for a moment!
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Re: Silhouette Wolf (First Oekaki!)

Postby a n g e l i n a » Mon Nov 03, 2014 10:14 am

oh my grapes, arctic!! you never told me how good at drawing you are. maybe our next rp could be a wolf one cx
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Re: Silhouette Wolf (First Oekaki!)

Postby ylvie » Mon Nov 03, 2014 5:40 pm

Kikipanda wrote:
Nice work on the feature.
Here's some constructive criticism though to help with future drawings:

The first thing that I noticed {And someone else also commented on this} was the lighting. The lighting would not be able to shine onto the wolf's body like that in any way.
It looks like the sun has set behind the wolf so there should be light around the silhouette to show that the light is shining from that direction. Here are some pictures to show what I mean.
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Secondly the anatomy is slightly off, but it's nothing really noticeable. The back legs are just slightly too long but I'm sure if you study wolves enough you'll get the hang of it in no time. c;

Nice try though for your first time.


Thank you so much for the tips! They will definitely help me in the future. <3
I'm totally aware of the false lighting, I'm not quite sure why in the world I added that. This was honestly just a sketch that I did at like 11pm, I never dreamed that so many people would see it. As for the anatomy, I'm quite familiar with a wolf's build, and I see my mistakes.

Truthfully, I'm not a big fan of the drawing software that CS has. I'll learn as I experiment more though. owo
Oh, and thanks for taking the time to write all that for me, it helps a lot! ^u^
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Re: Silhouette Wolf (First Oekaki!)

Postby animal_lover3 » Wed Nov 05, 2014 3:18 am

wow just wow i love this :D
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Re: Silhouette Wolf (First Oekaki!)

Postby Taako » Thu Nov 06, 2014 12:59 pm

Amazing!
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