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Re: WoI Litter - Soren x Kafka - OPEN

Postby Siriro » Fri Jun 15, 2012 7:01 am

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Pup number:
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Pup's name:
Lerrum

Nicknames:
Lerr, Lerri

Personality:
Lerrum is a pretty crazy boy. He has a tendency of always beeing exactly at the only spot he isn't supposed to be at. This often causes him in truble, but when all he really wants is to be in the right spot in the right time. There also seems to be two Lerrums trying to extist beside one another, but never really does. Most of the time he is kind, but always everywhere, asking about everything, but if you're rude to him he will take that as a challenge and become your personal devil. He also has this selfdistructive, sarcastic sort of humor, wich always seems to reflect in everything he does and says. He never really think before he does things, this is the largest reason of his beeing-at-the-only-spot-where-he-shouldn't-be-problem. But he isn't stupid, just a act-first-think-then person. And he probebly has the worst sense of direction in Isket.

Some clear points, so you get a better view of what I really mean;

-Inquisitive
-A bit of a trouble-maker
-Personality cleaved
-Kind
-Funny
-Unthinking

Story/Histoy:
The light rain landed on the leafs above my head and the sounds made it feel like I was walking inside an orchestra. But, eventally, the rain started falling through the leafs, dripping down in may neck, making me shiver. I still liked it though.
Dripp, dropp, dripp, dopp, dripp-dripp, dropp.
What was I doing here? That's a question I've been asking myself for quite some time now. Why wasn't I in the nice and warm cave with mum and dad? Good question.
I went out this morning to fight a kronador, after my sister said I couldn't, and ran into the forest. The thing is, ofcourse, I havn't found any kronadors and now I am totaly lost. It would be kind of nice if soumebody just would come by and ask what I was doing here and take me home. Ofcourse that'd be embaressing, but a lot better than wandering around here 'til the day I die. It atleast feels like I've been here before, so I guess dad might brought me here once or so... And that'd mean this is a known place. My rescue!
I looked around closley at the landscape around me. I was a river some steps away abut other than that, just the enormus trees around me. It felt like they were staring at me with old and wise eyes. The rivers constant roaring made me tierd and I sat down on a dryer spot under a tree and thought.
Do I know in wich direction home is? Er, no. Even if I did do I know how to find out what was north? Wouldn't think so. How likly is it that anybody less than me goes out on this sort of stupid tripp an early evening and walkes this far? No one. Am I screwed? Yes.
I layed down and hid my nose and face under my paws. Why? Why was I so stupid? Couldn't I atleast have told mum where I was going? I don't belive she could have stoped me, atleast she could have known I was lost in the woods.
It started to rain more and more till it was like a thick, wet, mist.
I felt my belly hurt. Oh, great. Now I'm hungry too. This day, no, wait it's evening, just get's better.
I shut my eyes and tried not to hear the roaring from the water and the rain.


I opened my eyes.
No rain, that's a good sign. But the bad thing was that a foot from my nose was the flooded river. It had been at least 2m away when I got to sleep. I shakily got up to my legs and groaned when I felt my ice-cold muscles beeing stretched. Aoutch. I shook my fur and a minor sea came out of it. Oh, lovely. Some part of my mind picked up a picture of my family in the cavesystem at home, wich just made me wish I wasn't so foolish even more.
In daylight the forest seemed even more bland. Infront of me was a pretty big stone, shaped like a wolf head in profile if I stod in a certain direction, so I jumped up onto it, thinking that I might see somone else. It was quiet and still in the part of the forest I was in. But suddenly some warriors appeared form what seemed like nowhere and ran past me, not taking any notice to the 6 months old pup on the strangely shaped rock.
"Help!" I shouted as loud as I could.
They all stoped and turned around. Five pairs of eyes stared at me where I was standing.
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...Help..." I wispered.
The leader of the troup was my grandpa, Rayo. I didn't think he usually joined simple things as hunts, but here he was. I was so gunna die.
"Lerrum?" A surprised and slightly worried voice said. It was Amadahy, and she was the only one of the other warriors I actually knew a little.
"Lerrum. What on earth are you doing here? This is Kronador area!" Rayo said dangerously calm.
"Ehm, Um..." I stuttered.
"You're not supposed to be here"
"But...{-insert sisters name here-} said I couldn't take down a kronador and I ran into the forest to show her, but then I got lost and it was raining, and, and..." I said in one breath.
"That was the most stupid I've heard in years." Rayo said in disapproval.
"Yes, grandpa!" I said. "But can you show me the way home? Please?"
"Hm. Get down fom there now."
I jumped down and felt extremly small, standing infront of the leader of all warriors.
Rayo turned to the other warriors.
"I'll be back in half and hour."
And then he started walking back the same way he came from. I hurried up to him and quickly looked back at the other warriors, whom didn't look too happy that I was to be found again at this moment. But I couldn't stop beeing happy that I'd been found and wasn't going to starv to death in the Kronador area or beeing eaten by a kronador.
We walked several quiet minuites before I remembered something.
"Grandpa?"
"Hm."
"Why where you out with the warriors? I've never seen you do that sort of stuff..."
"You'll know when you are a real warrior."
Wow, that was probebly the most bland thing he could posebly think of, I thought to myeslf. But I didn't say that. Istead I just nodded and said a quiet "Okay".
About ten minuites later we reached a big field of blueish grass.
"Thanks Grandpa, I know the way from here." I said and stoped.
"Good. Now, don't go that way ever again. It is very dangerous." The leader of all warriors nodded to himself and turned around, to walk back the same way we just came from.
I slowly walked through the huge field. The grass floated with the winds around me and created strange patterns that only the birds could see. Sometimes I could wish that I was a bird, just to see things as the shapes of rivers cutting throught forests and the wind patterns in the grass. Wow, I'm stunned by my own philosophical statement. And there was home, the well-known redish mountains made me feel how tierd I was and how much my legs hurt. I wished for a nice warm place to sleep and to have all the well-known faces of my family and friends around me.
And when I got into the cave systems I was exhausted. Mum ran up to me and told me stuff like, "Where have you been?!" "I've been so worried!". But I don't really remember exctly what she said, and even though it was morning I layed down with the cozy reddish color of the cave walls around me and fell asleap.
I was never, never, to walk in that part of the forest again alone! Or atleast so I thought, but I surely wandered of there more times without knowing where I was. But I never saw the wolfhead shaped cliff again.

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Re: WoI Litter - Soren x Kafka - OPEN

Postby .:Liri_Biersack:. » Sat Jun 16, 2012 3:08 pm

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Pup number:1 she is so beautiful with her changing colors in the stripe on her back. The leopardish spots and the color smudging from orange to white the red in the eyes compliments the other colors so nicely.
Pup's name:Aiski- I've always liked this name but I was saving it for something special and this seemed the perfect time to use it.
Personality:Very calm and depending on how much sleep she had happy and clumsy or grumpy and graceful
Story/Histoy:She was always different, she almost never spent time with her littermates but spent her days sleeping all day but looking at the stars and the moon by night. She always was facinated by the moon for its beauty and grace. She always thought of the sun as too showy. As she got older she self taught herself healing methods, and though she was no shaman she always admired the position.
Armour Design: sorry I had one of these as an unfinished drawing so the save to my account thind wasnt working so I put it on paint.
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Re: WoI Litter - Soren x Kafka - OPEN

Postby Mackiot » Sat Jun 16, 2012 5:11 pm

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Pup number: the adorible #1 please and thankyou. (just because you cant see my drawing im posting the pic too X3) Image i just love the color and the pattern, i also like the fact of how great they are together. she is an amazing looking puppy and i would do anything for the cute little bundle of love! i just want to squeez her! i also like how she is half white! i dont know why but white wolves amuse me. mayby becasue accourding to indean beleafs, (witch im not) if you see a white wolf in real, or in a dream, it is sent to protect you. she is not full white, ut she gives me this protectors feeling. she makes me feels safe... strange thing too feel over this but still. i personally think (i have seen some photoes of other WOI and i personally think, she is the most beutifull of them all.)
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Pup's name: [color=#FF8040]Amalda (means strong) i think a strong spirited pup should get a strong name. i mean, she would have to stand up for herself and be strong with brothers you know, i dont have any myself, but i have been told thhey pick on you and are annoying! :lol: (no offence to you brothers out there)[/color]Image
Personality:strong and brave, can be shy and is always moving in some way, you can never get her to hold still. she is happy and tries to find the positive side to things. she loves to hang out with others and she can be talkative, but not all the time. she wiill stand up for weaker and ingered and will never back down unless absalutly nessasary, but she sometimes wont. when she is hurt or scared, or upset in any way, she hates to admit it, and she doesnt want you to shrug and say ok, she wants you too look into her eyes and say seriously, whats wrong, i wont leave untill you tell me. she loves that. she is a great companyon and almost never leaves your side. if your sad, she will look for ways to make you happy. she is kind and loving and she doesnt like it when someone is sad or scared. she likes to play fight and wrestle. when she is determined to do something, she will do it. no madder the riskof her life or death. (she wouldnt risk families and freinds lives or deaths, nore thoese she doesnt know)
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Story/Histoy: (sorry im not really a writer :( probibly decreases my chance of getting this young beuty) (and thank you |Δ Ƥαят Ѳғ Ѧɛ|for helping me on making it better!!!)
Amalda felt a warm tongue licked her back, ruffling her fur, she whimpered and scooted closer into the warmness of her mother. She felt other wriggling bodies around her. She couldn't tell how many there were with all the movment. She yawned and streatched. She felt she was ready to open her eyes for the first time. When she opened her eyes the first time, it was slow, and it was bright, making her close her eyes again. She tried to open her eyes again and didn't close them as fast. she looked around at her surroundings in the den. Browns and greys of her sibblings and mother. The light outside from the sun brightened the den. She looked too see two little squirmy bodys fighting over milk. She turned to face one of them and got into a playfull position, pouncing on one and making it yelp, she giggled. She realized they hadn't opened there eyes yet, she was the first! She felt proud of herself and she nipped one of the pups ears playfully, shortly after; they each had there eyes open, playing and nipping at eachother, chasing eachother around outside the den.
They're mothers eyes watch them like magnets while she was laying down near the den. Amalda growled, pouncing on her brother, they roll around in the soft grass. She opens her mouth and says the first word of them all , instead of a yip like the rest always did "Tag! Your it!" She shouted and scurried away. She skidded to a stop and hid behind a rock. She peeked out too see him walk towards the rock she hid behind and other objects. She fell silent and held still, almost holding her breath. For the first time she heard the sounds around her clearly, beutifull chirps and tweets from birds, the sound of streams and a waterfall, the wind blowing through the grass and leaves above her. A twig snapped and she saw a brown body flash by, thinking it was her brother she chased after it at full speed and pounced on it pining it, shocked to see the face of a rabbit she squeeled and jumped off, killing it.
She ran back to her mother and cuddled into her warm fur. She told her mother about the bunny and showed it to her. Her mother seemed proud about it, but why? She had just killed something! She desided not to think about it. Her brother snuck up behind her, while they're mother walked back to the den; and pinned her to the ground, but with the correct movement she flipped him on his back and pinned him. She smiled at him and laughed, getting off, her other brother charged at her and she ducked as he soared over her. She fell on to the ground, lauging, her brothers looked all beaten up! She streatched and looked up, seeing the sky darkening. She walked over to her mother slowly and fell asleep by her side.
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It had been a few months, and she was older. She was bigger and stronger, faster and sleeker. She turned to her brothers "You cant catch me!" She shouted. Now this day, was important to her, this was the day she met a Kronador.
She was running and playing with her brothers, when she heard a strange noise. She turned to see her brothers cowerinag and looking just above her. She slowly turned and saw the horrible face, teeth sharper then a knife and stained yellow and horns high and curved. The hair was long and spiked with claws long and sharp and neon green eyes stare at her. Her small body was shivering in fear from head to toes. She yelped and started to run to her brothers, who started to run back to the den, but she was caught in the jaws in the beast. She howled and yelped in pain as the monsters fangs dug into her back. She turned around just enough to see its face and clawed its eye. She saw in horror as it was no longer there, she then looked at her paw too see the eye stuck to her claw. She whimpered and shook it as it flew, the monster dropped her and roared in anger and pain. She ran weakly back, but she didnt think she would ever forget the face of the horrifying beast. As she ran back she got weaker and weaker. She was almost to the den when she fell to the ground with a thud...
She woke up, her mother hovering over her, tears stream from her eyes. She licked her all over and nuzzled her and continued licking "Your ok! My little baby is ok!" She shouted not stopping her licking. Amalda looked into her mothers eyes "What was that thing" She asked in a serious tone.
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Again a while later, this is when she meets her 'freind' again.
Walking through the trees with her mother, they didnt do this very often. She was almost a teenager and she couldn't wait to be one, then she could join the adults, maybe. She didn't quite know what they did, but she wanted to join them. The mud under her paws was moist and squishy. It squished inbetween her the pads on her paws, it felt relaxing. She looked at her mother "Mother? What do you do, and why has no one told me?" She asked looking into her mothers eyes. Her mother held her breath for a moment before speaking "I wanted to keep you safe, but I cant hold you back forever. We are warriors, we fight for peace." "fight who?" Amalda asked her mother, confused. "What is more like it, we fight Kronador's. They are like... Horse and lizzard mixes" Her mother said. Amalda tilted her head to the side before asking "You mean like the one I saw when I was little?" "yes, very much like that" she paused and looked at her mother when she said that, before asking another question "Why did it want me?" She asked. It had gone after her, and hadn't laid an eye on her brothers. Her mother turned her head to look at her "I don't not know many things, and that is one of them." She said and turned her head to look ahead of her again. "We must get back to the den before your father and brothers return with dinner, if we're late, there will be nothing left" She smiled and they both laughed at her mothers joke.
Suddenly, a creepy noise got her attention, a familiar one... She gasped and turned to her mother "It's back to get me!" She shouted as she turned to run away from it "Amalda! Don't run! You need to stay and fight!" Her mother was right, she always ran, she never stayed back and faught. She skidded to a halt, mud and a bit of dirt flew past her as she turned around bolting back as i saw the monster appear. It stood infront of her mother and reared, kicking out at her mother. She saw her mother lunge at it. Amalda came up and circled behind it, looking for the best place to get, she knew that a bite to the belly could stop it, a bite to the throat could kill it, but she didn't have access there. The animal was kicking out and trying to stomp on her mother, so this would be hard. She darted underneath it, avoiding the large hooves stomping, on either side of her. She held her breath and bit the belly of the beast hard. It roared and reared. Blood filled her mouth and she realized her teeth were stuck in the meat of the belly. She pulled her head back tring to get free as the monster stood on all fours again and started to stomp again. She stumbled backwards with the clump of meat still in her jaws. She scratched and pawed at it to get it out, and it did. The monster fell to the ground and lay there breathing heavly. Blood oozed from the wound she had made. Tears came from her eyes, she was so scared. She leaned into her mothers warm pelt when her mother came to her side. The monster's blood was smeared on them both. She took one last look in horror to see it look right at her, with one missing eye...
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this was the day, the day she went to training for the first time. she was exited and wouldnt stop jumping and squirming. she loved to wrestle with her brothers, and she was tired of them. she found their weaknesses a while back when they were playing. she wanted a new challenge, were she wouldnt know the weakness, but were she could acctually fight without winning within thirty seconds. she walked into a smallden that frew bigger as it went in. it was huge! it was like taking a handfull of her den. yips and yelps echo as she hears others fight. she was aw over the advanced wolves. she had a while to go before her stage of training was on, so she watched them. they wernt death fights, but sometimes blood spilt, but then the match ended and the ingered wolf was rushed away. she stood up and streatched. the rest of the wolves in her class, including her brothers, were up higher on the rocks watching and talking. she felt alone, so she climbed up. "hey guy's, whats up?" she askes looking at a cute wolf. she blushed slightly. "oh nohin much, tiny" said a deepr voice. she looked at the wolf who said it. he was about two, maybe three times her size, he was black with a star like pattern on his furwith a white mask. "who you callin' tiny?" she said and stoood up tall. "im callin you tiny, tiny" he said. "oh really?" she said and she lifted her tail and her fur bristled. "i challenge you" she said "to a fight." she said. the wolf seemed shocked. she shook his head "deal, like a weakling like you can beat me anyways" he grunted then hopped down the rocks and went to a pile of carcusses to get something to eat. "AMALDA! ARE YOU CRAZY?!" shouted her brother "HE WILL KILL YOU, AGAISNT THE RULES OR NOT!" she shrugged. "well, i learn fast, remeber? i knew your weaknesses after our first playfight, im sure i can lern his, im older and can prosses things much faster" she said. she turned and cauht a glimps of the cute boy again. she blushed and hopped down. "i can do this!" she said confidentally. she stood tall and didnt even thinking of backing down.
it was time. i had to choose who i fight. a larg grin spreads accross her face. she lifts her paw and points it at the wolf she challenged. "him" she said in a voice like 'this is going to be easy' she walked onto the ring and her oppontet followed. "im going to crush you like a bug tiny" "gee, you part bear you lumber like one, an overly fat one" she said as a reply. a low treatining growl escaped his throught, and she snarled at him. she watched him and it seemed everything fel sighlent but the beat of her heart and the pad of her paws hitting the ground. "GO!" a voice shouted and everything went back to normal. she lunged at him gripping his back with a firm grip. he rolled over crusjing her, but she got right back up. she went for his leg, but got his chest. he roared in agony. he reached down and dug his teeth into her scruff. a meamory came to her. teeth in her back, fear filled her, screaming, her own blood smeared on her.everything getting blurry as she fell and fainted. she was back in the real world. the memory wasnt strong enough to tell what had her, but she new she wouldnt let this monsterous pup do the same as that thing did to her. she swung herself so she was under him, he still had her scruff. she turned the best she could and started to claw at his belly, like it was made for scrtching. she screamed and let go. another memory, her teeth in a bluish flesh, they were stuck. a scream of agony. she was back to reality again. the memoryhelped her, the belly, that was the weakspot of most. she lunged at him. he reared up, expecting her on his back, but she went under him. she sank her teeth into his belly and pulled. she felt warm blood oozz into her mouth. it was revolting. she let go and he fell giving up. she walked out of the ring and threw up outside. wolf blood was revolting! she never wanted to tast it again, but who new what the futer held...
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she didnt exactully remeber everything that happened the day before but she remeberd she won a fight in training. she had something on the tip of her toung but she dint rember what it was. she shook her head. next training was tomarow, she got a break between every day. this was a free day. it was also, lucky her, her birthday. she was offically a teenager now. she felt older already. she felt stronger and more confident. she dint want to give up the feeling. she wanted... she wanted... she wanted to kill something that tried to kill her... but what was it again? she new she knew it, but she jsut couldnt remeber. was it the wolf from they day before? no, she only met him one, and she new she had metthis one a few times. she new it was a male.... he was... he was... no it was! she looked up at the sunrise. she looked around the den. they were all asleep. she snuck out too look for the Kronador that tried to kill her. she wanted to know, why her?

(ok i dont have time to finsih this so this will be a cliffhanger!)
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Armour Design: silver with small horns stiking out just above her eyes. back of helmet is spiky like fur. small chains dangle from the side of helmet the chest plate is also silver and sticks up and out to the side with matching chains dangling just low enough so she cant get tangled and trip. a backplat with spikes down the senter of it (not really a great discription and it has more but it will be shown in my sketch) (ps might not get it done in time :? ) (if i get her i may change it till i think it is perfect)(its done but wont get it on tonight for same reason for the art)
here is a photo. if i do win her, im going to change the armor, but i had so little time to think of the perfect armor, and i couldnt find anyone who would help me but anyways her we go:
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Artwork: WIP (ganna be traditional! X3) (some below)(all traditonal mine)
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(it needs to be rotated sorry i dont know how to do that X3 )
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(ug, couldnt get a nonblurry pic of this one X3)
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blurry and hard to see colors X3 sorry. this isnt my best work :lol: i might make more X3 enjoy!
viewtopic.php?f=33&t=1243684 viewtopic.php?f=33&t=1245564 <-I DID DRAW A DIGITAL!!!
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thank you shoyu! (made by shoyu)
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other: she was the first one to open her eyes, and she was slightly bigger then her brothers, but as they grew up, her brothers got stronger then her, dominating her by strength, but not skills, she is great with doging attacks and finding weak spots. she usually doesnt go to hardd, but she does for for them. she went threw her life like any other puppy, with the terrible twos and all that such. as a teenager, she liked to sneak out andspy on others. she was a master at stealth (mostly) and she was almost never caught, but when she is, she gets in big trouble, they even hired a nanny once or twice to keep her in. she eventually grew out of it and got more interested in Kronadors. she studied them whenever she had a chance and she looked for weaknesses and strengths, she obsereved the best she could of the ugly animals, even though she had a past with one, she wasnt verey scared of them (she was of the one. it tried to kill her when she was young) she tried to sneak out once and it was seccesful. she went on a stroll to were she would study the beasts and she desided to fight one. she got there and there was one there. a female. she used her stealth to head out and she snuck up on it attacking it. she fought with it, damaging its vocal cords so it couldnt call for help, she maneged to take it down. she was proud, but she never told anyone, for she wold get in trouble for fighting it and sneaking out. she still dint have her armor but would get it soon. (bad discription and i might change the armor if i get her) she was sneaky and a hard fighter, she might not have been as strong as her brothers, but she had quicker reflexes, and smarter moves.Image
other other: im really exited for this, (so exited i almost hurled :lol: ) and sorry for the horrible story, im deffinetly not going to be a writer. HORRIBLE discribing X3
i would do anything for this sweet little girl, but my writing skills say otherwise X3 but still. and GOOD LUCK TO ALLL YOU PEOPEL WHO WANT THE AMAZINGLY GEOGEOUS PUP NUMBER ONE! she needs a name. pup number one isnt a good name!
and whover wins her, amke sure she gets the love and care she deserves, i know if i do i will spoil her!

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oh wow i think i want her a little too much, im staying up till past 12 every night!
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Postby miike » Sat Jun 16, 2012 5:18 pm

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Pup number: The first pup, because of her exquisite head pattern and simplicity on her bottom half. I am more than in favor of her colors, and love the overall way she appears to be. Jamilah is the most extravagant WoI I've seen in a while, and is the very first one I am trying out for. Even though she is the first, I feel like she has been around for a while..maybe in the back of my mind as something that I really want to work towards. She is the WoI that I'd love to have and want to keep forever.

Pup's name: Jamilah Etana, Jami for short. The two words mean beautiful, dedication and strength. I chose these specific names because I believe her personality to base off these three traits. Her beauty and undying love can make her powerful and yet still fragile. Jami is content with any nickname really; but prefers to be called her full name. Her pattern reminds me of an African cat, and Jamilah is a name from that ethnicity. The name Etana is a biblical name, that I chose because it not only sounded nice with the other, but gave me the words I wanted to describe this beauty with.

Personality: Jamilah Etana is a very dreamy WoI, she doesn't necessarily take thing very seriously. She's carefree, but yet careful at the same time. Jamilah can be cautious and aware of herself being air headed. It's like a double personality, an alter ego. She is very fun and loud, funny per say. But, she could snap on you if you hurt her, mislead her, or lie. She can be a very generous WoI and rather nice if you let her. It you trip up you might awake some bad feelings, be careful of that. She can be the everything you wanted, and yet the enemy as well. During her young years, she'd always play and laugh and have tons of fun with her brothers and everyone in general. But then she realized the world was more than that, not everything was so bright and easy; war was ugly and hateful. It changed her as a soldier, to be more considerate during the times she needed to shut up and be respectful. She knows how to be around some people, and different around others. If your a good friend, it is likely that you'll have the privilege to have a commonly good time all around with Jamilah. and on the other hand, you could want to stab yourself every time she breathes. For the most part; Jamilah is an enjoyable fae and is very loveable and open to everyone.

Story/Histoy: newborn (1-4 month)
Jamilah Etana entered the world quietly, after all of her brothers. She shook her head as her mother cleaned her up, refusing to stand it any more. The pup whined, cried out into the air. And later on, she opened her eyes..surprised to find the world a lot more interesting that than he had hoped.
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I creaked open my eyelids, the ball of fire behind them unbearable anymore. A satisfactory noise came cooing out of my mother, and I shielded my young eyes. They hurt, staring out into the world and it's harsh and blinding light. I cried, a weak howl escaping my maw. Mother was right there to comfort me, and my brothers. I found warmth in her pelt, food in her stomach. My name was softly being called, and I looked up tiredly.
"Jamilah...Etana, lovely you are awake finally." the voice was soothing and coaxing, my mother smiling over us. I gulped, and sat back on my rear.
Yes, mother? I thought, curiously looking up at the fae. She just laughed cutely and returned to my brothers, I stood up shakily, my legs wobbling as I walked. It was painful, yes..but so worth it. I could smell new things besides my brothers downy fur and my mothers tongue. I breathed in slowly, tasting the air on my taste buds.
"Jamilah, where are you going?" mother said, alarmed. Next thing I knew, I was floating by my scruff, returning to my rightful spot in the cradling arm of mother. I sighed, blinking up at her.
Why can't I explore mom? I wanted to say, so badly. But I stayed cool and decided to nap instead. The dream was terrible, snake like creatures on all fours, hooves even. They were chasing me, and I was scared. Mother was ahead of me in my dream, calling my name.
'Jamilah Etana! Come back, you'll get hurt!' she was saying. I felt like I was running but they kept pinning my tail so I couldn't move. I even screamed out in terror as I was devoured by a female creature. The juices in her stomach stinging my eyes.
"What's wrong...?" mother asked worriedly. I just shrugged and tried to speak.
"Kronadors, they ate me." I shuddered, a rippling sensation going down my spine. She tsk'ed, shaking her head slowly. I frowned, not knowing what to say.
"They can't touch you, not with me around." she said. I was surprised that it comforted me, but I was warmed by the thought that she'd fight for me. I looked up to her from then on, my mother was and is a big part of my life. I love her dearly, as well as my father and brothers.
"And I would fight for you as well, mother." I said loudly, and with my chest puffed up somewhat.
"Ha, I'm sure you would." she laughed and pressed her nose to my chest. I sat back, and suddenly became very tired again. I hoped I wouldn't have any more Kronador nightmares. And I was right. When I closed my eyes again, I lay my head down softly to welcome a dream of my brothers hunting rabbits. Their colorful coats blending with the blue green grass, and the rabbit standing out like a crow in the middle of hundreds of white doves. I woke up later to only experience this, watching WoI hunt. They were graceful and quiet, but at the same time fast and lucid with their movements. I watch them in stealth, admiring their sport, their flashy armor. I wished for my own as beautiful as theirs and knew one day that would be me, fighting for my own and protecting my family.

pup/trainee (5 month - 1 year)
Jamilah growled, and ducked down as her brother lunged at her.
"Hah!" She laughed, and twisted around, forcefully hitting him. She knocked the wind out of him, and nipped at his neck. Then she quickly started to run.
"I win, I win!" she hollered tauntingly, full of joy. Her fur stood up as she scrabbled to a stop. She gasped a bit, not liking what she saw. A carcass of a Kronador lay in front of her paws. She gagged on her own breath, and soon her brother caught up with her.
"Jami what's wrong? Oh.." he mumbled, running back to his mother to tell her. Jamilah cowered back, here eyes drifting upwards.
"Did you do this, kill my son?" a large creature emerged from the brush, glaring at her with reptilian eyes. She shook her head with force, backing away as the female advanced forward. Jamilah growled out of instinct, and this only enraged the Kronador more. The large creature moved forward, swiping a largely grotesques hand at her. Jamilah flinched, nearly getting caught. The pup sprinted across the blue green grass, the sun reflecting of her back. She huffed and her tongue lolled, she ran as fast as she could with that monster at her back, Jamilah could hear it tearing through the forest, desperate to get to her flesh. The fae leapt onto a boulder, scrabbling to get a hold onto it. With a second come and past; the Kronador snatched her off. With Jamilah hanging from the claws, it felt like hooks were needling into her back. Jamilah stared at the creatures piggy eyes, the length of her nose covered in scales. Angry nostrils pouring out hot breath. Jamilah growled when the Kronador opened her maw, revealing needles like teeth, rows of deadly fangs.
"Please don't! I didn't kill him!" she choked. Then something glorious happened. Sorren rammed his body into the Kronadors body, knocking the both of them over. Jamilah screamed, still unsure of what was happening. She stood, her vision faultered and she lost balance, crashing back to the earth again. Her back was seeping blood, the claw handles had pierced her skin. From the ground, she could see the two magnificent going at it. Sorren snarled gutterally and spit at the Kronadors face. The snake like animal jumped towards Sorren, claws flashed and ready to kill. Sorren only need step back and turn onto her back, biting onto the Kronadors neck, latching into its throat. Jamilah found he energy to walk over to the needle mouth, and stare at its dying body.
"You killed him?" it said weakly, in an angry yet curious whisper. Jamilah shook her head.
"No, and I'm sorry to whoever did." the WoI softly looked at the dying mother. It surprised her what the thing did next. It only widened her eyes and looked up.
"Father, please let go." Jamilah asked innocently but evidently strong. Sorren shook his death grip, and then released his jaw. The Kronador gasped in relief, now bleeding through her own wounds.
"Thank you."
"Goodbye." Jamilah said in a hurry to end the Kronadors sentence; hatred for her still lied there. Still lied in the blood, energy and sight. Jamilah turned around to try and lick her wounds, but Sorren helped her. Jamilah only need look up and smile to say her thanks.
"Why did you do it..?" Sorren asked between cleansing his pup.
"She deserved better than the pain, even if she caused me my own." This confused Sorren, but he helped his daughter back to home without any further investigation. Jamilah looked back once, and sighed. The pain in her back was unbearable, but she knew that the pain in that mothers heart was only worse. Even after death.

Soldier ( with 1 Year)
The morning was nurturing, quiet and soothing. A lone Kronador traveled the forest, searching for something. A WoI was rising to the occasion, of getting her armor. The fae woke due to the bright rays of sunlight in her eyes. Jamilah sighed, unprepared to go on this journey. Not long ago, a Kronador had given her many scars of her shoulders from her claws, and they still flashed in the light. Jamilah stepped up, waking her tired body up. She shuddered, the wind blowing into her home cold. Jamilah quietly said goodbye to her family, who was sleeping in this early hour. The fae looked around quietly, and set off in a jog. Her paws landing with a pitter patter. Jamilah wanted to start off early so she could be undisturbed with everyone else sleeping. As she hit the tree line, the clouds covered the sun; making the skies dark and bland. Jamilah sighed, she'd rather have the sun the warm her. As she ran, she found herself come upon a fork in the path, two dark tree paths.
"Really? I wish there was directions." Jamilah said aloud, and trusted her guts feeling to go right. After about an hour of going down this path, she found herself at a dead end. A large boulder loomed over her head, water spots giving the impression that it had rained recently.
"Here I go again." She grunted, flipping around and heading back to the fork. As she reappeared, a young butterbird landed on a branch, watching Jamilah come into view.
"Hello." Jamilah rang out, stopping only for a moment before going to the left. The bird screeched, making the WoI stop.
"What? What is it?" Jamilah asked a but annoyed. The bird blinked, and took off to the right. Jamilah ignored the thing and headed left. Bad decision, three Kronador hid in the brush. One of them was making clicking noises in the undergrowth. Jamilah swiveled her ears, picking up on the creatures.
"Oh no.." She whispered, and started to back up slowly. Her tail dropped, barely touching the ground. The bird was over her again, fluttering ahead. A male bursted through the trees, high tailing it to Jamilah. She snarled, and started to run. The fae gracefully and yet quickly made her way around the bend of the fork, almost tripping over her own four paws. She grunted, and sprinted down the alley again. The butterbird zipped through the sky, following Jamilah. It soared over the boulder, while Jamilah had some difficulties. She could hear the three Kronador coming down the path together, pushing one another; fighting for the WoI's meat. Jamilah cursed under her breath, and pounced up onto the rock. Her legs felt like noodles; but she was safe for now. The birds was now on the dirt, chirping for Jamilah to come along. The WoI bounced down, landing hard straight down on her front two paws. Now limping, she looked like a rocking horse. Jamilah decided it was a good thing to follow the butterbird and saw it as a companion. Jamilah loped forward, cutting through a pasture of blue grass and red rocks. She was more calm now, the stars lighting her way. The bird stayed loyally by her side; flying behind when necessary.
"You are a good navigator." Jamilah smiled, obviously tired from the running. The bird tweeted, and hopped on it's legs now. "Get on my back..I'll call you Leala; it means loyal."
Jamilah laughed softly when the bird made a high pitch noise and landed softly on his shoulder blade. The WoI growled, hearing a rustling in the tall grass. Mice crawled by her paws, nearly missing getting stepped on. Jamilah arrived at a large mouthed cave, dark and covered with tree limbs. She was shaking a little bit; intimidated by the structure. It had been over two days of a long voyage; without any rest. It would have been a lonely one as well, if it were not for her pal Leala. Jamilah was washed over with a cold breeze as she went farther into the room. Silver, gold, copper; all colors of gems. Armor everywhere, Jamilah was amazed.
"Wow, well will you look at this, Leala." She said in shock, mystified by the different pieces. One caught her eye, dark royal blue crystals implanted above the browline, a long draping scarf of chains that would tug at her stomach. It was beautiful, but not for her. There was even training armor, made of wood and carved with designs. She left those to find herself in front of a masterpiece. The perfect fit for her; the silver armor with red orange rubies.
"Oh wow." She said aloud. She let her paw glide over the surface, smudging the rubies shiny surface.
"This one, 'eh Leala?" The bird whistled at the metal, liking what she saw. Jamilah smiled, and put on the plates very careful not to destroy them. And she put them on just in time. When she left the cave of armor, the Kronadors had found her trail again.
"Timing, good one; energy...not so well." Jamilah cursed under her breath, and snarled loudly. The male that had chased her before was now battered, his face mutilated and bloody. The two females as well. One's eye was cut open, revealing a pulp of tissue. Jamilah gagged, and watched sadly as it fell down without putting up a fight. It screamed out in pain, rolling onto it's side to show off more injuries. Red gashed tore along it's ribcage, several bones poking through. Leala screeched in warning, and Jamilah growled. She lept onto the males body, striking at him with her sharpened claws. The Kronador hissed, reptile eyes dilated. Jamilah bit victoriously into his meaty throat, but was pinned onto the dirt from the other girl Kronador. With one dying in her jaws, Jamilah scratched up his belly and kicked him off of her. Jamilah was more than pleased to have the armor protecting her. And Jamilah was ready to fight. She jumped up; bucking her back legs..forcing the Kronador off of her. She watched as it landed limply by the dead female. Jamilah charged at her; growling continuously. The WoI knew better than to let her recover. Jamilah snapped her teeth at the Kronadors face, nipping her nose. the Kronador screamed, swiping a clawed hand at Jamilah. Her hooves got into the WoI's gut, winding her. Jamilah pinned the beast and jumped on her chest, breaking several ribs. The male somehow had not died, and dragged himself onto Jamilah. The fae flipped on herself, and bit the male's neck again, furiously whipping her head and breaking his neck. Without killing the last one, Jamilah called for her butterbird and ran back to her den. Inside; the fae simply took off her armor.
"Thank you for all of your help." She said kindly, and smiled at Leala. The bird tweeted and landed on the mask of her armor.
"Thank you." Jamilah said again, before laying down to rest. After all the trouble, she had finally found her own armor to cherish. Her duty as a soldier would now begin.


Armour Design: Description for now<3: Jami's armour is a lightly tinted silver color and has accents of gold plates. She also has orange rubies as decorations. Let's start at the face, her head armour. The mask covers the top of her snout, and covers her cheekbones. At the ends it layers into ruffles carved with intricate designs resembling WoI heads. There are three gemstones under the rims of her eyes on her mask, smallest to largest from the inside to the outside. Silver lines of chains create feather like appearances on her sides of her mouth, and at the top of her mask is two tiny golden horns. They are tipped with the same red ruby, painted into an upside-down teardrop. Behind the horns, is a full neck of chains, silver in color. Her spine is protected by six horns like the top of her mask, but much larger and leading down her back. Jami has one continuous chain wrapping down her back right leg, and hangs down from it are golden orbs believed to blind her enemy in combat. She has bracers on the other three legs that are impressed with more WoI's and leaves ingraved into the metal. They resemble her mothers bracers, the same deep gold wrapping around to show off more rubies. Leather wraps her underbelly, thick straps and dark as mahogany. The back bracers are less fancy, more for protection. They are full silver, embossed with the gold chains like on her mask. The kneecaps have large gemstones, rimmed in gold. More chains drip down the base of her tail, all silver and there is one long vertical chain that ends with a ruby orb. That's all ^^.
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Re: WoI Litter - Soren x Kafka - OPEN

Postby dogshrimp » Mon Jun 18, 2012 6:02 pm

D: I have to drop out, not enough time to finish!

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Pup number:
1

Why this one instead of the others?
I must admit, pup number three struck my heart too. All of them are so lovely and they all show wonderful mixes of both parents, it was very hard to choose. But soon this design took me over, the complexity yet simplicity of the design, just beautiful. I had always told myself I wanted a male WOI, but here I am in love with this girl. I just love how even though her face and neck are more busy then the rest they still fit in perfectly.

Pup's name:
Arezu

Why the name?
I choose the name Arezu because, first of all, I think it has a nice ring to it. Second, it's a variant of the name Arezoo, Arezoo means desire in Persian. And I do desire this girl, so I thought it was rather fitting.

Personality:

Arezu is quite odd. She is very honest, sometimes telling things she didn't mean too, but for what she lacks in keeping secrets she gains in bravery. Her overall attitude is happy and putting a positive side to everything. She likes making friends most of the time and feels rather hurt when someone lies to her.

.:Honest:.
Arezu always has to tell the truth in her opinion, unless it will hurt someone else. She is sometimes too honest, like telling secret about herself... not that she has that many.
.:Brave:.
Arezu is really brave, always wanting to get into the action, not even really thinking about what could happen. This part of her makes her rather reckless in fights.
.:Positive:.
Arezu can find something good about almost everything, except lies, lies are her weak point. Her attitude is almost always on the bright side.
.:Follower:.
Arezu hates leading, only because she fears that she might mess up and put others in danger or make them angry.
.:Friendly:.
Arezu is friendly to everyone, even if they aren't friendly back to her. She loves having friends of all kinds.
.:Protective:.
Arezu is protective over everyone, sometimes going to over-protective. She will not stand for bullying and if someone is hurt she will immediately put her life before theirs.

Story/Histoy:
Arezu looked up at the sky, the red rock under her still cold. But yet the night was so enjoyable, even if it was a cold one. She sighed, life could only be better with someone sitting next to her. She stood up, tail sweeping against the ground as she got onto her feet. She was still enjoying the simplicity of the moment, but she knew that being outside all night could leave her tired in the morning, but a walk couldn't hurt. Arezu yawned silently as she walked slowly through the blue grass beneath her paws. It was such a nice night, as she had though more than once now.

Her ears lifted to hear the breeze rustle the grass around her. Her eyes wandered as she walked, at one point she noticed a butterbird, those creatures never failed to amaze her. After reaching the white waters of Isket she laid down and put her fore paws in, enjoying the tug.
Huge WIP
Armour Design:
currently on paper, needs to be scanned or put online
Artwork:
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Re: WoI Litter - Soren x Kafka - OPEN

Postby nixxiona » Tue Jun 19, 2012 12:35 pm

i am TOTALLY in love with this litter. i HAVE to enter!
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Re: WoI Litter - Soren x Kafka - OPEN

Postby nixxiona » Tue Jun 19, 2012 12:53 pm


*sigh* i have to drop out.... ;A; i am sad. i really love this pup, but i have no time. good luck, guys!




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Pup number:
3 <3
Pup's name:
Avienzo (A-Vee-En-Zo) or Avie
Personality:
Avie is a very shy male. He is very quiet and quite often seen alone. WIP!
Story/Histoy:

~How i became blind~

this would be a day i wish i dont remember.


The day i left the cave, i will forever regret. The day was new, mist and dew dripping off everything. The night had been long and cold, snuggled up with my mother and my two siblings. I had hoped to show my mother that day that i was not as weak as she thought, being the runt. my two brothers had always bullied me as a younger pup, i was helpless and blind as a bat with my eyes still closed for a while after theirs opened. my little wet nose was very cold, as a sneezed a flurry of water droplets flew up from the grass. from my right, i heard a cricket still peeping in the early morning, and from the lake behind me i heard bullfrogs beginning to croak. i began to see the reddish tinges touching the sky of sunrise. the blue grass in my field began to look like it had little embers on it as the sunrise lit up the water droplets to an orange color. i all of a sudden burst out in energy and leapt through the field, disturbing the droplets, and soaking my paws and lower belly. i ran to the edge of the field and saw the great pine seemingly climbing up into the sky, for it was so tall that the birds flew past its top. "i wonder what it would be like to fly." i said, knowing none would hear me. i watched a large bird, a hawk as my mother called it, climb the invisible air ladder up to its nest up at the tip of the great pine. it had a medium sized fish in its claws, probably from the lake nearest to our den. it was quite difficult to catch the fish that leap in and out of the river. as i watched the bird feed it's babies, i did not realize the brightness of the day. soon my mother would awake.
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as i trotted along, i remembered that i had been gone for more than half the day, and i was starving. "Mmm, the reason i came. To hunt!" i said. my mother had never allowed me to hunt by myself, she thought i was too small. sure, my brothers were larger and maybe even stronger, i could be just as good as them! i will get my armor someday! "hmm.... where should i hunt?" i said, unsure abut this. "The owl's hollow! that old hollow always seems to have squirrels in it collecting the nuts!" i said, as i ran off towards the tree with the big hole in it. as soon as i arrived, it was quite a way away from my den, it had begun to darken. "oh... i dont think i can get home in time! mother must be looking for me!" i said, slightly worried, but keeping my cool. a young wolf in the forest is never safe after dark.
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I listened closely, and pricked my ears, hearing the river roaring louder than usual, for it had just rained. as i heard this, i spotted a toad leaping through the moss.
"oh, where are you going?"
"RRRRrriBBbit"
"oh well, may i follow along?"
" RRribbit RRIBBit"
"well, i will be going along, then. it was nice seeing you!"
i trotted along the ravine, my feet padded by the moss. The roaring water sent up mist, brushing against my face. it felt so wonderful, the mist on my face, i felt calmed. i looked at the mist flying up from the bottom of the ravine, cooling my face, leaving droplets of water on the silvery blue grass. This was one of my very favorite places to be.
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The next thing i knew i had fallen asleep. ASLEEP! in the woods! ALONE! What if a kronador had come!
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Re: WoI Litter - Soren x Kafka - OPEN

Postby Mackiot » Tue Jun 19, 2012 6:54 pm

GOOD LUCK EVERY BODY!!! X3
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Re: WoI Litter - Soren x Kafka - OPEN

Postby TheSilverfeather » Tue Jun 19, 2012 9:01 pm

These are absolutely gorgeus, just saying <3 So happy that Regian became an uncle. If I'd have seen this earlier, I'd have given permissions to use him... Even though few of you would use him at all, I suspect x3

Goodluck to all entrants! Whoever gets these pups are lucky ;)
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Re: WoI Litter - Soren x Kafka - OPEN

Postby Novva » Wed Jun 20, 2012 2:11 am

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Pup number: The handsome #2

Pup's name: Hassan

Personality:
Conscientious
He cares about others around him and how they feel. Hassan always takes pride in his work or doings because he know they represent him.
Encouraging
Hassan is always hopefully he is the lite in the dimist of times. He shines his lite onto others in an encouraging way.
Humble
He knows someone will always be better than him, he humbles himself to know this and to know he isn't the best, but equal with others.
Hassan is one who likes to stick to the rules. He also is one to go by a plane, he likes to know what he's doing now and doing next. He is considerat of the ones around him, and takes their feelings as his own. He always tries his best to brighten up others days. Hassan always goes out of his way to please others, because to him pleasing others pleases himself aswell. He has a very adventurous side despite is calm nature. He always wonders off or gets into trouble because the smallest thing can spark his imagination and that's when he wonders off creating his own world as he goes. His own false reality where everything is perfect and there is no danger. His imagination only gets him into trouble but with out it he wouldn't be himself. Hassan is also a good influense on others, he always tries to stay on the right track and encourages others to do the same. Even though he is always doing what's right and being good all the time he can be somewhat of a flirt. He is very charming and loves to prove it to others. Hassan always pushes himself to new levels and tries his best in every thing he does. He tries to step out side his confort zone to expearance new things. He has a very unique personality that's all his.

Story/Histoy: the mist was heavy on my back, it swept along the damp ground. I looked ahead but all I could see where the many trees, who's leaves blew in the wind. I stayed calm I would figure it out if I stayed calm. I closed my eyes and tried to clear my head. Something touched my nose, my eyes shot open. I was hoping it would be my mom who found me and was going to take me home. But it wasn't it was a leaf that had blown from a tree and landed on my nose. The leaf was beautiful though and it gave me hope, the hope that I had finally lost after so long. This leaf who's cplots where so calming. It had a rigged red rim then a soothing yellow and then the center was green. I pawed it off my nose and watched it fall the the ground. I smile at it, I was glad I had found it it it had found me. I lifted my paw to place it on top of the leaf when a gust of wind barreled agenist my fur, the wind picked the leaf up and swirled it in the air above my head. I kept for it but it was too high. It took off and flew behind me. I ran after it, I was racing the wind. The leaf flipped in the air as it flew like a bird. It flew up bight then droped back low, but it never hit the ground. I kept my eyes focused on it the dimming sky behind it. The sky turned gray as the sun's last rays dissaperd behind the horizon. I ran after the Lear never stoping to catch my breath. My heart pounded, I breathed heavily as I truces fourth in presuit of a little leaf. The leaf finally hit the ground but it only hovered above it as it shot on. My young hund out of my mouth as I followed it. I didn't care where I was going anymore, I just ran.
The leaf refused to stop flying, I stopes for a minute, I needed to catch my breath. I hung my head as I panted heavily. When I lifted my head again I saw the leaf. Stuck in a bush. I smiled I was going to catch it after all. I stumbled over to it and leaped into the air crashing into the bush and onto something hard, and alive. It threw me from it's back. I landed on the wet ground with a thud. All the air left my lungs and I had a hard time getting it back. I wasn't sure of what I had hit until it stelae out of the bushes. It was a Kronador, I wasn't sure what to do I knew I wouldn't be able to take it down myself and well I was trapped. I reviewed my options I could try and fight it but I might get killed. I could try to run. Oh why did I wonder off? Well I was going to try and run, it was my best option. I stood and backed away slowly. The Kronador wasn't happy, I had already bothered him by landing on him and maybe waking him from a nap or something. I turned quickly and bolted. He stood there for a minute then charged after me. My heart raced but not because I was running but because if fear for my own life. My eyes flickered and shot back and forth for a distraction or a sharp turn. The Kronador was faster than me though and older and stronger. When I turned my head to see how close he was he was in the air coming down on he. My eyes widened and I let out a squeel, then I howled hoping someone would hear me. But I was all alone, he hit me with great force and pinned me to the ground with his weight. His eyes glare at me, I trembled with fear under his great body. He growled at m
e his shark claws dug into my shoulder. I felt my warm blood drip down my shoulder. I closed my eyes so I wouldn't have to see him kill me. I felt a strong force rip him from me, then a deep voice "run!" and I did I turned and ran. That warrior just saved my life. I wasn't sure who he was but he was my hero. I saw another warrior run past me then my dad. He stopes in fri t of me and muzzled me.
"I am so glad we found you." he said I smiled unsure of what to say." are you alright?" he asked me. I nodded to shakn up to speak. "come." he said and I nodded once more then followed my father. We walked slowly, my legs shook as I walked. Soon I could see our den I wanted to see my brother and sister, and my mom
I ran ahead of my dad and to the den. I ran inside and through a few tunnels to where my family was. I walked and saw my siblings sleeping and my mother awake. She stared at me then stood up. "I thought I would never see you a again! Never do that to me again I love you to much to loose you."
I smiled "dad and some others saved me." I said and she smiled and muzzled me. I laid down with by brother and sister. I was exhausted! I closed my eyes. I felt a soft lick on my head and I opened one iPod my eyes to see my father standing above me.
"I love you." he said and smiled
"I know." I smiled " I love you too."

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