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Re: Chubby Teddy Bear

Postby The Great ME! » Sat Jul 28, 2012 9:59 am

Looks pretty good though the face and the ear on the left side is kind of lopsided, though if the face was changed up a bit to match the angle then you could make it look like his head is slightly turned and it would look much better. It could be easily fixed simply by moving the spot where the eyes are so that the one on the left is a little lower and the one on the right is slightly higher than the other :)

Other than that t looks great and the fur detail is relatively nice.

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Re: Chubby Teddy Bear

Postby da .pimp. is here » Sat Jul 28, 2012 10:12 am

irkMasterPsyKou wrote:Looks pretty good though the face and the ear on the left side is kind of lopsided, though if the face was changed up a bit to match the angle then you could make it look like his head is slightly turned and it would look much better. It could be easily fixed simply by moving the spot where the eyes are so that the one on the left is a little lower and the one on the right is slightly higher than the other :)

Other than that t looks great and the fur detail is relatively nice.


thanks for the feedback, greatly appreciated :3
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