Forum rules
Reminder: Copying another person's art without permission to reproduce their work is a form of art-theft!

Click here to see the full Art Rules!
Need help using the Oekaki? Check out this Guide to the Oekaki!

Re: Interest Check?

Postby Ebony Stardust » Fri May 20, 2022 3:18 am

४ Loki Laufeyson ४ wrote:-snip-
I see what you guys mean now that I re-look over them so I will have to decide what details to change... Any ideas on what I should change?


I'd say changing the head shape/ facial features would help! Maybe the body's proportions or build, as well?
Image
-Hello! You may call me Ebony
-I am a casual artist
-I am always open to trades (my trade thread)
-Christian faith, struggling but not unbelieving




Need Clicks: ImageImageImageImage
Status: Tired, and very fond of someone
Song in my Head: Pain - Three Days Grace
User avatar
Ebony Stardust
 
Posts: 4950
Joined: Sun Apr 11, 2021 2:57 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Interest Check?

Postby Mr.Sifaka » Fri May 20, 2022 10:33 am

same as darkstorm, but also the long neck with the floppy ears and such
the body is also pretty similar

Image

Image

Image

Image Image Image
Image
User avatar
Mr.Sifaka
 
Posts: 4089
Joined: Wed Mar 24, 2021 2:13 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Interest Check?

Postby solos » Fri May 20, 2022 1:21 pm

honestly to me, the entire thing looks very very similar/a copy of chicoons minus the flame n plus some horns n a halo aswell as floppy ears instead of wings ;; from the face structure to the long neck to a body type [even the style this was drawn in] looks extremely close to buzz aesthetic’s species

obviously someone cant copyright a body type or somethn like that but theres too many similarities to just overlook this
Image

solos | she/they | ✸--
hi hi :D -!! 1# mark lee enjoyer
go n follow my best friend-!! <3
discord; solos. | th purge ‶ ☼ ″
shop | boyf | goos | cats | - © -
User avatar
solos
 
Posts: 7775
Joined: Mon Apr 17, 2017 4:42 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Interest Check?

Postby sweathie » Fri May 20, 2022 3:29 pm

considering that this design, if made into a finished character, could be approved as an edited chicoon, and backed up by the other responses here, this is way too close to a chicoon for comfort. there are a lot of changes that need to be done to the fundamental concept; various things can be changed in order to distance the two from each other, including body anatomy, head shape, nose shape, tail anatomy, hands, tuft placement, ear placement, neck anatomy, and fangs, however you would need to change multiple things combined rather than just one specific thing.

considering that you intend this species to be partially aquatic, it might be good to consider some of the following traits:
- webbed feet
- higher body mass
- sleeker fur
- more aerodynamic body shape
- catfish whiskers
- nictitating membranes
- shorter/chubbier neck
- paddle tail

you might want to look at otters, beavers, platypuses, manatees, dolphins, capybaras, and muskrats for inspiration!
Image
xlxImagexxxxxImagexxxxxImage
sweathie / michael
⍢ sweathie on everything ⍢
he/him | graduate student
my only discord is sweathie
xxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxImage Image
User avatar
sweathie
 
Posts: 10572
Joined: Mon Feb 09, 2015 4:03 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Interest Check?

Postby bug » Fri May 20, 2022 3:31 pm

I agree with everyone above so I am gonna make some changes like:
Adding fins, webbed feet, shortening of the neck/length of body/length of legs, changing the tail to be finned as well, changing the head shape to be less boxedr, changing the nose type, and turning the ears into more watery trait styled ears (like a small water rodents), and making smaller edits to look less like a chicoon like sleeker fur, heavier body weight and some whiskers like sweathie suggested.

But I want to thank everyone for the help that everyone has shared :)
Image
Image
User avatar
bug
 
Posts: 8694
Joined: Tue Oct 05, 2021 11:53 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: Amazonbot [Bot], Wifflebee and 30 guests