~AlwaysLoveLuna~ wrote:Amazing!!! congrats on feature!!!!!!!
redwolf123 wrote:I really like this. The colors are very vibrant.
You did amazing. Congratulations on your feature!
You deserve it.
randomsketches wrote:➳ so pretty! congrats on the feature!
caranecat ⚓ wrote:blueshywolf124 wrote:caranecat ⚓ wrote:i have a few questions ;v;
if shes a unicorn and it appears that shes using her horn to carry the sword,
then why is the sword in the mouth??
secondly, the handle stopper, (i dont really know how to call it) is stabbing
into her mouth ;v;
thirdly, where is her other eye??
great art tho!!
Well, with the "handle stopper thingy", it's supposed to just be on the other side of her face, but when its tilted that much, the sword itself goes out of frame so i couldn't tilt it right. But, to accommodate that, i went back and made the handle a little shorter so even if it is in her mouth, it wouldn't be choking her or anything XD
Her eye is supposed to be hidden behind her bangs, so i brought them down a little bit more so it is more clearly hidden.
As with her holding the sword with her magic, think of it as she was just holding it in her mouth cuz she wasn't using it yet, but now she's got a grip on it with her magic as she is preparing to sword fight but the fight hasn't actually started yet. She's getting ready but is waiting for her opponent to make their first move.
Thank you for your constructive criticism ^u^ I know there is plenty i could improve on this piece, i just don't know what
I wasn't all that pleased with this piece so I'm actually quite surprised it turned out to be my first feature XDaah, the edits are quite nice, and i have not yet met someone with quite a light heart
to criticism!! the piece is wonderful either way and i think you can go far ;v;
cupcakess wrote:Omg its such good art!!! Beautiful!
gatesy3 wrote:Beautiful art!!!
Stargazing wrote:Looking through your gallery; omifudginggoodnesswhyisthisyourfirstfeature
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