[vanerfreak]

Okay, So i've been stalling on this and Note; Its my opinion and its not the super-mega-i-am-right-you-are-wrong opinion of doom, but you asked for help^^

Yes, I had to doodle on it, thats how i roll.
http://oi46.tinypic.com/2rwbaip.jpg

Hope it helps and remember, you don't have to change it

THE HOOVES: I know that how she is turning her body/head/neck/cupcake can make her feet go that way but it makes it look incorrect. Pigeon-toed, actually. Though horses can have pigeon-hooves, hers don't match the rear. that was the biggest thing i noticed other than the head.

PS: ♥pretty rump♥
PPS: I hope you do well!

[BayloneRose]

Thank u so much Vanner those hooves have been giving me H E double hocky sticks!
I will edit her ASAP

[vanerfreak]

Welcome Bay!

[BlueFjord]

WOW!!!! I wish I could draw half that good!!!!! Amazing job!!!

[quitting¿]

Hey Bay!
Just a few things....
On her front hooves she looks...Bent? xP
Her barrel is a tad big along with her rump....I would give more definition to her neck as well.
I am a REAL horse judge now!!HORRAYYYY I got my certificate!!So I know this stuffz....Thanks Bay I wish you good luck!!Hope I'm not to late...

[BayloneRose]

Hey Bay!
Just a few things....
On her front hooves she looks...Bent? xP
Her barrel is a tad big along with her rump....I would give more definition to her neck as well.
I am a REAL horse judge now!!HORRAYYYY I got my certificate!!So I know this stuffz....Thanks Bay I wish you good luck!!Hope I'm not to late...

I already entered Lead Mare but I used a different drawing for her halter entry and yeah I am no good at hooves

super good! maybe try making its chest a bit flatter and its stomach skinnier...?

a lot of people have been telling me that she is too fat but the thing is is that she is a broodmare who has thrown at lest 10 foals XD