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Stay Strong

Postby ss685 » Sat Jun 04, 2011 2:23 am

*edit: she is in stable condition thank goodness! i thought she wasn't going to make it. now that i am in a better mood please feel free to critique my poem(nicely) i know its not very good. it was more of a vent
a little backround info first. my cousin was in a bad car accident last night. she was flown to hospital so its bad. thats all i know. nothing else :cry: :cry: i'm just having a rough day and needed to let a little out before two final tests in school. Stay strong Britt! :cry:
i know it will be hard
but please be ok
i know your hurting for more reasons than this
but were always here for you
i know your in real bad shape
but i'll pray for you every night
i know you feel alone
but i'll be there tomorrw
i know i want to be there now
but i can't
i know this is hard
oh, i know. i know
you've just gotta stay strong cuz!
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