ღ This is the place you can write me a short story or a poem and win a great prize! ღ
To start off, I'm Skyhawk! And I love to write,
but unfortunately I am getting writers block at the
moment and am in need of a little hand! Of course, at the end of this it depends entirely on what the author does or doesn't mind me doing! Usually, I get lots of inspiration from seeing and reading stories so this is a big help, but if the person wants to collaborate our ideas together then they can easily give me permission to use the story.
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The winner and the feedback
12D3 you won! Congratulations to everyone who participated, you were all brilliant! I had such a tough time marking them all and deciding a winner. You should all be proud of yourselves. If all the writing was put together it would be the best story ever! Individual feedback will be uploaded below soon!
Individual feedback
KissMeImIrish:
- I like the underworld theme and the speech you have put in! For an improvement you could extend the story and elaborate more on the characters - 4.5/10
hollyglow:
- I like the plot and I would love to read the whole story to see how it progresses from here. I love how you repeated the phrase, 'he has hair like the earth and eyes like the sea', I thought that was beautiful - 7.5/10.
SilentMelody:
- Your story was very cute and sweet. I would be interested to see if this would become a story or simple just stay a mysterious prologue? - 7/10
NellaElla:
- This caught my attention; it really makes me want to read on and find out what advice his sister gives him! Does he love that girl or not? - 7.5/10
Just Lucky ~ xx:
- I was tempted to crown this one as second! The concept of a crack forming in a wall after someone turns away sounds wicked to say it bluntly! The use of short and long sentences really builds tension - 8.5/10
Tak.:
- This one made me laugh, I like the speech and especially the mysterious earrings! I would like to find out more about them! - 6.5/10
12D3:
- I absolutely loved your story! I could relate and empathise to how the girl was feeling throughout the whole of it! I would really love to work with you on this story and see what you would do with it. The last line seemed magical and I was stuck to the story like glue. I could hardly keep my eyes off it. - 10/10
Ribbon pelt:
- This was pretty cute, I like the rhymes, they are very inventive - 5/10
sleepwalking:
- This story got me interested! I would happily place this joint second as well! I loved the speech, I would so like to see the rest of the story, if you have or are going to write it. Feel free to message me! - 8.5/10
kaplantai:
- Your poem was quite moving actually. I liked the last lines the most because I felt like it was straight out of a fairy tale! Keep writing poems and I would like to work with you in the future to see more of your work - 8/10
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Rules:
- ● End date: 31st March 2017! - Extended to 30th April because I am away.
● The story can be as long or as short as you wish!
● You can either enter your story through PM or post it on here!
● Theme: Romance and/or mystery!
(I am obsessed with Twilight - a vampire series - at the moment so any references to it are cool but not needed!)
● Try and keep the story original and from you!
● If you have any questions, feel free to ask me via message!
Prize:
Frequently Asked Questions:
Is it ok to make the romance based upon a gay couple?
I am not trying to restrict anyone if they have great ideas based on gay couples so I say go ahead! No homophobic vibes here
What are your criteria? For example, creativity, emotion
I am mostly looking for a piece of writing that makes me gasp and silently smile! In another way, I mean originality is key for this one as I don't really have many preferences on the type of stories I like apart from genre! Make it yours and make it special
Does it have to be a tragic ending or a happy ending or open?
It is really and completely up to you! As I have already said, basically anything goes! I love to look and see new styles of writing so whether it is tragic, happy or anything else just try to pack it with amazing sentences, word types and a great plot!
