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ahoy by bug.gie

Artist bug.gie [gallery]
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ahoy

Postby bug.gie » Wed Jul 11, 2018 4:21 am

more background stuff yeet
again any criticism is very much so accepted
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Re: ahoy

Postby ~Teya~ » Wed Jul 11, 2018 5:28 am

Hello! This is quite nice. I like the calm atmosphere is has. One criticism I could give though, is the water is a bit "stiff". Meaning it doesn't appear to be really moving or have any life in it, which is the funnest part of drawing water in my opinion! c: Creating ripples, waves, etc, is important. Also, moonlight reflecting off water, when done right, looks really beautiful. So I'd add that too.
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Re: ahoy

Postby DoomyPanda » Fri Jul 13, 2018 2:40 pm

I love the atmosphere!
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