View topic - Havana {Criticism Please?}

My gallery · by **greyheartdarkness** » Wed Oct 25, 2017 3:20 pm

tEaVaNa

My gallery · by **~Teya~** » Wed Oct 25, 2017 4:14 pm

Oo, I really like it!

There is something elegant about her; but I really think it would be more emphasized if her eyes were more ''sexy", football / almond shaped. Like this, for example:
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I think I'd add a lot. And on the right side, I'd add a but more hair on the head to make it look fuller.

My gallery · by **greyheartdarkness** » Thu Oct 26, 2017 10:39 am

~Teya~ wrote:Oo, I really like it! There is something elegant about her; but I really think it would be more emphasized if her eyes were more ''sexy", football / almond shaped. Like this, for example:
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click
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I think I'd add a lot. And on the right side, I'd add a but more hair on the head to make it look fuller.

the eyes i was trying to get a bewildered look :lol:

but thanks for the critique, I do agree she should have more hair on the other side !! Thanks so much!

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