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by whoopsydaizy » Sun Jul 29, 2012 5:09 am
Kiki.Mirage wrote:Imperishable wrote:Immortality! a deal with the devil


I'm not religous, (im agnostic) and this is not meant to offend. I just thought it'd be an interesting idea to try and portray.
Oh, I love this one. <3 It's a neat idea. c: Bittersweet.
Thank you ^^ I'm glad people like it, c:
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by Blitz Sykes » Sun Jul 29, 2012 5:10 am
Kiki.Mirage wrote:Imperishable wrote:Immortality! a deal with the devil


"I'd like to live forever." A sweet girl once asked me,
Her face lit up like a star as I told her I could grant this,
she told me how she was in despair and only internal life
would allow her to breath freely.
She was in desperation, and I was her cure. To be with me,
she would be immortal. "You're making a deal with the devil."
My voice said in warning as she spoke, voice chirping,
"But you're not the devil, you're a kind man with a heavy
heart."
She was innocent with no fault that I could abuse, to make
her see. But she was well aware and still decided on
Immortality. She will have time to decide, this process takes
much time.
Every night for a year should would visit me, summon me,
call me, and say her mind is still strong and set. After a
while, I felt a tugging feeling, I was growing quite fond of
girl. Yet she had nothing to offer but company, but it was
obvious something was wrong.
The night when her wish would be fulfilled, she didn't come.
The day after, I found her body, dead. An angel approached
me by her grave, scoffing, "I've saved another soul." When in
reality, this angel saved nothing, and she was in the place
'Good' souls go. Yet, I could feel her despair, and her tears
fell. The was heavy that night.
She didn't want immortality, she wanted me. And so did I.
I'm not religous, (im agnostic) and this is not meant to offend. I just thought it'd be an interesting idea to try and portray.
Oh, I love this one. <3 It's a neat idea. c: Bittersweet.
i love this!!! =^.^=
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by micah » Sun Jul 29, 2012 5:34 am


feathers trickled like blood from an open wound,
they drifted through the air like a wind chime’s cry;
they fell and fell until they kissed the ground,
hoping never to be found.
wings spread like awakening eyes,
ready to test themselves, ready to drive;
they danced and danced until the sky wept,
in a cage they never hoped to be kept.
notes serenaded the air, they whipped hair,
and she sat down again, drawing her legs in close;
for she had just been named comatose.
she knew not where she was,
she knew not why her skin was gone,
but she knew the birds were never wrong,
so she followed them, she followed them home.
{
let it never be said that they travel too fast or too slow,
for they've got to get these children back safe
as no longer can they grow}
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by whoopsydaizy » Sun Jul 29, 2012 6:37 am
Blitz Sykes wrote:Kiki.Mirage wrote:Imperishable wrote:Immortality! a deal with the devil


"I'd like to live forever." A sweet girl once asked me,
Her face lit up like a star as I told her I could grant this,
she told me how she was in despair and only internal life
would allow her to breath freely.
She was in desperation, and I was her cure. To be with me,
she would be immortal. "You're making a deal with the devil."
My voice said in warning as she spoke, voice chirping,
"But you're not the devil, you're a kind man with a heavy
heart."
She was innocent with no fault that I could abuse, to make
her see. But she was well aware and still decided on
Immortality. She will have time to decide, this process takes
much time.
Every night for a year should would visit me, summon me,
call me, and say her mind is still strong and set. After a
while, I felt a tugging feeling, I was growing quite fond of
girl. Yet she had nothing to offer but company, but it was
obvious something was wrong.
The night when her wish would be fulfilled, she didn't come.
The day after, I found her body, dead. An angel approached
me by her grave, scoffing, "I've saved another soul." When in
reality, this angel saved nothing, and she was in the place
'Good' souls go. Yet, I could feel her despair, and her tears
fell. The was heavy that night.
She didn't want immortality, she wanted me. And so did I.
I'm not religous, (im agnostic) and this is not meant to offend. I just thought it'd be an interesting idea to try and portray.
Oh, I love this one. <3 It's a neat idea. c: Bittersweet.
i love this!!! =^.^=
Thank you ^^
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by Lovely Dreamer » Sun Jul 29, 2012 7:41 am
Part One and Two
x
Anna x
Charlie
x

Anna the Merdog x Charlie the Sharkdog
Part Three(I'm switching to past tense to tell the story, so don't be confused.)
I slipped out the gates late at night, when all the other merdogs were at the feast. Little Hermes followed behind me, begging me not to go. "Haven't you ever heard of Boneo and Chewiette?" he asked me nervously. "You're just like them! You'll end up the same, Anna." ((/literature ref)) I refused to listen to him, because I knew this was different. We had known each other forever, unlike the characters in the play. I had a locket that Charlie gave me when I was just a pup hanging around my neck. Recently, I hadn't taken it off at all, fearing it'd be confiscated.
"Anna! Anna, I got you a present!" Yells Charlie. I look at him, confused, and he smiles. "Just open it, Anna." So I open the small yellow and green box he places before me.
"It's marvelous!" I cry as I pull out the locket and slip it over my head. Grinning, he opens it to reveal a picture of me in one side and a picture of him on the other.
"Happy belated birthday, Anna."
Every year after that, he replaced the pictures in my locket with new ones. I never got the photos for this year.So, yeah, just a little transition into the next part of the story. What do you think?
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by mr.kingrichard » Sun Jul 29, 2012 8:08 am

&


The Hunter and Her Wife
Never before was there a story
like that of the Hunter and Her Wife
who met once upon a September day
both going somewhere the same.
[The Hunter and Her Wife, stanza one]
.....It was supposed to be just a normal hunting trip for the girl. She'd done it hundreds of times before, gone out with only her bow and arrow, slung over her shoulder with her arrows on her back. She would go out and leave for hours at a time, it's not like anyone would miss her; she lived alone, after all. She'd split from her family years ago, growing tired of their constant henpecking and bothersome “advice” they tried to give her. No, she would not wear dresses or go to fancy parties, she would wear pants and go hunting. She'd bothered with them no more after she left. She put that life far behind her and became immersed in her own interests; hunting, reading, writing novels, and simply being herself without worry of being scolded or critiqued.
.....Tucking a strand of her flaming, burnt orange colored hair behind her ear, Liz stiffened at the sounds of something moving close to her. It sounded big. Excited, Liz turned, quickly preparing her bow with the arrow, before she stopped. This was no animal, she determined, after hearing sniffles and crying coming from the direction she'd heard the noise in. Curiously, she moved through the bushes, her eyes landing on the person that was sitting on a log.
.....It was a girl, and she judged that she was about her age from where she stood. The girl had long, waist-length blue-teal hair, pale skin, and had her hands up by her face, crying. She could see that one of her ankles was bleeding, and the dress she was wearing was torn slightly. Walking over to her, Liz put a hand on the girl's shoulder. Instinctively, the other tried to swat her away, and Liz took her hand, noticing that it too was scratched and bleeding. She looked like she'd run into some thistles or something while she was running.
.....“Are you okay?” She muttered, and the girl looked up at her, revealing startling blue eyes that were almost as vibrant as her hair. She took a shaky breath, before shaking her head.
.....“I'm sorry, I thought you were my sister,” she apologized, gently removing her hand from Liz's grasp. “I didn't mean to trespass here, I was running and I didn't quite know where I was going...I ran through a rosebush and fell down a hill. I think my ankle is twisted and I can barely breathe with this damn corset...”
Liz listened to the girl's story with interest, and without any further words, she picked her up, holding her bridal style in her arms. “That's alright, you're fine. How about I take you home? I have some clothes that might fit you, and that ankle and your hand needs tending to.” A bright red color flushed the other girl's cheeks, and she nodded.
.....“That would be nice.”
[To be continued. Written while listening to
Rockstar (Nickelback),
Angels (Within Temptation), and
So Contagious (Acceptance)]
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by vixiebun » Sun Jul 29, 2012 8:35 am
Lovely Dreamer wrote:Part One and Two
x
Anna x
Charlie
x

Anna the Merdog x Charlie the Sharkdog
Part Three(I'm switching to past tense to tell the story, so don't be confused.)
I slipped out the gates late at night, when all the other merdogs were at the feast. Little Hermes followed behind me, begging me not to go. "Haven't you ever heard of Boneo and Chewiette?" he asked me nervously. "You're just like them! You'll end up the same, Anna." ((/literature ref)) I refused to listen to him, because I knew this was different. We had known each other forever, unlike the characters in the play. I had a locket that Charlie gave me when I was just a pup hanging around my neck. Recently, I hadn't taken it off at all, fearing it'd be confiscated.
"Anna! Anna, I got you a present!" Yells Charlie. I look at him, confused, and he smiles. "Just open it, Anna." So I open the small yellow and green box he places before me.
"It's marvelous!" I cry as I pull out the locket and slip it over my head. Grinning, he opens it to reveal a picture of me in one side and a picture of him on the other.
"Happy belated birthday, Anna."
Every year after that, he replaced the pictures in my locket with new ones. I never got the photos for this year.So, yeah, just a little transition into the next part of the story. What do you think?
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