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Re: Chicoons (2.0) Archive

Postby cinerious » Mon Jan 24, 2022 11:24 am

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    Link to Original Chicoon: Right
    Link to Transfer: Transfer
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Re: Chicoons (2.0) Archive

Postby 13core » Mon Jan 24, 2022 11:34 am

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Re: Chicoons (2.0) Archive

Postby KandieFloofsterLoch » Mon Jan 24, 2022 12:45 pm

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Original Artist (if not Self):* Loxosceles
Transfer Artist (if not Self):* Self!!
Link to Original Chicoon: (Row 2 #7) Forum/viewtopic.php?t=4686591
Link to Transfer: Forum/viewtopic.php?f=79&t=4687117
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Re: Chicoons (2.0) Archive

Postby sweathie » Mon Jan 24, 2022 2:35 pm

approved
GraveBlues
Loxosceles (all but #2)
Buzz Aesthetic
Mic
Buzz Aesthetic
koegami
-roadkill-69-
KandieFloofsterLoch

approved with conditions
Ottercola
condition: trait listed should be "fang edit", not "teeth edit"

denied
wormies
reason: blue on front legs goes down further + pink dots overlap
Mister Hollow
reason: tail stripes need to be unbroken to count. please check this guide for clarity. there should also be an additional red stripe on this chicoon's tail.
Loxosceles (#2)
reason: missing tail stripes. tail edit is also uncommon (listed as common on post).
Purple Umbreon
reason: both chicoons have been given additional tail stripes.
also: the original artist made a mistake on whisp. this chicoon, because it is uncommon, should only have 2 or 3 tail stripes, not 5 like in the original design. you are free to fix the tail stripes to address this in any way you see fit.
enby
reason: remove drip on the chicoon's tongue; this implies "slime/goop" which is a rare trait. the cheek marking also radiates from the eye and is not a circle.
slinky3000
reason: added additional tail stripes. back leg markings start too high on the leg.
Loxosceles
reason: chicoon is clearly Bruno from the movie Encanto. traits signifying this: name, rat companion, color palette, hair style/textures, eye edit, eye bags, hourglass marking on flank and wing, facial hair. multiple traits need to be changed together in order to distance this character from its inspiration.
sweathie diagnostic: the plague doctor stuff is completely in the clear. i recommend leaning into it with the design.
woofer-moosh
reason: transfer itself is completely fine. unfortunately, the original artist made a mistake. this chicoon, because it is uncommon (due to dual flame color trait), should only have 2 or 3 tail stripes, not 4 like in the original design. you are free to fix the tail stripes to address this in any way you see fit.
Cinerious
reason: tail stripes are not accurate to original design. additional blue and yellow stripe need to be added at the base of the tail. yellow connects with the back.
13core
reason: remove eyelashes, this is a common trait. change tongue shape; chicoon tongues are shaped more like frog tongues, and drawing it in the way that you have implies a tongue edit (common). alternatively, you can buy two edit potions from the shop and get your chicoon approved as-is.

archive will be updated shortly. if you have been denied, you will need to resubmit when you have made the appropriate changes.
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Re: Chicoons (2.0) Archive

Postby cecro » Mon Jan 24, 2022 2:46 pm

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Username and User ID: wormies + 1018618
Original Artist (if not Self):* Loxosceles
Link to Original Chicoon: row 2, #2
Link to Transfer: woimwoimwoimw

fixed !! should be ok now 👍
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Re: Chicoons (2.0) Archive

Postby sweathie » Mon Jan 24, 2022 2:56 pm

wormies wrote:
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Link to Original Chicoon: row 2, #2
Link to Transfer: woimwoimwoimw

fixed !! should be ok now 👍

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Re: Chicoons (2.0) Archive

Postby Loxosceles » Mon Jan 24, 2022 3:28 pm

Loxosceles wrote:Using a MYO (On-Oekaki)
Username and User ID: Loxosceles 944066
Artist of Chicoon (if not Self): me <3
Link to Chicoon: no accessories, accessories
Edits on Chicoon:
    colored pupil [nr]
    height [short] [nr]
    expression [nr]
    companion [ratt] [nr]
    minor tail tuft edit [c]
    ear edits [c]
    eye style edit [c]
    "fangs" edit [c]
    tufts [c]
    thicker eyebrow spots [c]
    minor fur edits [uc]
    glowing spots/patches [uc]
    minor wing edits [uc]
    unmatching eyes/fire [uc]
    mane [r]
    powers/abilities [r]
Rarity of Chicoon: Rare
Have you Added any Items? If so, please list them: Way too fluffy scarf, a bit better edit potion
Which MYO are you using?: from koegami


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Re: Chicoons (2.0) Archive

Postby sweathie » Mon Jan 24, 2022 3:29 pm

Loxosceles wrote:
Loxosceles wrote:Using a MYO (On-Oekaki)
Username and User ID: Loxosceles 944066
Artist of Chicoon (if not Self): me <3
Link to Chicoon: no accessories, accessories
Edits on Chicoon:
    colored pupil [nr]
    height [short] [nr]
    expression [nr]
    companion [ratt] [nr]
    minor tail tuft edit [c]
    ear edits [c]
    eye style edit [c]
    "fangs" edit [c]
    tufts [c]
    thicker eyebrow spots [c]
    minor fur edits [uc]
    glowing spots/patches [uc]
    minor wing edits [uc]
    unmatching eyes/fire [uc]
    mane [r]
    powers/abilities [r]
Rarity of Chicoon: Rare
Have you Added any Items? If so, please list them: Way too fluffy scarf, a bit better edit potion
Which MYO are you using?: from koegami


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Re: Chicoons (2.0) Archive

Postby slinky3000 » Mon Jan 24, 2022 3:31 pm

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Original Artist (if not Self):https://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=944066 (I forgot how to put the link with words on it? idk-)
Transfer Artist (if not Self):me
Link to Original Chicoon:https://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?t=4686591mine is on row 6 at the end
Link to Transfer:https://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=79&t=4687468
Have you Added any Items? If so, please list them:nope it don't have any items on this chicoon
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Re: Chicoons (2.0) Archive

Postby Tyrant001 » Mon Jan 24, 2022 3:47 pm

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Original Artist (if not Self):* Loxosceles
Transfer Artist (if not Self):* GraveBlues
Link to Original Chicoon: Link
Link to Transfer: Link
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