When A Brave Soldier Dies *Song, 200+ views on Youtube*

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When A Brave Soldier Dies *Song, 200+ views on Youtube*

Postby Slytherin'sGirl » Sat Sep 10, 2011 1:39 pm

When A Brave Soldier Dies
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When a brave soldier dies,
A new poppy begins to rise.
Tear drops rain down from the sky,
the mourning doves begin to fly.
The song of the bird,
is barely heard,
over the panicking animal herd.
Trenches were dug,
they were crawling with bugs,
during the dreadful war.

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When a brave soldier dies,
his injured spirit flies,
to the land of peace,
Heaven.
Hearts are broken,
when the body is found in the bracken.

(Two second pause.)

Soldier's wounds will never heal,
not one injury will seal,
during the dreadful war.

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When a brave soldier dies,
the pain in families increase in size.
The spirits put the torch,
on my front porch.
They hoped it would be me,
who saved my country.
But now I am one of them,
looking down from Heaven.
I came from before,
from the dreadful war.
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This was for Remembrance Day and my class and teacher said that it was really good so I turned the poem into a son and posted it and then it got super popular. I still can't believe it. :what:
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Re: When A Brave Soldier Dies *Song, 200+ views on Youtube*

Postby Lunar Lullabies » Sun Sep 11, 2011 1:23 pm

Wow, this is really good. There's so much emotion in it. </3
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Re: When A Brave Soldier Dies *Song, 200+ views on Youtube*

Postby Slytherin'sGirl » Sun Sep 11, 2011 1:48 pm

You found it? What do you do, stalk my posts? XD jk but yeah, we had a substitute the day we put it on Word and I showed her so that I could print it and she asked me if I wrote it myself and I said yes and she had the O.O face on.
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Postby Lunar Lullabies » Mon Sep 12, 2011 2:36 am

Why, yes, I do stalk your posts. ;D And that's awesome, congrats. *really wants to find this on YouTube* XD
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