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dustedmoon - - rise 300 tryout

Postby Sunlitsecrets » Mon Mar 12, 2018 9:14 am

my tryout for cat 300!
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table of contents
  • intoduction
  • basic information
  • prologue
---Story---
[Prologue Here]
[Chapter 1 Here]
[Epilogue Here]
---Story---

okay here we go
work in progress

- minimun 100 words per chapter, max 700

notes -
- formerly Dust
- with a traveling circus, best friends with three other cats (Beaver, Quentin, and Orion)
- but he, Quentin and Beaver ran away when a new twoleg took over ownership of the circus and decided that the cats needed to go. The twoleg caught and killed Orion and the others ran for it, out of the circus tents and away into the city.
- they wandered, wondering what to do, where to go, until they met a gang of street cats. joined at first, things were going well, but then Dust and Quentin sees the leader and the main cats of the group chasing out a smaller group for no reason other than for a show of power.
- when they confront the group about it, the leader tells them to leave or die. So they run away again, tired and alone, into the forest.
- then they run into Wildstar and Missingsky.
- agree to join the new clan, though suspicious
- Dust becomes Dustedmoon, Beaver chose the name Beaverfang, and Quentin chose Duskdreamer.
(Beaverfang and Duskdreamer are cats that will become real later, they're not actually in my Clan yet)
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basic info + summary

Postby Sunlitsecrets » Mon Mar 12, 2018 9:15 am

Username: Sunlitsecrets
Cat Name: Dustedmoon
Clan: FrontierClan
Rank: Voyager (warrior)
Gender: male
Age: 42 moons

book summary;;

Dust is a circus cat. He lives in the shadows of the tents and lives off of the mice that sneak inside. But then the circus changes ownership, and the stray cats dwelling there face a choice: leave for a perilous journey, or risk death by the new human’s hands.
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prologue

Postby Sunlitsecrets » Mon Mar 12, 2018 4:04 pm

”There’s a change coming. I can feel it.”

Dust climbs to the top of the old, patterned tent. It’s become a tradition for him to stand atop the red-and-white structure, look out at the land surrounding him, and ponder the future. The view always changes, but the tent stays the same.
. Today, however, is different. Instead of quiet contemplation, he’s scared. Apprehensive. Really more had been going around the circus animals all week that a new human was in town, one who was aiming to take over. The new fellow had been seen in many deep conversations with the current leader - a short, chubby fellow with a soft spot for the cats. Dust liked him.
. He was not too sure he liked the new human. The other animals, no matter what happened, belonged in the circus. Dust and the other stray cats did not. The kind human was willing to let them stay, would this one be as friendly?

Dust cared about this, not just for himself, but for the other three - his friends, practically family. If bad stuff happened and he lost one of them, what would he do? It was a question he never wanted to have to answer.
. After a few long minutes of silence, he sighed. "I don't like this," Dust said out loud, as he had grown used to doing. His tail was flicking back and forth and his eyes narrowed as he frowned at the horizon. There was uncertainty ahead of him.
. Pity that's exactly the kind of thing he hated.
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chapter 1.

Postby Sunlitsecrets » Tue Mar 13, 2018 6:56 am

"Welcome, one and all, to the Maestro's Magnificent Traveling Circus!"

The human was giving the announcement again - he was standing in he center of the tent's huge circle and shouting at the other twolegs sitting around the edge. Dust had found this strange at first, but by now? Well, it was just routine.
. "Hey, Dusty!" Orion said, padding up from behind his friend. The dark tabby sat down, tail curling around his paws. "Quentin reckons he's found the nicest humans in the crowd this time 'round. Beaver wants nothing ta do with them, but hey! Means more attention for the rest of us, am I right?"
. Dust turned to look at the smaller cat, a smile already forming on his face. "Sure, Ori, sure. Speaking of Quentin, though... where is he?"
. Orion pointed one paw towards the other end of the tent. "That a-ways." Dust looked, and sure enough, there was the youngest of the four, purring in the lap of a young human. She was petting his fur as the show continued on.
. "Well that looks good to me! Come on, let's go get some food out of the humans," Dust said. It was a young one, the young ones always gave them food. After so many years doing this, he had it down to a science.

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A short time after the show had ended and most of the circus animals were back in the ship that was used to travel from town to town, the strays snuck below deck, into the lowest floor where the performance animals resided. The horses, seals, two tigers... and above all, the mighty lion.
. "Say hey there, lads! How's it all going?" Dust said as he leaped down from the rafters, the other three jumping down as well. This was another tradition - every night, Dust and the others would stop by for a group meeting. A kind of council, as it were.
. The eldest horse whinnied and stomped his hooves. "Not good. The new one is still here, and it seems like he's getting closer to a deal every day. And if something really happens... I dread the change that might come."
. No one had a name for the new human, and yet no matter how many things they called him, everyone knew who it was. Beaver hissed to Dust's left. "If he dares try to do anything tricky, I'll claw his face off!"
. "You sure that's the best thing to be doing?" The great lion, the king of them all, spoke quietly from the back of the room. Even though he was barely audible, everyone listened, silent as they waited to hear what he had to say. "Listen, if we show any anger towards the new one, we don't know what he will do to us in return. Why not wait, watch, and listen? That's exactly the kind of thing the street cats could do. We're stuck down here. You four aren't."
. Quentin gasped in horror. "You mean - spy - spy on them?" Ah, that was Quentin. Always nervous.
. "Well, come on! Don't you want to know what's going on?" Dust asked, bumping his friend's shoulder teasingly.
. "Find out! Find out! Arf! Arf!" the seals chorused.
. Dust merely ignored the youngest cat's look of terror. He smirked, a false show of confidence, and said, "Don't you worry, elder lion. We'll be back 'afore you can realize we're gone."
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chapter 2.

Postby Sunlitsecrets » Wed Mar 14, 2018 5:52 am

They split up to cover more ground. Dust heads up to the top deck... turns out the circus leader and the strange one were right there. They're on the other end of the ship, turned away from him, in hushed conversation.
. He crept closer, sneaking through the shadows, and though he couldn't fully understand what they were saying he heard more than enough.
"Taking over tomorrow..."
"12,000 dollars for it?"
"...take care of them."

Oh, dear, oh dear, oh dear. Yes, it was really happening, and Dust wasn't sure what to do about it. Eyes widened in fear, he slowly turned and went back the other way. Time to tell the others the bad news.
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