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Huang Jia || Viscet #2321 Tryout

Postby WolfWinter » Mon Feb 19, 2018 5:07 pm

"If you stand for something you will have people for you and people against you. But if you stand for nothing you will have nobody for you and nobody against you"
-Maurice Saatchi


      Name
      Huang Jia
      Biological Gender
      Male
      Gender
      Genderfluid
      Age
      20
Their family originally came from a province in China.
They came to the US when Huang was just a child,
along with a human family. Both families made the journey
together to New York City. They live together in a two story house
several miles outside of New York on a farm they work together.
They've lived there for thirteen years.




Brief History
It's the year 1920, and the 19th Amendment has just been ratified and adopted; granting women equal rights to men in the USA. Marching right alongside the women leading up to this moment were viscets. Viscets at this time do not have any guaranteed rights according to the Constitution; however several states have laws that grant viscets rights within their borders. How protected, and the number of rights they have, vary from state to state. A majority of states only see viscets as talking work animals according to their laws. Viscets who wish to come to the country must come with a human person or family to partner with, as they are not seen as people in their own right. Many viscets choose to stay with these families, who were often neighbors from their old countries, and they all make a journey together to wherever it is they want to settle. These paired families often fare better as the viscets can be "loaned" out for work. This helps to earn money for both families as they make their way across the country or to settle somewhere. After the success women had in gaining suffrage, the movement to grant viscets person-hood and equal rights has gained increasing momentum. The movement is centered in the states that grant viscets equal rights to humans within the state borders, namely; New York, Washington, and Maine. A large part of the momentum of this movement are the veterans from WWI. Viscets were used in the war, and many fought alongside humans in it. Many of those men came to see viscets as their equals, and didn't like that their newfound friends would go back to working for little pay to no pay.




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August 19, 1920

Postby WolfWinter » Mon Feb 19, 2018 5:09 pm

August 19, 1920


Huang ran up the road, paper in hand. It really happened. He stopped for a moment to reread the headline, “NEW AMENDMENT GRANTS WOMEN SUFFRAGE”. He rolled it up again and continued to run up the road towards home. He burst through the door, panting. Mother looked at him in confusion, while Guiying was curious. Still panting, he unrolled the newspaper to show them.

His brother looked at him with a smile, “so it seems those friends of yours really managed to do it. It’s official. Y’all must be so proud of yourselves.”

Father walked in from outside just then, brushing the dirt off. When he saw the paper, he nearly tripped over himself trying to reach it. Huang’s family believed very strongly in the American Dream, and they supported him when he was part of movements to help people get their rights, like the Women’s Suffrage movement. His father patted him on the shoulder before heading back outside with a swish of the tail. He wanted to show Nana the paper; while she couldn’t read it herself he could read it to her.

Quietly he entered Nana’s room on the first floor, he wasn’t sure if she was sleeping or not. When he opened the door he was greeted with the sight of children all over the room. He relaxed. Nana was in the middle of telling one of her stories, and all the kids were enthralled. Nana insisted the ones born in their country learn Chinese, and the stories were a great way to teach them. When she saw him enter, she finished up her story.

Human children and visclings left the room chittering to each other in a mix of English and Chinese. His Nana saw the paper and put her glasses back on. He sat next to her on the bed. Nana’s excitement was like the rest of his family; if women could gain suffrage, then they could too. She even told him so, and gave him a quick hug before shooing him out. Huang went up to the bedroom he shared with his brother and his wife Lani.

Lani was doing needle-point. Having been born and raised in the US, her desire for viscet suffrage was as strong as his. They discussed potential plans for their own cause. A knocking on the kitchen door brought them down, along with everyone else. Janet was at the door, hands on her knees. Her dress was covered in dust.

“Did you see?!” she half shouted.

“Yeah, we did! Here, we can start working on new signs, and talking about what else we need to do,” Huang said.

Janet strode into the kitchen and greeted everyone. Guiying looked on in amusement over his pipe as little balls of fur came running towards her. In stride she picked them both up. They whispered something to her in a fit of giggles before wiggling to be put back down. Mother had quietly brought tea in before they entered the room. Janet pulled over the cushion she normally used as he poured them all tea.

“So,” she began, taking a careful sip of tea, “where should we start? We still have the base of our signs, and I think I have another at home. My mother helped me hide it so father wouldn’t burn it.”

“We need to decide on a plan. For example, how are we going to get in contact with the viscets in the states that treat them like animals? There’s also the police to think about, and Congress. We don’t want to push so soon, because there are some who are still very upset women got the vote. Yet at the same time, we don’t want to wait too long that the fire has gone almost completely out,” said Lani.

Guiying’s voice made them all jump, “I may be able to help with some of that. Remember my friends? From the war, this is just the kind of thing they’d love to help with. Let me write to them, and I’ll let you know what they say. While we wait, you can work on your sings, and come up with a good slogan.”

And so they did, and the response they got in short was very enthusiastic. Guiying’s friends agreed to come to the house, and then their work truly began. More than just signs or slogans, they had to get the word out there. They needed human allies; in the government, in law enforcement, among the every day people. Word needed to get out to viscets who had lost all hope of ever being on legal equal footing as humans. Time passed quickly.
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Beginnings

Postby WolfWinter » Mon Feb 19, 2018 5:09 pm

February 22, 1921

Huang paced around the waiting room. He had been waiting here for over an hour for a meeting with this lawyer. The wait, along with the looks the secretary was giving him, was making him suspect that this lawyer wasn't being serious when he put out his offer to help them. Then the doors opened. A young woman quickly left, child in tow. The door stayed open and he looked over at the secretary, who just nodded her head towards the door. Huang entered cautiously, more so to keep from hitting his head on the door jam than anything else.

The lawyer was sitting at his desk, hands folded in front of him. He looked all business. Knowing that the chair wouldn't be able to handle his weight the lawyer had moved it to a corner in his office. However, he'd also had the forethought to set down a pillow. Huang made himself comfortable on the pillow as best he could.

"Are you comfortable? I've never had a viscet client before, so I wasn't sure what would be needed. My son mentioned that you all often use cushions specially made for you as seats. Anyways, let's get down to business shall we? You want to help all of the viscets stuck in the states that don't recognize you as people, correct?" he said.

Huang nodded his head and pulled out the papers he had brought with him. The lawyer, Mr. Dunner, took them and read over them carefully. He even pulled out a notepad and took notes of the points made. Huang was curious why he would help them. Anyone who helped viscets so much as think they could gain equality was usually shunned. Even in New York, where viscets were at least recognized as intelligent beings and not just animals, they weren't truly equal. They couldn't vote, didn't have very many rights guaranteed to them, and the ones they did have were often trampled over.

Mr. Dunner looked up, "For someone who has never gone to law school, this is a very good proposal-" he sighed and rubbed his temple, "-but even if the best minds from across the country wrote this proposal, you'd still have a hard time even getting someone to introduce it in Washington. I'll see what I can do. Do you have any other people who can help you? Any lawmakers or other lawyers? Maybe a judge?"

"No, we don't. You're the first person who has written back to us. There was a judge, but he was pressured by the other lawyers and the people of his district to decline. We have a few police officers, but that's only because some of them fought alongside viscets in the Great War or knew someone who did,” said Huang.

Mr. Dunner only nodded his head before responding, “Son - Mr.Jia - you know this is going to be an uphill battle? You might not even see a proposal like this come across Washington’s desk in you lifetime, young as you are. Are you prepared for that?”

“Yes sir, I am. We’re all ready to fight this uphill battle. And it’s not just me, you see. We have support of the Veterans’ League. So many of those men fought with viscets in the trenches, had their lives saved by them. They are fighting with us, because they already see us as their equals,” he said. Mr. Dunner smiled.

***

“What did he say, Huang? Tell us!” shouted Janet. Huang had barely walked through the door before everyone was shouting at him and demanding to know what had happened in the city.

Huang hung up his coat and sat down before responding, “well, he made me wait for over an hour. I was considering leaving because there was no way he was serious, yeah? Even his secretary was giving me these odd looks. So as I was getting ready to leave the door opens and out comes this young lady and her child-”

“Come on Huang, just tell us! Will he or won’t he help us?” demanded Janet.

Huang fought back a smile, “he said yes. He’s going to help us. He’s writing to his contacts to see who else he can get to help us. He was mighty impressed that the Veteran’s League is backing us.”

The sound of yelling and screaming filled the kitchen. Nana came out of her room and hollered at them that the babies were sleeping. She was holding a pair of eggs to her chest, and glared at all of them for being so loud - but there was a twinkle in her eyes as she went back to her room. Janet had picked up enough Chinese to look sheepish with the rest of them.

The eggs belonged to Guiying and Lani. They had been in the city when they found an egg buried in trash next to the road. They had taken it to the local viscet hospital, and upon finding out that if they didn’t claim the egg it would get sent to an orphanage, they signed the papers to adopt it and take it home with them. It was now nestled alongside their other egg. Huang looked back out after Nana, and realized he hadn’t seen Guiying or Lani since he came home.

“Hey, Mother, where’s Guiying and Lani?” he asked.

She turned around, rag in hand form dishes, “they went into town to pick up supplies. Charlie has our order of dried goods and just needed someone to pick it up. They took the cart with them.”

“Thanks, I’m going to meet them there. I need to go get more paper, and it’ll give me a chance to tell them on the way back. See you at supper!” he said, waving as he left.


The trek into town was uneventful. All around him he could see the encroaching city. More houses, fewer farms. When he made it into town he heard a lot of yelling. He started to jog, and then run when he heard a familiar roar.
“You will pay for our items you ruined!” Guiying roared at the man, pointing at the wet cart.

Huang could see Lani fighting back tears as she quickly unloaded sacks and crates from the cart to keep the mess from spreading to the rest of the goods. He quickly went over to her and help her unload the cart. Guiying and the man were still roaring in each other’s faces, which was hard to do considering his brother was tall even among viscets. Most people would be terrified to get so aggressive with a viscet of his size.

Then the man noticed him, “Oh look, it’s the freak viscet! What color are you feeling today, blue? Heh.”

The man laughed at his own joke. Huang didn’t know the man’s name, but he had seen him around town lately. No one besides those who held a grudge against viscets liked him. THe sheriff came striding up to them both and put a hand on each’s chest.Guiying didn’t hide the snarl, and neither did the man.

Sheriff Alabaster Settled the dispute. The man grudgingly gave Guiying enough money to replace all of the goods destroyed. Huang still didn’t know what happened. Then Lani told him quietly. The man had opened a barrel of wine, and shouted at the merchant that it was vinegar and dumped it on their cart as they were getting ready to leave. He had made comments that the ‘vinegar wine’ was an improvement to their goods, and that’s when the fight really sparked off.

Guiying grumbled as they reloaded the cart with the salvaged goods. Huang told them the news about Dunner, and how he said he’d help them. This improved Guiying’s mood dramatically, and he was soon chattering happily again. Huang looked back at where the man had gone inside with a sense of foreboding. It didn’t bear well for the future, if people would react like that to them.
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You Gotta Fight For What You Believe In

Postby WolfWinter » Mon Feb 19, 2018 5:10 pm

November 9, 1923
His feet were sore, his arms were sore, his back was sore, he was sore. They had spent most of the day marching in Washington D.C., and it was taking its toll. Huang told one of the Veteran’s League members that he was getting some wraps for his hands and feet. He set his sign down and walked over to where Lani and a few other viscets were giving out the wraps. She looked as tired as he felt, but there was hope in her eyes.

Their allies in Washington had pulled through, and were drafting up a proposal as they spoke. They had enough people who weren’t against them that they had a chance. The Civil Rights Union had joined them, and together they were making a push for an amendment that would not only grant viscets full citizenship and equality to that of humans, but for the rights of other groups as well.

Oh there had been grumblings, and outcry that now that women had suffrage, everyone and their dog wanted it, too. They had all scoffed and laughed at some of the headlines, and looked on grimly at some of the others. Now that viscets across the country were pushing for recognition as citizens and suffrage, horrible stories were being printed. However, that couldn’t stop the building momentum.

Huang looked on with determination at the Capitol Building. They would win this fight. He wanted his parents to know what it was to be full citizens, which meant fighting for them today. He strode out back into the mass of silent protesters and held up his sign. He took center stage, as the now recognized “face’ of the Viscet Rights movement. From an immigrant farm boy, to being a leader of a movement that would change everything.

Mr. Dunner, after four long years, proudly stood with them. He was who they called if someone wound up in a cell, either in a police station or in a kennel. He stayed true to his word. Despite their age difference, he and Huang had become good friends. Now, they stood as silent sentries while they waited.

Come nightfall they packed up. Guiying clapped him on the shoulder as they made their way to their hotel. As one of the few establishments in Washington that was fully operational for viscet customers, it was the only place the viscets could sleep comfortably. No one slept on the street or in a tent. Someone had thoughtfully called ahead for them and there was food waiting for them. Huang felt a bit guilty as he noticed how harried the staff looked.

When he entered their floor’s lounge to grab a plate of food a loud cheer went up. It wasn’t viscets he saw cheering him on. It was the hotel staff themselves. The manager walked up to him and gave an excited speech to the growing crowd of hungry viscets. There was one more surprise in store for them.

Benches. Benches lined the tables that were at just the right height for them. Benches that allowed them to sit up off of the floor. These weren’t plain, just cut benches either. They were beautiful. Huang looked back at the manager and thanked him. By this time all of the viscets had gotten back to the hotel. He could hear the excited whispers and soft murmurs as they all spoke to their neighbors. Guiying gave him a gentle push towards one of the tables. The manager came back up to him.

“We ordered these over a year ago, and they were all finished today. The tables, too. Many of our viscet patrons told us that they would love to be able to sit up off the floor, and we had enough in our budget to allow us to order these. We thought that it was fitting to unveil them to you all here. Oh, and don’t worry about the servers not being able to reach over or around you; the shorties like myself have a little step here, see? And there are a few viscets on our staff who volunteered to serve you all tonight. Enjoy the meal,” he said with a small bow, and then he was gone.

Looking around, Huang saw that some of the others were openly crying, Lani among them. The gesture was a small one, but it meant the world to everyone there. Being able to sit up from the ground made them seem less like animals and more like people. Food was quickly and efficiently brought out. The viscets on the waitstaff were well groomed, and impeccable in appearance. Soon, the room was filled with happy murmur of dinner chatter.

Janet skipped over to him; Mr. Dunner was close behind. They had already eaten at a diner across the way, but they had something for him. Mr. Dunner pulled something out of his pocket and set it on the table. It was a pin, specifically a pin of him. Janet looked at him and grinned, and Mr. Dunner did too. Huang hugged them both. They bade him goodnight and went back to their rooms. The meal was splendid, and at the end of it they had a fine dessert.

Huang excused himself and went back to his room. Lani followed him, as he was sharing with her, his brother, and their young ones. As he got ready for bed, his niece and nephew tugged on his tail. He turned around and they begged for him to read them a bedtime story. They help up the book Nana gave them for their birthday. Despite being laid at different times, they had hatched on the same day.

Huang smiled and told them he would read them one story. They giggled as he caught on to their attempted scheme. Despite being only three, they spoke very well. He read them their story. Once they were asleep, he went over to Lani so they could talk. Most people wouldn’t give her a second glance, so she often noticed or heard things that others didn't. She told him everything she saw that day, and he wrote it all down in his journal, and copied the few notes she managed to take.

Apparently, a large group of people had gathered behind them, just after he had gone to get the wraps. While some scowled and grumbled, the vast majority looked neutral. There were even some who looked happy at the sight of them holding their signs. The last bit surprised him, few people openly showed their support. It gave him hope that things would actually change. A loud knock at the door made him jump, and sent Him scrabbling to answer it before they woke up the kids.

Guiying, his parents, Nana, and everyone else from home was at the door. The crowded into the room carrying a cake with a rainbow of twenty candles on top. The sleeping visclings were roused to join in the singing. He blew out all of the candles in one breath. Before he could sit down Nana pressed an orange into his paw and patted his arm. The cake was his favorite; lemon. His nieces and nephews squeaked at him begging to know what he had wished for, and he told them to hush, and that he couldn’t tell them otherwise it would never come true.

Mr. Dunner and Janet squeezed their way through the crowd of viscets and humans. They each had a box. He eyed them in mock suspicion. Mother and Father’s eyes were twinkling. Looking around, it seemed everyone knew what was in the two boxes but him. Janet held out her box first. The stamps on it made him realize that it was actually a package, both were. He carefully opened it, and nestled in some silk was a silver bell and a red tassle.

He looked up at her, and she helped him put it on his ear. While the clip was usually used for a pierced ear, it had been modified so it could firmly but gently clamp onto an unpierced ear. At first the pressure was uncomfortable on his sensitive ears, but it quickly went away. Mr. Dunner held out the box he was holding. Huang opened it with more eagerness. At first all he saw was the tangle of cords, but then he saw the glint of gold on red. Somehow, he managed to take it out of the box without tangling it up.

It was a Chinese lantern, and some firecrackers on a set of cords. At the assurance of his family and friends he put it on, too. A bright flash of light captured the moment in black and white. He didn’t really care in that moment. He hugged everyone in the room, and spun the young ones around. Looking around the room, he fought back tears, and lost. Then the call came. A busboy came rushing to them with a note.

We just finished the proposal, introducing it tomorrow. We have a chance.

Huang stared at the card. The busboy couldn’t hide the smile that tweaked the edges of his lips. Huang tipped him, and sent him on his way along with a piece of cake. When he read the card aloud a hearty cheer went up in the room. A few curious heads poked in, and when they heard the news they cheered too. Huang tried to caution them that it could still not make it past the vote, and then it would have to be ratified. They ignored him and spread the news anyways. Come the next morning, it had passed.
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What Happened After

Postby WolfWinter » Mon Feb 19, 2018 5:10 pm

Present Day

After reading the selected boards you see an informative plaque at the end of the exhibit. You read it.

The day after Huang Jia’s Birthday, his wish came through. A miracle had happened, the proposal was accepted, and within a year it was ratified. However, he didn’t get to see that happen. Exactly a week after his birthday he went missing. Despite the best efforts of the NYPD, who volunteered to help in the search, Huang disappeared. It was on of the greatest mysteries of the century, and it remains unsolved today.

Despite his mysterious disappearance, his influence remains strong today. Because of his desire and drive to see viscets gain their rights, the 20th Amendment was passed and ratified. Many consider it fitting that the amendment that gave viscets the right to vote is the same number as Huang’s age as of his disappearance. His influence didn’t just affect viscet rights, either. The original proposal had to be edited to only include guaranteed rights and citizenship to viscets. With the support of the Jia family, particularly Guiying and Lani, rights for other groups of people were recognized and added to the constitution.

We here at the Viscet History Museum hope you enjoyed the exhibit on Huang Jia

This plaque was donated to the Viscet History museum by the Jia family on the 90th anniversary of the passing of the passing of the 20th Amendment.


You see other boards and information. One of them details the more personal details of Huang’s life, and how the dated boards were reconstructed accounts based on the journals Huang kept and firsthand accounts from those who were there and had known him. Mr. Dunner and Janet have plaques dedicated to them, and so do the rest of the Jia family from Huang’s time.

You notice a brown and cream viscet with a curled tail standing in front of them. He looks almost as if he could be Huang’s grandson, you think to yourself. But... His mane was jet black, and his eyes were the wrong colors. Plus, there were gradients of black on his fur. You shrug it off and continue on your way. You promised your friend you’d get a button based off of the originals and Huang plushie for them from the gift shop...


Huang fought back the tears as he read the plaques. Not only was he out of time, but everyone that he knew and loved had gone on without him. They had lived while he had been stuck. When the visitor left, he walked back to the agents who were waiting for him. They blended in well with the other visitors; he only knew who and what they were because they had introduced themselves beforehand. He gave one last sad look at the plaques that detailed the deaths of almost everyone he knew. The sticky dye they put on his mane bugged him, not just physically, but emotionally. His colors were a part of him, and to hide them was to hide who he was. Pushing down the growing chasm of emotions, he made the decision to accept the agents’ offers to see Janet and Dunner’s granddaughter. Looking up at the agents for the ambiguous organization known as the Group, he prepared to meet the head.

After all, maybe they could find whoever was responsible for freezing him in time and bring them to justice. Little did he know that culprit was with him the whole time; just out of reach cloaked in light that rendered her invisible. She looked on in sadness as the one who would determine the fate of everyone with abilities left with the ones who sought to destroy them. Still, she decided to give him a parting gift, a promise to those who had loved him to protect him. She filled the bell with her energy, allowing him to summon her should the need arise; knowing full well it put her in danger as long as he was under the group’s influence. She left, and decided to go seek an old friend's advice on the matter.

The breeze from her passage made Huang pause, but all he saw was the empty space around him.
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