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Dino's little stories - 100 Shots -

Postby Dinolil1 » Sat Nov 04, 2017 8:31 pm

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Hello, my name is Dinolil1 and as a writer that frequently lacks the muse for writing, I'm taking part in Flo's writing challenges as a means to develop my character in hopes of one day writing a story with them. Feel free to critique me, praise me and rant at me should you spy anything within my stories that either is rubbish or good.


1.// "Did you steal my Poptart?"
2.// "We could be hero's!"
3.// "We should be lovers..."
4.// "SNAAAAAAAAAAKE!"
5.// "What do you mean, NO?!"
6.// "THIS IS JUST BUSINESS!"
7.// "Maybe, just one more slice."
8.// "You can't leave! You'll die..."
9.// "I was a fool to believe..."
10.// "It all ends, today."
11.// "You must..."
12.// "You're just a silly girl!"
13.// "The show must go on..."
14.// "Just one more day, please..."
15.// "You can't just kill people!"
16.// "Seriously, who ate my Poptart?!"
17.// "I only speak the truth."
18.// "Don't let go Jack! Wait... you already did... rats."
19.// "I did not want this!"
20.// "What do you mean he's dead?!"
21.// "I haven't eaten in three days!"
22.// "Who am I? Not Jean Valjean..."
23.// "Did you just..."
24.// "Do. Not. Touch. That."
25.// "YOU JUST TOUCHED IT!"
26.// "I would never say that to you."
27.// "My receding hair line has been kissed..."
28.// "You have Elvis Presley eyes... I would know."
29.// "Dude, chocolates are bomb."
30.// "Could you... stay with me tonight?"
31.// "I can't loose you!"
32.// "Please... marry me."
33.// "I can't hug you..."
34.// "You call that a kiss?"
35.// "Since when did I ask for it to snow?"
36.// "I'M BATMAN" "No... no you are not."
37.// "NEVER SAY THAT WORD!"
38.// "I HAVE TB!" "No you have a cold!"
39.// "Can you not?!"
40.// "Tis only a flesh wound!"
41.// "Could you stop jumping for one minute?!'
42.// "Please repeat that, I wasn't listening."
43.// "You love me?"
44.// "Never do that again."
45.// "I dare you to lick that..."
46.// "What do you think of children?"
47.// "I like, like you."
48.// "BY GODS..."
49.// "I just wanted you..."
50.// "Damn it! I died again!"

51.// "I'm a mess."
52.// "Hey! Little ears are around!"
53.// "Please, don't cry..."
54.// "YOU PLAGIARIZING PIG!"
55.// "Since when did Disney add this?!
56.// "It only get's worse"
57.// "Oh crap..."
58.// "Please tell me that is not what I think it is."
59.// "What did you think I was doing?"
60.// "ALL HAIL ...!"
61.// "Now why did you do that?"
62.// "You have beautiful eyes."
63.// "Let's travel the world!"
64.// "I DON'T SPEAK FRENCH!"
65.// "Whatever happened to Joel?"
66.// "No way in, no way out."
67.// ""I will have my vengeance."
68.// "Grow up!"
69.// "I found the ring!"
70.// "We should run... like now!"
71.// "Can you please shut up?" "No."
72.// "I found that cliff..."
73.// "Are you sure that is safe to eat?"
74.// "I TOLD YOU TO GOOGLE MAP IT!"
75.// "Who died and made you queen?!"
76.// "Ich Sprechen Deustch"
77.// "Now wait a second, buster."
78.// "I would kill for you."
79.// "The greatest thing, is you."
80.// "I am a literary vampire."
81.// "A stake through the heart would kill anybody..."
82.// "Bon Jovi is my jam!"
83.// "Kiss me.. now."
84.// "I seem to have lost my contact."
85.// "TURN THE LIGHTS BACK ON!"
86.// "DON'T SHOOT!"
87.// "Oh no... he has a sword too."
88.// "Are you sure it's dead?"
89.// "Ummmmm..."
90.// "I can't write anything good."
91.// "We aren't in Hogwarts!"
92.// "Please, stay with me."
93.// "He's not breathing!"
94.// "I...love...yo-"
95.// "She's gone."
96.// "Sir, where are your pants?"
97.// "I can't even."
98.// "I believe in you."
99.// "What can I say... you're welcome."
100.// "The sea... it calls me."
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Re: Dino's little stories - 100 Shots -

Postby Dinolil1 » Fri Nov 17, 2017 8:34 pm

Shot One

- Characters: Lorelei and Wisteria


Wisteria was never popular with the gang; they roamed the corridors often looking to specifically cause trouble with her and given their penchant for sending their victims to hospital, nobody stopped them. Most of the time, the gang just called Wisteria names and quite frankly, the mellow werewolf didn't care about it.

What she did care about however, was the fact that her lunchbag had been torn open and all the food scarfed up by none other than the notorious gang. ''Did you steal my poptart?'' Wisteria accused calmly, watching as the ring-leader snarfed up the last of the poptart. The poptart with all it's flaky pastry, delicious icing and sprinkles scattered lovingly on the top. Her poptart to boot.


With a disgusting crumbly laugh, the minotaur crossed his arms and shrugged. ''I was hungry; go and chew a couple of bones.'' He replied loftily, eyes scowling at Wisteria from under a pair of thick brows. His lackeys snickered behind him, jeering looks flashing malevolently at the werewolf; whom glared back, amber eyes blazing. ''50% of me is a wolf; the other 50% is a human who craves poptarts!'' Wisteria sniped, sneering at the foolish brute. ''Et tu, brute?''

This cunning quip was met with a ham-sized fist to the chin, and already a crowd had gathered to gawk at all this blood-boiling commotion. This was something that the sharp-eyed Lorelei couldn't possibly miss and with hooked-talons clacking over tarmac, the harpy approached the gang with only one intent; to punch the ringleader, that jerk that'd stolen her girlfriend's poptart. Now, Lorelei wasn't someone who cared strongly about a lot of people and most didn't care for her either. She was a trouble-maker and others steered clear of the harpy; everyone but Wisteria, who loved her and in return she loved her back.

Flashing needle-sharp teeth, Lorelei swaggered up to the ringleader and proudly puffed out her chest. ''Makin' trouble and stealin' poptarts are we? Not cool, buddy.'' She slapped him across the face, leaving a red weal where her hand had made contact with his cheek. The minotaur responded by shoving her to the ground, driving a cloven-hoof into her belly. ''Back off, twig-face!'' He snarled, breath misting in the cold air.

The crowd murmured with the excitement of a breaking storm, watching the harpy spring up and drive a thin finger into the ringleader's eyes, regarded the fluidity of the minotaur's fist in her face and gawked as Lorelei swung her leg into his groin. Wisteria had scrambled to her feet, clutching a bloodied nose, admired the courage of her girlfriend as Lorelei was beaten back down again and again, but still rose to meet the foe.

As the battle dragged on, the crowd started to break apart; it was starting to fall into a rhythm, and the crowd thirsted for unpredictability. Lorelei was beaten black and blue, while the minotaur's face was decorated with the criss-crosses of many scratches from her sharp talons. It was nearing the end of lunch when a teacher finally broke the two apart, a scowl crumpling her stern face. ''Go to the office! I'll be telling your parents!'' she warned, jabbing a finger at their faces. ''Fighting is barbaric!'' The teacher hissed, storming off before either had the opportunity to babble out an excuse.

Wisteria, whom had been watching the scuffle and trying to usher the cheering crowds away from Lorelei whenever she fell, approached the harpy and chuckled softly. ''You didn't need to go all macho for me, Lore...'' Wisteria shook her head softly and kissed Lorelei on the cheek, watching a vivid blush paint her pale face. ''But thank you; thank you for avenging my poptart.''


''No problem, love.''
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Re: Dino's little stories - 100 Shots -

Postby Dinolil1 » Fri Dec 15, 2017 9:34 am

Shot Two

- Characters: Holly and Regia


''We could be heroes.''

Never before had Holly heard such tempting words, trickling softly from the vulpine's maw. Dark eyes gleamed hungrily and she grinned at the speaker, approaching the speaker eagerly. ''Heroes?'' Holly echoed. ''How?'' She inquired, cocking her head inquisitively. The fox was ready with a response, curling their brush around their paws and staring at the ambitious hound. Holly was blinded by her quest for power and had already too lately woven herself into Regia's trap, absolutely enamored by herself.

''We must unite the packs.'' Regia replied, pale eyes twinkling like stars. ''For too long, we've fought.'' The fox frowned, looking ponderous. The albino fox wanted nothing more than to bring peace to the world, to cease bloodshed and end all suffering forever. ''We could be heroes, Holly.'' Regia smiled softly, pelt shimming like freshly laid snow. ''Doesn't that sound good?''

Eagerly the dog nodded, eyes glazed softly with the prospect of power so near; Holly yearned for nothing but absolute control, to have the entire city in the palm of her paws. Although peace was not on her agenda, Holly knew that unity meant that someone had control over the rest and the black dog was naturally expecting it to be herself. ''Oh yes, Regia, you always know how to say such good things.'' That much was true, Regia was very good at manipulating others and tugging them gingerly onto the path she willed them to stray.

''Well, then.'' Regia murmured. ''Shall we get started then?'' The fox knew the value of time and didn't want to waste it dithering in a dirty little alley where rubbish cloyed the very air and turned what little water there was stagnant. ''Don't want to waste time do we?'' the albino chirruped, getting up on small paws and without warning, trotting off into the heart of the bustling city.

Streetlights flickered overhead and illuminated the two pairs of eyes; dim in the gathering dark. Holly knew the way by heart, paws treading where many paws had etched a path hundreds of years ago, when trees sprung where concrete now lay. Graffiti sprawled all over red-brick, cars roared along puddle-spotted roads and the alleys seemed to spring from the darkness, yawning away into danger and mystery. ''Holly...'' Regia started, only to be interrupted by a loud snap of Holly's jaws. White fur bristling indignantly, Regia fell silent.

''We're here.'' Holly informed, unaware of the fox's anger at being so rudely silenced. Among the garbage and dirt lay her pack, uncomfortable but still dreaming; unaware of Holly's looming ambition and the ghostly fox at her side. ''Come on, Regia.'' Holly ushered the fox forward, padding among her sleeping brethren. ''I'm coming.'' Regia sighed, trotting at her side. The albino fox was not liking Holly's new turn of control over her and swore that before she guided Holly onto her path of stardom, Regia would show the hound who was boss.

The two settled in a quiet dingy corner, ready to talk plans. ''So, when do we strike?'' Holly murmured, ears pricked for the vulpine to once again utter her words of wisdom. The two had decided to go for Tiger's and Alpha's groups first, seeing as they had the biggest and most prominent groups in all the city; both knew the risks and both knew the rewards that would be reaped after the hard slog. ''We strike in a few months.'' Regia replied.

''A few months!?''

Regia regarded Holly's shock with a gentle frown. ''Why yes, we need to prepare for a fight.'' A snow-white tail curled around snow-white paws. ''Do you think we can just rush into their territories with fangs bared and just win?'' Regia explained, imaging such a foolish thing taking place; they would not last five minutes on the bloodied streets like that. ''Holly, I thought you were cleverer than that.''

The black dog glared ferociously at the fox, snarling. ''I'm clever enough, thank you very much.''

''Could've surprised me.'' Regia grumbled under her breath, silently enough for the hostile hound not to catch it. ''But we've got to wait a few months; then we'll be heroes.''

''Very well.'' Holly smirked. ''A few months, then we're heroes.''
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