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ι'ℓℓ αℓωαуѕ ℓσσк υρ тσ уσυ

Postby blue neighbourhood » Sun Jun 07, 2015 11:29 pm



THE CATS

Leader: Fernstar ~ A big silver tabby with emerald green eyes.

Deputy: Featherwing ~ A spitting image of her mother, Fernstar, apart from size difference - Featherwing is much smaller.

Medicine Cat: Briardawn - A small calico she-cat with amber eyes.

Medicine Cat Apprentice: Oakpaw - A brown tabby apprentice with dull green eyes.

Warriors: Greyfang - A dark grey tom with amber eyes and a stubby tail.
Badgerstripe - Greyfang's brother; A grey/black tom with a white stripe down his muzzle.
Brackennose - A lean light brown tom with amber eyes.
Ravenwing - A short-tempered black tom with piercing green eyes.
Blizzardfoot - A big shaggy white tom with ice blue eyes.
Lilyfoot - A big pretty white she-cat with black patches.
Dustclaw - A small brown tabby tom with amber eyes.
Rosefur - A pale ginger she-cat.
Petalfoot - A calico she-cat with amber eyes.

Apprentices: Bumblepaw - A small brown tom with green eyes.
Lionpaw - A big golden tom.
Brindlepaw - A small pretty brown she-cat with amber eyes.
Ferretpaw - A grey tabby tom with yellow eyes.
Jaypaw - A grey tabby tom with blue eyes and a white tail-tip.

Queens: Willowstream - A small grey tabby she-cat with leaf green eyes.
Mistyfur - A grey she-cat with blue eyes.
Snowstorm - A white she-cat with a black ear-tip and a black toe.

Kits: Willowstream's: Unborn
Mistyfur: Swiftkit, Lilykit.
Snowstorm: Unborn

Elders: Stonefall - A big misty grey tom with dark blue eyes.
Sootclaw - A smaller grey tom.


Families
<> Brothers
>< Sisters
<< Brother and Sister

Jaypaw <> Ferretpaw
Stonefall <> Sootclaw
Rosefur >< Lilyfoot
Greyfang <> Badgerstripe
Brackennose <> Ravenwing << Featherwing
Dustclaw << Briardawn
Oakpaw <> Lionpaw
Bumblepaw << Brindlepaw
Mates & Crushes
---> She likes him
<--- He likes her
<--> They like each other
>x< Exes.
>~< Mates.

Willowstream >~< Dustclaw
Featherwing ---> Badgerstripe
Brindlepaw <--> Ferretpaw
Petalfoot <--- Brackennose
Snowstorm >~< Blizzardfoot
Mistyfur >~< Ravenwing


Mentors & Apprentices

Petalfoot ~ Jaypaw
Fernstar ~ Ferretpaw
Greyfang ~ Brindlepaw
Briardawn ~ Oakpaw
Rosefur ~ Lionpaw
Badgerstripe ~ Bumblepaw
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Re: ι'ℓℓ αℓωαуѕ ℓσσк υρ тσ уσυ

Postby blue neighbourhood » Tue Jun 09, 2015 5:55 am

Chapter One


Bumblepaw woke up to a golden paw stabbing his side. "Wake up, sleepyhead!" Lionpaw purred, stepping back to let Bumblepaw get up. "Rosefur and Badgerstripe are taking us out hunting - together!"
Feeling more awake, Bumblepaw smiled at his friend. "Great! It's been ages since we've got to go together."
"It's not only hunting... It's our Warrior assessment!"
Lionpaw was a moon older than Bumblepaw, but Lionpaw was pushed back in training when he broke his leg as a kit.
"That's great!" Bumblepaw purred happily.
A new voice entered the conversation. Badgerstripe's. "Come on then. The mice won't come running into your paws!"

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"Okay," Rosefur meowed. "Lionpaw and I will be going into the forest, by the Big Pine, and you will be going...?"
"We'll go to the lake," Badgerstripe decided. "I want to check out your fishing skills."
"Sounds great," Bumblepaw replied, Lionpaw nodding eagerly beside him.
"Okay, let's go!" Rosefur mewed, getting to her paws. "Good luck, both of you."
"Ditto," Badgerstripe smiled, before going into the woods, unseen.

Bumblepaw soon found the scent of a squirrel. I hope you're watching, Badgerstripe! he thought to himself. He saw the squirrel, scuttling through the leaves. He got into his hunting position, crawled forward, and leaped! Bumblepaw landed on it's shoulders, killing it with a bite to the neck. He carried it proudly beside the tree and buried it to collect after. He heard something else. A crow. At least he thought it was. He copied what he did to the squirrel, crouching and crawling forward.... and... screech!
It was a hawk. It leaped on to him, biting the top of his head, dangerously close to his eyes. At that moment Badgerstripe ran in, hissing, teeth bared. "Badger... Badgerstripe!" he croaked, the hawk clawing his neck. The beast's teeth met Bumblepaw's eyes.

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Re: ι'ℓℓ αℓωαуѕ ℓσσк υρ тσ уσυ

Postby blue neighbourhood » Thu Jun 11, 2015 8:01 am

Chapter 2

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Bumblepaw woke up, moaning in pain. With a jolt, he realized half of his vision was blank - gone. He panicked, getting to his paws, until he heard a rasping meow behind him. "Bumblepaw," Badgerstripe croaked. "The hawk caught your eye. Briardawn is doing what she can to help you."
"So... I might go blind?!" he gasped, panic rising once again.
"Maybe," Badgerstripe admitted. The senior Warrior wouldn't sooth with a lie. He would be honest to any cat about anything - from 'Nevers' and 'Maybes'.

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