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Secrets Revealed - The Hawk

Postby 20lait1 » Wed May 06, 2015 2:02 am

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You might want to read the Hawk first.
It'll give you the basic information, so I suggest you read it - it's not a must, but unless you read it, you probably won't understand some of the things that I'll be writing here.

Maybe you want to chat about the Hawk?
That is the place to do it! If you want to chat about this, feel free to do it here - just don't go off topic.
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Postby 20lait1 » Wed May 06, 2015 2:02 am

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Ɯнαт ιѕ тнιѕ?

Read the Hawk? Good. Not only follow Skyler, who is in the Hawk - but her friends and enemies - into a world of adventure, drama and romance. They'll each be writing their own little entry or more - you'll find out things that Skyler hasn't mentioned in her Hawk - and maybe, you might figure out some little secrets that I haven't shown you... yet. This only includes characters that I made, who have a more 'main' part, which can be found in this group. As well, I've decided this won't be in chronological order (I think that's what it's called, anyways. It just means one event after the other) to skip all the boring parts.




Oтнєя Ɗιαяιєѕ

I do enjoy other diaries... Quite a lot, in fact. Enjoy this? Maybe you can take your time to read these. (More will be added as it goes along.)

This is not a diary, it is a sketchbook! by .:Grell~Sutcliff:.
This isn't a diary, it's a Hellhound by adventureswordtora
Its not a diary! Its a... Hazelnut?
~*Dear Blueberry... Cupcake...*~ by Snowflakette
_ ᔕTᖇᗩᑎGE ᗪIᗩᖇY _ by Xura
Dear.. Eagle? by DarkDane
The diary of a small dark fox sorceress! by Corrupted Ninetails
≡ Dear Diary? Waffles?... Cream Puff? ≡ by Polar Kitten
This isn't a diary, it's just a book that looks like one?? by P I R A C Y
Witches and Wizards... Or not. by hollyglow
.:This Isn't a Diary, It's a Noodle:. by Eons.
It isnt a diary! its a devil! by xdoctor who?x
This is a Cherry, not those strange Diarys. by Aquadoglover
This is not a Diary, this is a Life! by .:GenocideGenocide:.
Dear... Smoothie! by Aquadoglover
Rude? Yes. Sarcastic? All the way. by WolvesOfFire
Dear.... Dragon! by Da Writing Dragon
This is Not a Diary, It is a Beaker! by Piefan
⋆This is not a Diary, its a Sushi!⋆ by Ravenkitten
This IS a diary. by Juvia Lockser
Hight School Drama by Coolpaw5
This is not a diary, this is a Chicken! by CreatureOfTheNight
Dear..... Soul?! by .:GenocideGenocide:.
тнє ∂ιαяу σƒ ѕυηѕнιηє by abysss.
It's NOT a diary - it's a BAZOOKA! by biamorawesome
this is not a diary ,its an elven ! by malteselover
This is not a diary... It's a Piña Colada! by Bee&Puppycat
Just your Average Angelus by Giraffe_in_a_Gabion
I'm Not a Diary, I'm Just a Highly Confused Indivual by sheleavesinwinter~*
I refuse to call this a diary, this is a TREE! by p a r a в a т a ι.
Duff's Diary by ~Sunset Shimmer~
This Is An Owl, Not A Diary! By Stuck With Computers
I don't care what this is, I need to beat the final boss! by duckfeathers;;
Dear Dia - Foxy? No... Water! by DreamOfRavens
Dear Dairy/Diary/Waffles... by Polar Kitten
This isnt a diary, this is a Flower! by wolfiegirl8679
This isn't a Diary, it's a Mythical Beast! by xXInkTheClownXx
Of course this is a diary, fool! by Cas + jacksepticeye
This is NOT a diary. It's a Lucky Horseshoe! by TheFabulousHorse
This is a kitten, not a diary mom! by teresa.
~Links World~ by ownanimal
~This Is A Cupcake, Not A Diary!~ by Stuck with Computers
This isn't a diary it's a duct tape! by blackwolf22
●•°○This Isn't a Diary, but it IS a Spellbook!○°•● by Steven'sLion
Dear.. Eagle? by DarkDane
»This isn't a Diary, it's a Donut!« by Polar Kitten

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Nest of Secrets

Postby 20lait1 » Wed May 06, 2015 2:02 am

Ɲєѕт σƒ Sєcяєтѕ

Looking for a particular entry from a particular character? It's here!



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Nicole Brightdapple




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Tobias Sparrowpelt






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Sunny Petaldapple

Who am I inside?






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Flame Streampaw




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Hail Streampaw




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Tigren Swiftrunner




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Ryker Bramblefur




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Shadowheart




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Soulstealer




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Lucifer Darklighter

Am I really meant for evil?

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Okay, whatever, whatever.

Postby 20lait1 » Thu May 07, 2015 8:46 pm

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Okay, whatever, whatever. I guess.... Thousands of years later, when I'm dead, you - yeah, you, the guy who finds this weird diary book thing will make me famous. Yeah, I'm talking to you. Go and do that now before reading this useless old book about my life?

You did it? Okay, now, I'm Fang. Fang Cometpaw... My photo's up there. And this is the most useless book in the world about my boring life. Well, I'll introduce my family... Boring, yeah, I know. But if you make me famous, I have to give credit to my mum since she was the one who got me to write in this book, right?

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My mum, Winter Cometpaw. I know it's impolite to put some guy's name who's older than you... But geez, everyone writes the name 'Mozart' like it's no big deal, so why can't I? She's boring if she reads this, I'M DEAD. Anyways, she's okay, I guess.... The normal old mum, though a thousand years later, mums must be very different.... Right? Whatever.

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My dad, Bracken Cometpaw... Yeah, I know, weird names. Like in the olden times where the knights rode horses and stuff... Ugh. He's weird, he's funny, he's normal. The END. Of his profile thing, anyways.

Well, that's it. No brothers or sisters.... I heard they were annoying, though, so I don't want one.

Well, I go to Furford Academy, which is the school.... It's the present for us, but past for you. You guys are lucky, because you probably have microchips that input knowledge into your head instead of sitting at a boring old desk hearing a teacher drone on and on... Well, future dog cat creature, just go and learn about my boring life. Like, turn the next page... And I'll continue writing. First, let me go and text Skyler... Who in the world is Skyler? Ah, my friend.

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Skyler Swiftrunner. Cool, and in another school. Much less boring than my parents. The - Oh yeah, she's also a dog/fox/dragonwithfeatherywings kind of hybrid. Now, the - And she does archery and swordfighting, and can fly. Okay. now... The end of this profile. Finally. Well, I have to text her now... She's in another school. I mentioned it already.
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Furford Academy

Postby 20lait1 » Sat May 09, 2015 12:21 am

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Boys aren't supposed to be writing in diaries... But I guess if I'm going to get famous in the future, I have to. Groan. Now, let me see.... Ah, yes. Now I remember. I downloaded a new game on my new IPaw, which my parents bought me. Well, at least they're sorta nice to me... And did I mention my dad's a kind of half sheep? No, it was ram.... I think. Well, I don't think Sky likes this school as well as me... The food is awesome, and this place is like so BIG! Plus, I get my own room - but I have to share it with another guy. Did I say my 'own'? Oh well, I guess shared room... Whatever.

Skyler: What do you think of this new school?
Me: It's pretty cool!
Skyler: It's okay for me.

It was then I just realized I still had my IPaw, so I decided to tell Skyler about it... I wonder if she likes Star Wars.

Me: Hey! I just got a new IPaw (IPhone) from my parents.
Skyler: And....?
Me: I found this really cool game called Star Wars Assault Team.
Skyler: ....
Me: And I got Tier Two Chewbacca, and I have Tier Three Han Solo, and of course....

Well, I'm not bothered with writing everything down, so yeah, just to say the game was awesome. :D Anyways, Skyler went in first, so.... Just to say, maybe this school isn't as cool as it seems....

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???: I'm Snowflake, but call me Snowy. Name and interests?
Skyler: I'm Skyler Swiftrunner -
Snowy: Whoever created your name must have no imagination! Though since you don't look so awesome like us Populars. Gray is so outdated!

Well, my last name 'Cometpaw' is weird too, right?

Skyler: I can't choose what colour fur I have, Snowy, but -
Snowy: And you can't be rude to a Popular like me! No one carries around a light sword and a bow around with you. Popular, beautiful girls never do that!

Okay... But Skyler isn't exactly 'popular' or 'beautiful'. And I prefer it like that. She's my best friend, but I don't like her that way...

Skyler: Well, I'm not a normal girl like you. So deal with it. Besides, my interests are sword dancing, archery -

GO SKYLER! She's awesome this way.

Snowy: *gasp* How dare you! Outcasts! At once. And your wings look like a storm. Storms can mess your fur up, and....
Skyler: Whatever.

Okay... this Snowy kid isn't that nice. Okay, it's my turn...

Snowy: Oooh! Perfect jock! I'm Snowflake, but call me Snowy. *girly giggle* Name and interests? *bats eyelashes*

Okay, this Popular kid is so.... lovey dovey, I guess.

Me: My name's Fang.... and I like sports such as football and -
Snowy: Perfect! You -

Well, I won't let her get away with it!

Fang: And my best friend is Skyler.
Snowy: *sigh* Oh, that girl. How about you give up on her *bats eyelashes* and come with me?

You trying to bribe me? Nope, not going to happen.

Fang: NO!
Snowy: *sigh* As much as I'd hate to, you're Outcasts for being friends with that girl.

Well, duh. I'd rather be friends with every single one of those 'Outcast' guys than be friends with you. I just couldn't help grinning at Skyler as I walked up to her.

Me: Awesome job, but I think she was flirting with you.
Fang: I have no interest in girls who want me to not be friends with you.

That's definitely true - mark, Fang Cometpaw for doing a good deed to my friend, Skyler Swiftrunner.

Me: You're the best friend ever!

Well, yeah. We always were best friends... Right? Oh well....

Me: You better check your schedule. You might be late.
Skyler: Oh yeah, right!

I watched as Skyler pulled a ragged piece of paper out of her bag. I didn't bother, as I already knew I had Weapon Training next. Basics, but I will be moved up.... Me and my scythe can't be beat!

Me: I have Languages next. I'm learning to speak Dragon.
Fang: Cool, but I'm going to be late if I stick around. See you.

When she walked away, I quickly gripped my scythe and found myself outside, on the grass field thing. There was a teacher there.... But I can't get his picture now.... Argh! Oh well, it's not going to kill me if I don't... And if you future dog use one of your awesome time machines, don't bring me into the future then kill me. Oh, wait... Yes! I got his picture.... I found it on the school website on my IPaw.

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Mr Storm... Okay, now - I'm going to start... learning about scythe training. Let me think.... Ah, yes. It was... BORING! In the future, if they haven't done it yet, I advise you to stop scythe training lessons.

Let me skip that... Fine. Here's a sample of how boring it was.

Mr Storm: Now, kids, remember - do not ever use your scythes on an undefended animal, or an animal without training armor...

And that's the sample. We didn't even get any training because he spent the whole lesson talking about safety... I mean, who doesn't know that you shouldn't stab your scythe at some guy's eye? BORING. Anyways, back to my boring life...

Sky was late. Okay, not the real actual 'sky', but like my friend, Skyler. I was bored, so I pulled out my IPaw... and realized someone had texted me.


HailStones: Fang. We heard you were suitable jock material... But you were friends with that grey Outcast dog. We invite you to join the jocks.... But you must ditch her.
Fang923: But.... She's my best friend! And who are you anyways?!

BlazingFlame joined the chat.

Fang923: Who is that guy anyways? And I'm not ditching her!
BlazingFlame: We want the girl. If you don't meet us in the boys bathroom.... Your friend's life will become so much harder. You don't want that to happen, do you?
HailStones: Meet us as soon as possible, after lunch. Or else.

BlazingFlame left the chat
HailStones left the chat




I tried smashing tapping really hard at the screen to get them back on, but it didn't work... So there's only one thing to do....

Sky: Fang?
Me: :oops: What? Oh, Sky, you're here...

Okay, she took me by surprise... For like the first time....

Sky: Fang.... What are you doing on your IPaw?

Oh, no. I'm not telling her there might be some dogs who want be to ditch you and.... Oh, never mind. But I'm not telling her anyways.

Me: Nothing.....

She was silent for a while, like she was suspicious.... Did she notice what I - or the guys over there - were typing? In the future, you MUST have IPaw cameras or something. Then... She arrived.

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Snowy: Hello? Fang? *bats eyelashes* Did you have a good think about swapping friends?
Me: .... Don't think about it.
Sky: Yeah, don't think about it, Snowy.
Snowy: Go away.
Sky: In fact, it is our table, so you should go away.

Yup, logic. Then the bunny girl piped up.

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???: But we're Populars, and we can go anywhere we want!
Snowy: That's very true, Sunset.
Sunset: Please call me Sunny.

Wow, the first time I heard a 'Popular' say please. But they're still annoying me....

Me: Stop having a chat by our table. Sure, you girls are having a lot of fun, but could you sit at an empty table?
Snowy: Now, Fang. Think about leaving your annoying friend even more.

Did she know about the text thing? She did tell me to ditch Sky as well....

Sky: Just go.
Sunny: Come on, we can deal with these two later, Snowy.
Snowy: Yeah, the girl's a waste of my time. But... *winks at... me. Argh.* He isn't. We just have to wait for him to change his mind.
Sky: Like he will.

Does she know? She seems to know... Now what?

Anyways, after eating, I told Sky that I had to go to the bathroom and met two dogs.

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Me: So.... You must be HailStones and BlazingFlame?
White/Grey Guy: ..... I am Hail, one of the jocks. This is my little brother, Flame.... you decided to come.
Me: Well, I can't have you doing anything to Sky.
Brown Guy: Then listen to us. We must kidnap her....
Me: NO! How dare you -
Hail: She may get hurt - because of you - if you don't agree....
Me: .... Fine.

He told me the rest of the plan. I had to lure Sky to an empty room.... And let Flame and Hail do the rest..... I'm scared for Sky.... What should I do, book-that-is-definitely-not-a-diary-but-doesn't-have-a-name?
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Re: Secrets Revealed - The Hawk

Postby Streak » Mon May 11, 2015 12:44 am

OMG SECRETS ARE REVEALED!! And thank you for displaying some of our character's diaries<3

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Re: Secrets Revealed - The Hawk

Postby blackwolf22 » Thu May 14, 2015 4:57 am

awesome!
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Re: Secrets Revealed - The Hawk

Postby retroaqua » Sat May 16, 2015 10:46 pm

CreatureOfTheNight wrote:
OMG SECRETS ARE REVEALED!! And thank you for displaying some of our character's diaries<3

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I am happy too, but my friends water isnt there. Oh well!
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Re: Secrets Revealed - The Hawk

Postby 20lait1 » Sat May 16, 2015 10:50 pm

Aquadoglover wrote:
CreatureOfTheNight wrote:
OMG SECRETS ARE REVEALED!! And thank you for displaying some of our character's diaries<3

*marking*


I am happy too, but my friends water isnt there. Oh well!


Actually, it is. Just use the search function - it's there!
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Re: Secrets Revealed - The Hawk

Postby retroaqua » Sat May 16, 2015 10:57 pm

OOPS XD

I was on the kindle o-o

It was hard to read.. Now I'm on la computer, its A-Okay!
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