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~Links World~

Postby ownanimal » Fri Apr 17, 2015 12:12 am

Thanks to 20lait1 For giving me the idea of this
here is the link to her story: http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=2632065
This story is happening in the same world as skylars world (off the "this is not a diary, this is a hawk!" )

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Log 1: Ragdoll

ideas ideas ideas, they all come from somewhere, mine came from skylar,
she is, one of the patients im assessing
no, i dont "stalk" "random animals" as you would think
its a job, and i do it becasue otherwise, ,this world would be in ruins, but ill get to that later.
anyway, shes been writing a diary, she calls it her "hawk",
its laughable, cute, i might name this.. thing.. something too
well i guess you could say its a book, i mean its got paper and, well a cover and i sown it all together so..
i guess ill call it my ragdoll, cause i sown it (you know, casue you sow ragdolls together..)
oh yeah, ragdolls, I have a cat too, his name is charlie
its just a normal cat you know, but like a dog, it doesnt bark, but it can fetch things for me and
well, it does other stuff too but i dont really need to talk about that.
and about my patients, my job is to find people with powers, something out of the ordinary, and help them
I help them by keeping them from harm, but only when im the most necessary,
I cant just swoop in like a typical superhero every time someone needs a little help,
I can only help them if its absolutely necessary, life or death situation,
but if im not helping them with that, i will help them by actually meeting them,
I will help them harness their power to do good, so that they wont become like.. one of the others..
the others i talk about are the ones who use their powers to do bad things,
animals get hurt or lost and never come back,
and once they get to that point we have to contain them, by we i mean my.. associates,
well i'll talk about my associates in the next log, some are closer to friends (that word makes me cringe)
and some are closer to.. people i work with. I just need to get pictures of them,
and unlike skylars notebook, (hawk, whatever) I am actually getting these pictures for someone,
My name is link. I will not say my last name for.. purposes..
I know youre there, reading this, why are you following me,
did you really think i wouldnt notice?
do you really think I would carry on as normal, while you go through my stuff?
no no no, ive seen you, you leave scratches on everything you touch,
I dont see those as any threat, I have a cat, do you know how sharp the claws of a cat are?
im sure your pathetic little nails are no match for them.
so i will leave this note book, tell you about me, and i will repeat again
I dont find you as a threat
maybe you are just another patient, waiting to be cured of the curses of their powers
but if you do become a threat
i will always be one step ahead of you
I will find you
and you will wish that you were never born.
remember this
I will always, be a step ahead of you.

Link wrote over the last sentence over and over again till it was bold and the point was made clear before closing his book and looking out the window of his dorm room. He really did mean it, he was always a step ahead of people, it was just his thing. It was windy and the trees rustled. He walked toward his desk by fluttering curtains to get the pictures of his friends and other people to paste onto his notebook. His desk was messy, like his thoughts, he started pushing things onto the floor to find the pictures he was looking for when charlie jumped from the window onto the desk, the tree charlie climbed from started shaking furiously,
"WHOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA"
The sound bounced from the other dorms, making a long echo. Link stuck his head outside to see his friend, Alexi, hugging a tree about three metres up, looking down, he was what you would call well built, he had dreamy golden eyes, the ones that every girl fell for, he had curled horns like a goat, and was mostly grey with white. He wore a bone necklace with gold cuffs around his wrists and had some sort of dorsal fin. The strange thing was, neither of his parents had it, he was just a weird mutated thing he was.
"Could you like.. you know.. shut up"
"Link!! I knew that cat of yours would lead me to your dorm, you know I dont like heights, why did you choose such a high floor?"
"I didn't, The dorms are already chosen for you before you come"
Alexi crawled up the tree a little more before Leaping to the window sill, his claws just hanging on
" Do you need.. help.."
"Nah man, look at me!! Im totally capable of doing this, easy as easy easy easy.. easy.." Alexi smiled, showing all of his teeth, before one of his claws slipped. He looked nervously at his paws and pushed himself up, jumping onto the table, doing his macho pose before realising what he was standing on
"Dude, why do you keep everything messy, Don't you like being in a clean room? this place is worse of a pigsty than your old one"
Alexi jumped off the table onto the bunk bed, avoiding the mess of the ground and climbing to the top bunk.
"So Furford Academy huh.. This is a nice place.. And I can even stay here cause You have no roommate!!"
Link, completely avoiding this conversation, started pasting the pictures he found into his "ragdoll", he noticed his messy writing and his grammar mistakes but wasn't worried about the reader not being able to understand it.
" Whats that?"
"Its a Log for my patients"
"Cool, what are the pictures for?"
"Someone I'm expecting to meet soon"
"Huh.. ok then"

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Alexi- He's one of my closest associates, Golden eyes, very brave, only afraid of heights, Best swimmer i know, not because of his dorsal fin.. thing.. but just a skill he aquired when he was young. he's pretty smart, knows his stuff, normally lives in his "rock cave", doesn't have a girlfriend like you would expect, Most loyal person I know. he can control everything in his body from temperature to stopping his heart.

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Blair- She's Austin's girlfriend, she speaks very quietly,makes and sells dream catchers and dream bulbs and a whole lot of other dream stuff. She helped me reach my dream world.

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Austin- Blair's boyfriend, always happy to see me, likes reading and creating poison or whatever he creates, some weird liquidy stuff i dont know. he looks small in this picture but hes as big as me, those wings you see on him, he created those himself, they actually work and he can fly now, not the actual wings but the crystal things help. he is a mechanic and can build and fix most anything.

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Trinity- Best cook I know, owns a sweets shop called "Infinites" with some guy named Indra, you can tell how that name was made. never met indra, but trinity is very nice, she gives me free food sometimes, other than being food obsessive, shes the most normal animal I know.

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Eliza- One of my patients, haven't met her yet but I heard from austin baout her and got this photo. she is telekinetic and can lift herself to fly. I dont know much but that thing on the couch next to her looks.. strange.

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Scarlette- One of my first patients, I Like her a little she has had some hard times in her life, She can heal people and is invulnerable to any physical pain. she would be dangerous to lose control of because if she does, we would be unable to affect her in any way to stop her from doing bad things to animals.

And me?
I'm a really chill animal, I dont talk much unless necessarry, I tend to suddenly ask unexpected questions, I'm slim but not too skinny, I tend to know what people are thinking, its not a gift or anything, I was taught alot, im really smart and i lie when its necessary, or not. you wont see me smiling alot, i grin to make people feel uncomforatable cause i can, and sometimes a flash of a smile when imabout to do something.. I do karate with Alexi, I like watching movies. If you walk into my dorm you'll see me either watching a movie, or i wont be there at all. I tend to stare at people and try to figure out their problems, I try to enhance my "mind reading" skills sometimes, i cant actually read mind, i can just tell what people are thinking.. sort of.. when somethings up, I'll know. i have a sort of fifth sense, I know when something is about to happen, but i can never tell what it is, when the thought process of the thing that is going to happen goes through my brain, my eyes turn a foggy grey colour..
but anyway, Im starting to just say random stuff in this, i'll stop. this is my journal ragdoll. I must keep it with only the things I need to write.

NAILS HAVE BEEN TARGETTED

Link closed his book, and looked towards Alexi, he was already snoring, his chest rising and sinking, Link walked over to his bed on the bottom bunk, and turned on the TV. "The Avengers" was on, He had never watched it before so he watched that for the rest of the night, Link never had a opinion on a movie, just staring at a screen for a couple hours made him happy. Just like the animal watching through a security camera at the bottom of the school entrance, through the window of Link's room. The creature filed its nails to a point, sharp as a cats, and smirked
"Always one step ahead of me...huh.."


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Hi guys!!
what do you think? is this good?
I have absolute no idea what im doing right now but I know the whole plot of this part of the story
anyways, tell me about your opinion of this story in the comments or pm me!!
anyways, have a good night? (or day, or whatever :p)
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Re: ~Links World~

Postby 20lait1 » Fri Apr 17, 2015 10:06 am

It's awesome! I can't wait for the next one...
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Re: ~Links World~

Postby ownanimal » Sat Apr 18, 2015 1:55 am

Log 2: Skylar


Patient: Skylar Swiftrunner
Gender: Female
Type: Canine/dragon
Weapon of choice: sword and bow
Pets: none
Abilities: wind manipulation

Skylar is a normal looking dog, other than the fact that she looks like,
well sort of like a fennec fox with her ears, and she has wings,
unlike most animals she can actually fly with them,
She is also a very normal dog
not too unique, until She got struck by something,
It was night, and i was walking through a park,
The funny thing was, I was walking through the park cause i knew something was going to happen,
but I definitely did not expect what happened next.

Dusk was just ending, the clouds where still slightly orange from the setting sun.
I wore a hoodie and took of my glasses so if someone i knew saw me, they wouldnt be able to identify me.
Following the path to some park, my eyes flickered back and forth the trees,
I walked past a bench where some girl was sitting, she laughed and saw me,
I gave her the look of annoyance and concern before everything started looking a tone greyer,
opposite the bench was a tree, and some shifty looking animal with his hood over his face,
I snapped my head back towards the path and looked for something, anything out of ordinary,
the wind blew towards me and leaves started rushing behind me,
I turned around and saw the girl raise her paws in the air, wind making a tree shift its course from onto her to the side of the path,
the animal that had been standing next to that tree had its hood blown off too,
while the tree was in midair, the animal snarled and threw some sort of dust at the girls face,
immediately the girl was unconscious, sleeping powder.
the tree fell onto the ground next to the girl, just missing her head,
"The branch shouldv'e gotten her.."
I lept behing a boulder so the animal couldn't see me
the animal stood and stared towards me for a couple of seconds, then walked towards the girl.
it muttered a whole load of other gibberish but i couldnt hear from where i was.
I couldn't see what the animal looked like, my eyes made him her the animal seem blurred,
And my monotone eye sight couldn't identify its colour either.
it checked her belongings, checked her i paw and some sort of book, then walked off into the trees.
I ran towards the girl when the other animal was out of sight and checked her i paw
I couldnt unlock her i paw so i looked through the same book the animal looked through,
it seemed to be some sort of diary, she named it hawk,
I thought it was ridiculous at the time but now i have a journal with a equally ridiculous name so, I cant say much.
About half way down the page i found what i was looking for
her name was skylar swiftrunner, she is going to furford academy,lives in canineville..
I quickly skimmed through the pages before skylar started stirring, and ran back to the boulder.
I still hadn't figured out how she moved that branch, was it telekinesis?
no, telekinesis doesn't work like that.. the leaves, it was wind, she has wind powers
You can do many dangerous things with that, make typhoons, sand storms, tornados,
you can even blind someone,
and she thinks its just a cool little trick, she doesnt even make a big deal out of it,
but for now, its not too harmful.
I spent the rest of the night following skylar,she walked around the house for a bit,
I wasnt very sure what she was doing but it was very likely she was setting up pranks, she got to her house and tested her wind abilities for a while and then wrote in her note book.
then she went to sleep.
she wrote everything in that notebook, or her diary, that is,
and thats why I write in this now
but its also for you my long nailed friend
And now im already in furford academy, watching her from far away
Of course, I haven't started school yet, just living in the dorm for now,
I've been accepted, of course, but I just need to "settle in" apparently,
But thats ok, I'll watch animals for now.
PROJECT RULE THE WIND

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Link drew the rest of Skylar and faced Alexi, who was reading one of Link's Text books on the top bunk, and stood up
"Im going for a walk"
Alexi immediately threw the book down and jumped off the bed
"and i'm coming, my gosh its boring and quiet in here, why are there no parties or anything in these dorms, I mean thats how they are represented in movies and stuff right?"
"There are parties, you're just not invited"
"oh.."
Link opened the window and the curtains , Then shoved everything everything off his desk except for the lamp and his book, or as he would call it, "ragdoll". He pointed the lamp towards the book and left it open on the last page he wrote on.
"OK lets go, Im starving!! Lets eat something.. what do you want? I actually have a craving for chocolate right now, you know when you really really, you just really really really want chocolate?"
"..No.."
" well thats ok, we're still going to eat chocolate, lets go to Infinities and get some there!"
"ok.."

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Re: ~Links World~

Postby 20lait1 » Sat Apr 18, 2015 11:00 am

Wow! It's so cool that you combined a part of the Hawk into your, um, ragdoll, I guess? The sketch is beautiful. I couldn't stop admiring it. When I finally looked up, I was smiling the whole way till I was asked "Why are you smiling for no utter reason?" So then I stopped. Would you mind if I put this in the Hawk's Nest, Arts/Graphics page? If I find out how to, anyways. I can't wait to continue reading this!
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Re: ~Links World~

Postby ownanimal » Sat Apr 18, 2015 10:17 pm

Yeah sure! I'll send you the link or whatever ( < haha, get it? link? no? ok..)
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Re: ~Links World~

Postby ownanimal » Wed Apr 22, 2015 10:18 am

Log 3: Dreams


Nothing very Important happened with skylar today,
She just socialised with her friend and suddenly, they had powers too.
It didn't make any sense, these things just dont happen like that, its not meant to happen all at once,
One could shoot lighting, one could make flowers? one had water bending, one with nightmares becoming a reality,
And they all acted like it was completely normal, normal day, normal everything.
they all target one specific girl,
I havent found her given name but they all call her "big mac"
She is an angelic looking animal, halo and wings, gorgeous eyes,
its a shame her attitude ruined it all,
But thats not important, and there isn't much happening at the moment,
so im going to cut this log short, maybe right in it later,
I'll talk to you again.


Link closed his ragdoll, and grabbed his hoodie. Alexi wasn't there at that moment, Link imagined him flirting with some animals, charming them with his smile. He walked out the door, engaged in a short conversation with a cat which ended with the cat stomping off in a huff. Link walked towards the city, stopping at a book store and a material shop on the way, then knocked on a metal door.
"ONE MINUTE"
He stood in the doorway, listening to the sounds of traffic and birds, then footsteps. The door opened, revealing a slightly scruffy looking wolf. He was wearing gloves and holding some blueish liquid, safety goggles completing the look of 'science geek', He grinned when he saw that his guest was Link.
"Heyy buddy, come on in, you haven't been visiting that much, whats up?"
"Hi Austin, Ive been swapping schools again," Link walked past Austin "had to pack stuff for a while, this is for you."
Link tossed the book he got onto a bench by the stairs, Austin picking it up
" Aw cool! I've been wanting to read this for a while, never had the time to buy it though."
"I know."
"Theres some food on the counter if you want it, youre going to have to cut the fruits with the knife though"
"Thanks"
Link walked up the stairs, getting his next gift ready. At the top was a dog, she sat in a corner, and was painting something on a work bench. He walked towards her, and sat on a stool next to her. It was Blair, covered in paint as usual, she cooly looked over to link and continued with her work.
" Hello Link," She murmured " Haven't seen you for a while"
" Yes, didn't have the time"
" What do you need."
" I Need to meet Chet again, I moved"
" I need pur-"
" Here"
Link passed Blair the Royal purple fabric he got, and she instantly started her work, admiring the silky texture. She cut a 2cm Strip off the material and sowed it onto a giant ring, she opened one of the drawers in the work bench and got a jar filled with yarn, feathers, and beads. Link left the room, knowing that she'd be working for around the next fifteen minutes. Downstairs, Austin was already reading on a couch, he was still wearing his gloves, but replaced his goggles with glasses. Link stood by a window, looking at people walk up and down streets.
There was a knock on the door
Austin opened the door, there was a brown dog and sitting next to her was the grey creature that Link saw in that picture Austin sent, "Oh hi there Eliza!, come on in, this is Link I was talking to you about, Link Eliza, Eliza, Link. Oh and that guys name is Zirch"
The spines on the grey creature twitched, as he scurried onto Eliza's shoulder. Link held out his arm, and they shook paws, Link taking note of the gloves and netting reaching all the way up to her elbows.
"What's that for?"
"Oh, I suffered some really bad burns a couple years back, Still need bandages for hygiene reasons"
She makes an innocent smile and sticks her tongue out, Link making a straight face. They stood like this for a while, Link unamused, Eliza smiling, till Link finally gave in to the silence
"Ok,"
Link sat down and patted the seat next to him with a wry grin
"So you're telekinetic right?"
Eliza sat down and grabbed the creature off her shoulder, putting it onto her lap but then scrambled onto the counter above.
"Yeah"
" Could you show me?"
She hesitated, then nodded and stared at a knife on the counter, eyes turning light, and pointed her paw towards it, as she curled her fingers the knife rose, slowly twirling in the air. This feat lasted for a few seconds before the knife started to wobble in the air, alarming the grey creature, Her hand started shivering and the knife began spin rapidly, resulting in a blur of metal moving slowly towards her.
"Eliza, you can stop now"
her eyes remained blank, facing the still moving knife
"Eliza, stop"
"She can't link"
Link glanced back at Austin, who still sat on the couch, looking terrified.
Link Stared at Eliza and the knife, it was moving closer, closer, it was centimetres away from her face now.
He pushed Eliza off the stool, both landing on the ground, Eliza snapping out of her trance, and the knife scraping across Links arm before landing on the floor next to them, clattering. Eliza on her back eyed the knife and then back up at Link, who was staring into Eliza's eyes.
"Why did you not tell me this would happen"
"I didn't think it would this time.. It doesn't happen every time I use telekinesis"
she sat whimpering on the ground, feeling sorry for what she did, Link looked up at Blair, who stood at the bottom of the stairwell, she had been there a while, holding the newly made dream catcher.
"I'll meet up with you again on thursday"
Link said his thanks to Blair and Austin and brought the dream catcher back to his dorm, Waiting on the top bunk was Alexi.
"Hey Link where were you?"
"At Austins place"
"hey do you need a bandage for that?"
he motioned towards the gash on Link's forearm
"No."
Patient: Blair
Gender: Female
Type: Canine
Weapon of choice: none
Pets: Zirch
Abilities: Telekinesis

Average dog, probably holds a few mysteries, dog colored, a few freckles and patches here and there, wore gloves up to her elbows, eyes green, still don't know what happens of she lifts herself up and goes into trance, don't know when she gets into trances either,

Today she took a knife, the only dangerous object on the counter to use for telekinesis
Why? I don't know. But it' was a ridiculously idea, I know
Met her at Austin's place, also don't know why she was there
But I met her so, that's good,
Got a scratch on my arm from the knife dropping.
Got the dream catcher now, I can put it above my bed,
Nothing else to say,
FLAMES LIE

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Re: ~Links World~

Postby Toy Dragon » Mon Apr 27, 2015 12:44 am

Wow! The sketches are amazing! This is awesome!
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