"The Appocalypse" By, Beta and Sam

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"The Appocalypse" By, Beta and Sam

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Re: The Appocalypse By, Beta and Sam

Postby FruityPieQ » Wed Aug 21, 2013 8:34 am

INTRO:
This is just a random story I made about the appocalypse. You're welcome to read, and you may post if you want. Please do! And if you steal this, and I find out, I'll report you. Please enjoy!
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CONTENTS:
Chapter 1 - Just A Normal Day
Chapter 2 - The Earthquake
Chapter 3 - More Signs Of Death To Come
Chapter 4 - A Horrid Place
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Re: The Appocalypse By, Beta and Sam

Postby FruityPieQ » Wed Aug 21, 2013 8:34 am

Chapter 1: Just A Normal Day
~ My dog and I started down the long winding path into the forest. It was the place I favored going to. The only real place where I could be alone. I couldn't even be alone in my own house, let alone my room! That is why I come here.
~ My name is Kesed, and I'm 13 years old. I have blue hair and green eyes, and I go to an online school, and I don't like to be around people very much. I don't even want a boyfriend. I also only have one friend, and she's the only one I want or need - my dog, Ashy. Yep. Really.
~ Anyway, the day started off pretty normal. I had just argued with my mom and was now going to the place my dog and I loved to go to. Its the only place we like. We soon got to our little tree stump, and I opened the brown bag I'd been carrying. It contained our lunch. I pulled out some hot dogs and gave it to Ashy.
~ "Here you go, girl." I hand her the hot dogs and grab my own lunch out, after making sure she had them. Mine consisted of hot dogs as well, along with a can of pop. After setting my food on the stump, I pour some water into a bowl for Ashy. The sleek - furred german shepard laps it up happily. I pat her.
~ Looking up at the sky as I eat my hot dogs, I see something strange. A little white dot is floating around, and it seems to be in space, like, not right above me... but so far away.
~ I decided to ignore it and turned back to my hot dog. As I was eating, a sliver got stuck in my throat. It wasn't choking me, it just hurt. Very much. So I decided to cough, drink pop, continue eating, and puke. Nothing worked, so it would just have to stay there. Ashy looked at me and cocked her head, wondering what the hell I was doing. "What?" I said. She just turned back to her hot dogs.
~ I looked up again. The dot wasn't there anymore. So I dismissed the thought again, and we sat around doing nothing for awhile. Then we played fetch until dinner. Mom didn't care what I did, so long as I was back by dinner. Soap, we went back to the house.
~ We arrived just in time for dinner. Ben was setting the table. He's my brother. But he's also a total noob. Always in my diaries n' crap. Ashy went up to my room to sleep on my bed, as she always did at dinner time, and I went to help Ben set the table, because even though I hate him, Mom always expects me to help him with everything, even the things he can and should be doing himself.
~ "Whats up, Derp?" He asks. I hate that. Whenever he calls me that, I never respond.
~ We finished up the table and sat down, waiting for mom to bring the food over. Soon Dad came over. "Hey, Kesed, how's it goin'?" Dad liked me, at least. Mom was the boss, and she favored Ben, putting Ashy, Dad, and I down as omegas, basically.
~ "Pretty good," I say.
~ "Okay, here it is! Ben's favorite and mine - pork roast!" Mom says, putting the roast on the table.
~ "That looks delicious, Honey!" Dad says. Yet Mom acts like he hasn't spoken. He doesn't seem to relize, and if he does, he doesn't care. Or so it seems...
~ The hot dog chunk was still stuck in my throat, but I simply ate the pork, hoping it would push it down. Then the ground started to shake.
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Re: The Appocalypse By, Beta and Sam

Postby FruityPieQ » Wed Aug 21, 2013 8:35 am

Chapter 2: The Earthquake
~ I started to panick. What was happening?! An earthquake?! This was very bad, especially because I didn't know what to do in event of an earthquake.
~ "What do we do?!" Ben screams.
~ In a panic, I call Ashy. "Ashy! Ashy, come here, girl!" Ashy doesn't come. Instead, I hear a whimper. So I stupidly run up the stairs.
~ "Kesed! Come back!!!" I hear dad cry.
~ "We don't need her! Let's just get out!" Mom yells. She and Ben run out the front door, and Dad follows me. "Kesed!"
~ "I'm not leaving without Ashy!" I continue to my room, but can't find Ashy anywhere. "Ashy! Where are you, girl?!" I hear a whimper, and see my bookshelf has fallen. I try to lift it, but can't. Dad comes over and lifts it for me, and Ashy runs out from under it. "Now let's go!" He says, and the three of us run down the stairs and out the back door, seeing as it's closer than the front.
~ Dad takes us way back, and to the middle of the street where there is nothing. A big crack forms in the ground, right near Ashy. She yelps, then stands closer to me. I pick her up. In the distance, I can see Ben and Mom running away, and a crack opens up in front of Mom. She doesn't see it in time...
~ Ben now looks panicked. He didn't know what to do, and almost didn't see the tree that was about to smash him. He jumps out of the way just in time. "Ben! Over here!" Dad calls. Ben hears and runs over to us.
~ I randomly notice that the white orb I saw in the sky earlier was there again, and I wondered what the hell it was. All around us, buildings were falling, along with telephone poles and trees. Soon there was so much dust, you couldn't see the sky. Then, as suddenly as it came, it stopped.
~ After a moment of recovering from shock, Dad said, "Well... I uh... suppose we could sort through and see if we have anything of value left... Wait for help..."
~ "Dad, Mom just died! And you only care about items!" Ben screams. He runs off. Dad looks down at me and Ashy. "I'd better follow him. You and Ashy can start without us." Turning to the direction of where Ben had left, he ran after him, calling, "Ben! Ben, come back!" Which only made Ben go faster.
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Re: The Appocalypse By, Beta and Sam

Postby FruityPieQ » Wed Aug 21, 2013 8:36 am

Chapter 3: More Signs Of Death To Come
~ When Dad got back, I saw he convinced Ben to come back, too. I sorted through the rubble of my room, Ben did his, and Dad did the whole rest of the house.
~ I could only find my belt, my favorite toy dog (it looked like Ashy), and my red Loom Band bracelets I had made before. I put them on and found Dad. All he could find were two bows, some arrows, a gun, a back pack, some rice, and some money they had saved in case of emergency. There was about $2,000.00 there. When Ben came over, I saw that all he had found was a family picture and a football.
~ "Here, kids, let me put those things in this pack." The back was quite huge. I handed over the belt (I was wearing a different one currently) and the toy dog. Ben wouldn't give Dad any of his stuff. Dad looked at Ben longingly, and then put in the pistol, the rice, the money, the arrows, and the bows. The pack was about as tall as Ashy and as wide as half the size of a bed.
~ Help never arrived. The whole state of California was ruined by that vicious earthquake. No cars. No houses. No bridges. Nothing. This went on for two weeks. We couldn't come up with any plans at all for what we should do... But a neighbor soon came up with one.
~ He stood upon a giant dirt mound and spoke. "People!" He screamed. "Help is not coming!" Alot of people gasped. An elderly woman said, "How can you be so sure, Sonny?"
~ "Because. They would have been here by now." It was the truth, and we all knew it.
~ "But what should we do?" I said.
~ "Young lady, me and my family are going to Oregon. We suggust you all do the same. Oregon, Nevada, Arizona, someplace that's not here. All of you! Get! Find help in another state! GO!"
~ I looked at Dad. "Dad...?"
~ Dad stepped forward. "He's right. We have to get out of here! Something else could happen, and look how badly California is damaged!!!!" The ground shook a little. This scared alot of us. Dad turned to Ben and me. "We're at the border of California, closest to Nevada. That's where we're headed."
~ He started off, and we followed. "C'mon, Ashy."
~ Soon, a man ran up to where our neighbor was standing. "California is sinking!!!! California is sinking!!!!!!" He screamed. "I saw it! I was there! I barely escaped! Get out of California! Go righ-" He stops mid-sentance. He coughs alot, and falls down. All of us gather. A man who claims to be a doctor is b him. "He's dead." He says. We all gasp.
~ "Let's go." Dad says. Now we're on our way for real. On our way to Nevada. For real this time.
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Re: The Appocalypse By, Beta and Sam

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Chapter 4 - A Horrid Place
~ We arrived in Nevada about four days later. We didn't even get to stay there long before a horrible thing happened. But that is yet to come. First, let me tell you what happened when we got there.
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