.:|ηєw єαятн|:. (chapter 4 up)

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Re: .:|ηєw єαятн|:. (chapter 2 up)

Postby AshtonLAT » Tue Feb 14, 2012 1:23 am

Wow, chapter two really made me want to read more, this is a really good story! You're a really talented writer!
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~Checkmate- the death of your king ends the game~
I'm free from time
I've lost my mind
Goodbye now
Don't wave to me


If you believe in death,
you're certain to die.
If you believe in love,
you're always alive <3
The roses are red
Violets are blue
The petals
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like tears
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Re: .:|ηєw єαятн|:. (chapter 2 up)

Postby Charias » Tue Feb 14, 2012 8:51 am

Thanks!!! Me happy :D
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Re: .:|ηєw єαятн|:. (chapter 2 up)

Postby Ourpawprints » Tue Feb 14, 2012 9:02 am

luv it :D
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"You shout it out,
But I can't hear a word you say
I'm talking loud not saying much
I'm criticized but all your bullets ricochet
You shoot me down, but I get up

I'm bulletproof, nothing to lose
Fire away, fire away
Ricochet, you take your aim
Fire away, fire away
You shoot me down but I won't fall
I am titanium"
-David Guetta Titanium

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Re: .:|ηєw єαятн|:. (chapter 2 up)

Postby ✖HESTIA » Tue Feb 14, 2012 1:30 pm

Keep writing. Its an awesome story so far.
Hello guys, I have decided to quit chicken smoothie. I just don't have any time for it anymore. I'm sorry.
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Re: .:|ηєw єαятн|:. (chapter 2 up)

Postby Charias » Tue Feb 14, 2012 1:32 pm

Thanks everyone! I will try to write more either today or tomorrow!
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Re: .:|ηєw єαятн|:. (chapter 3 up)

Postby Charias » Thu Feb 16, 2012 12:59 am

^^Bumpy^^
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Re: .:|ηєw єαятн|:. (chapter 3 up)

Postby Ourpawprints » Thu Feb 16, 2012 9:21 am

more?
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"You shout it out,
But I can't hear a word you say
I'm talking loud not saying much
I'm criticized but all your bullets ricochet
You shoot me down, but I get up

I'm bulletproof, nothing to lose
Fire away, fire away
Ricochet, you take your aim
Fire away, fire away
You shoot me down but I won't fall
I am titanium"
-David Guetta Titanium

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Re: .:|ηєw єαятн|:. (chapter 3 up)

Postby Charias » Thu Feb 16, 2012 12:04 pm

ourpawprints wrote:more?

Tomorrow, I'm not in a writing mood today :?
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Re: .:|ηєw єαятн|:. (chapter 3 up)

Postby Charias » Thu Feb 16, 2012 2:46 pm

^^Bumpy^^
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Re: .:|ηєw єαятн|:. (chapter 3 up)

Postby Charias » Sat Feb 18, 2012 7:54 am

^^Bumpy^^
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