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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby BrandNewMelody » Wed Apr 15, 2015 8:40 am

Aye :)
Just asking- when you make the next hawk, or the one after, have charley be kinda upset/sad about not being able to dance with skylar for me?
If not I don't mind, just asking :3
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Wed Apr 15, 2015 7:53 pm

wolfiegirl8679 wrote:Oh...wow! CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!!! And...um...what about Creek? Is she...like...never to be heard from again? I now, nag here, but she hasnt been in the chapters recently...


Oh, really? *rereads it* Oh no, you're right! I'll get her in the next post, I hope, though it might take a while....

mono-MONOkuma wrote:
( If you're still accepting, if not..Sorry! )
I'm attending Furford Academy!
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Name:Alicia ( Call her Ace )
Gender:Female
Personality:Alicia is generally upbeat, and likes to have fun. But, if she's feeling lazy enough, she'll stay in her dorm, and sit on her laptop.
Hobbies:Gaming, sitting on the internet, eating.
Group:No, not really.
Is he/she a friend of Skyler?Yup.
Others:Nope.


SassyPricklyPear wrote:
I'm attending Furford Academy!
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Name: "Hannah. Han for short, nothing more nothing less."
Gender: "Well, is it that hard? Female. "
Personality: A sarcastic, witty and intelligent girl. Although she is pretty kind, she has a habit of rolling her eyes and mucking about. She tries not to hurt anyone's feelings and is a little shy at first, but if someone gets on her nerves, she can snap within a second and nearly hack their head off with her 'lucky' scythe.
Hobbies: Carrying her 'lucky' scythe and doodling in a notebook (the reason why she has so many - nearly all of them are already filled with drawings).
Group: She doesn't really belong to any group. She just hangs alone a lot of the time, doodling, therefore she might be considered one of the emo's.
Is he/she a friend of Skyler? Kind of. However, she doesn't really class anyone as friends, just allies and enemies.
Others: She is partially crushing on Alexander. If she were to ever join a chatroom, her name would most likely be HanDoodles13.



((Well, I dun no if you still want more charries, I have read the posts, but out of 15 on one of the pages it said there were about 12, so hopefully still accepting? Thanks so much if yeah.))


Accepted! And the forms are now closed for the moment.

Aijima Cecil wrote:Aye :)
Just asking- when you make the next hawk, or the one after, have charley be kinda upset/sad about not being able to dance with skylar for me?
If not I don't mind, just asking :3


That can happen, but it'll have to wait until Skyler's transformed back, if it's fine with you.
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Thu Apr 16, 2015 12:38 am

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Dear Hawk,

I found out there were more was one more apprentice. Ugh. Okay, let's see.... I'm going to make a list. And include some more pictures. It's a wonder I still have my supply of photos.

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  • Skypaw = Me (Light grey she-cat, blue eyes)
  • Tigerpaw = Tigren (Dark brown tabby, green eyes)
  • Stormpaw = Fang (Dark grey tom, amber eyes)
  • Rainpaw = Riptide (Grey tom, blue eyes)
  • Sorrelpaw = Kolli (Ginger and white she-cat, blue eyes)
  • Sparrowpaw = Xander (Brown tom, green eyes)
  • Snowpaw = Snowy (White she-cat, blue eyes
  • Brookpaw = Creek (White she-cat with grey paws, blue eyes)
  • Sunpaw = Sunny (Golden tabby she-cat, green eyes)


Okay, that is a lot of... apprentices, I think? So anyways, my mentor, Briarstripe, brought me out to hunt. It was so hard! When I tried to do that hunting stalk thing, I couldn't get my rump in the right spot, so every time I jumped I did a faceplant. Finally, I caught a mouse, while Tigerpaw caught a.... squirrel and a mouse thing... a vole. Whatever. So it turns out I am probably the worst hunter in the Clan. I hate hunting. Then we have afternoon... sorry, sun-high patrol after eating. I was just staring at my mouse until an apprentice padded up to me. Creek Brookpaw.

Brookpaw: You're... Skypaw, right? Why aren't you eating?
Me: .... Mice are weird.
Brookpaw: But you've eaten it before, haven't you?
Me: No, not when I was a dog, anyways.
Brookpaw: A dog? Why would you want to be a dog?
Me: ..... Never mind.
???: BROOKPAW! WE HAVE TO GO ON A SUN-HIGH PATROL ON THE WINDCLAN BORDER!
Brookpaw: *sighs* Yes, Snowpaw. *looks up* Well, I hope you enjoy your mouse. See you. *bounds off*
Me: .... *takes one bite of the mouse*

Mice are okay, I suppose.... Well, it is kind of juicy.... Wait - Why am I thinking this? DOGS DON'T DRINK BLOOD! Whatever... I have to go now. I'll write later, maybe at night....

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Now I think I hate patrols more than hunting. And it took like, forever. In the... patrol, there's me (duh) and Briarstripe (duh), and there's Tigerpaw and Lilyclaw.... and someone called Lionfang, a ginger tom with a blue eye. He's got Xavier's sarcastic humor and still got the habit of calling everyone dude or bro. Even when he's a cat. Oh yeah, did I mention he only has one eye? Hmm.... Like that character, Darkheart, right? No, that can't be right.... Lightheart? I know! Brightheart! Anyways, the patrol was dead boring. Now I think I have a patch of ripped out fur somewhere here, like I'm bald.... and I'm caked with dirt. Ugh. Anyways, everyone's out there in the clearing eating while I'm sitting around staring at a squirrel and writing. I don't even know how these paws can grip a pen. Oh, Stormpaw and Brookpaw's coming this way. I better stick you away before they see me, a cat, writing in a diary Hawk.

Okay, so they were quite nice to me....

Stormpaw: Hey, Skypaw! I'm Stormpaw! Maybe you want to join in our feast?
Me: .....
Brookpaw: Come on, Skypaw! You seem to be all staring into Silverpelt and stuff, you know, like not talking.
Me: ..... Hello...
Stormpaw: Come on! Bring the squirrel with you - we can share! *drags me off*
Me: Wait! I didn't bring the squirrel!
Probably the whole Clan: :shock: *stares*
Me: Just ignore me....
Brookpaw: *picks up squirrel and brings it along*

So Stormpaw let go of my tail under a tree. There was.... I think.... Tigerpaw, Rainpaw, Sorrelpaw, me, Stormpaw and Brookpaw, of course.... and.... Sparrowpaw.... *blushes* No, I don't like him! No I don't like him I don't I don't I don't I don't I don't I don't I don't... Ugh... My paw's tired.... Anyways, we had like some squirrels, mice, voles... and sparrows. :| Anyways, we just ate and chatted until we heard Snowy Snowpaw scream "COME BACK HERE, BROOKPAW!" So loudly that the whole Clan except for her and Sunny Sunpaw stared at her like this :shock:

Stormpaw looked kinda sad to see her go.... I don't know why. Whatever. We ate the rest in silence - Snowpaw and Sunpaw were like so loud! How the Clan cats would call them... catbrained? Dogbrained? No, mousebrain. In fact, I don't think there's one for it. Anyways, everyone's sleeping now except for the guards... and me, of course. Duh. Okay, let me get a closer look at the guards... Oh. They remind me of these two:

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Ink and Charley. I think I heard their names... Brightstorm, was it? The cream one with black markings - that's Ink, I guess. And Charley... Cloudpelt, was it? The white tom with black pawtips, I think, and blue eyes. Okay. I can't let them see me here.... So, let me think.

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The deputy, Hailfoot. He's all creepy and staring like Link... Darkish grey speckled with white, blue eyes. Now, who am I missing? I chatted with Jewel and Tobias Heathercloud and Eaglewhisker today.

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They've showed me some of their friends - Cherrytail, with these really big fox-like ears and tail - so much like Monica. And Shadefoot, the mysterious black she-cat. Maggie for sure. Now, who am I missing... There's that flirty dog cat Jackson - a light brown tom with green eyes - his name was Hareleap, was it? And Simon - the brown one with green eyes - Shrewnose, was it? When he looks at Ink Brightstorm, he gets those lovey dovey eyes.

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Hmm.... Let me see... I remember something from Furford - I sneaked a peek at those forms and stuff... There's a girl called Alicia Ace, and the form says she's quite upbeat, isn't she? Hmm.... Then that must be the light brown one - Robinclaw, was it? No, it was Robinfoot.... I've seen her around, I guess. And Hannah Han.... Must be the black she-cat with green eyes. Nightstorm, was it? She just became a warrior, if I heard correctly from those grumbling elders. She nearly sliced their fur off, I hear, because they told her that she wasn't working fast enough.... Whatever.

I hope I find Shadowheart soon - maybe Soulstealer if he can help. Then when I'm a dog again, I'll rip him to shreds. But first, I have to get back to my nest. It seems as if Nightstorm's giving Xander Sparrowpaw the look too once in a while... If she dares take my crush, I'll claw her fur off. Okay, now I'm talking like a cat. I'll get back to the nest now. See you tomorrow, Hawk. I hope I'll get out of this place soon.
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby LostFoxInTheStorm » Thu Apr 16, 2015 2:31 am

Oh my gosh, Hannah's cat personality is better than I could imagine.... She would totally try to rip the pelt off elders XD
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby Alnitak » Thu Apr 16, 2015 2:34 am

        I literally never even thought about what Xavier's warrior name would be but Lionfang fits super well actually. With his lion-like appearance as a dog and those freaky teeth.
        Well. You certainly have a better imagination than me, heh.

        Also, if you notice some minor change to Xavier's appearance, that's just me revising his appearance because right now his hair's bothering me and I don't know what to do about it, but i'm working on it. No worries. owo I was thinking one of the shark wigs but I thought that might be too feminine. Oh well. His dressup is wip right now. ouo

        I'm actually enjoying this little crossover between the Hawk and the Warriors series. It's very good - keep up the good work. ouo
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby BrandNewMelody » Thu Apr 16, 2015 8:43 am

Oooh! So exite!
Getting very interesting by the second! <3
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby pinkgeneguy » Thu Apr 16, 2015 8:48 am

This is totally awesome!!! Can't wait for more!








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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby blackwolf22 » Fri Apr 17, 2015 10:37 am

OMG read the hawk and was helpless with laughter for some bits but am waiting for the next hawk in agony since the cliffhanger
please next hawk soon or I will explode
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby BrandNewMelody » Fri Apr 17, 2015 11:02 am

SQUEE! Ugh I can't wait any longer!
I am so inpatient XP
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby prixie » Sat Apr 18, 2015 9:44 am

need next entry... dying =,=
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