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Re: Writer's Branch

Postby rain, » Tue Mar 13, 2018 3:55 am

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Re: Writer's Branch

Postby Ranger of the North » Wed Mar 14, 2018 8:03 pm

Welcome ! C:


Hey guys, I've updated my short-story thread! c:

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Re: Writer's Branch

Postby TheSongOfTheStars » Sun Mar 18, 2018 9:00 am

Could I have some critique on this? It's some dialogue between the villain ananother semi-antagonist and I really wanted it to be tense but I'm not sure if I really nailed it?

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Re: Writer's Branch

Postby Ranger of the North » Tue Mar 20, 2018 8:46 pm

TheSongOfTheStars wrote:Could I have some critique on this? It's some dialogue between the villain ananother semi-antagonist and I really wanted it to be tense but I'm not sure if I really nailed it?
I can have a look soon c:


Hey guys! I've written a short thing I'm pretty pleased with :D It's on Chicken Smoothie here, google-docs for if you want to comment on something in particular here, and Wattpad here! :D
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Re: Writer's Branch

Postby Ranger of the North » Thu Mar 22, 2018 9:10 pm

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Re: Writer's Branch

Postby momincharge » Thu Mar 22, 2018 11:19 pm

    @ranger of the north i'll be sure to check it out !!

    i'm going thru writers block atm but i've
    been using wattpad to write books and
    forgot about my thing here whoops-
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Re: Writer's Branch

Postby Ranger of the North » Fri Mar 23, 2018 8:36 am

arisu. wrote:
    @ranger of the north i'll be sure to check it out !!
Sounds good, thanks! :D

arisu. wrote:
    i'm going thru writers block atm but i've
    been using wattpad to write books and
    forgot about my thing here whoops-
Oh no! Hopefully you can get your inspiration/motivation back soon C:
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Re: Writer's Branch

Postby Ranger of the North » Fri Mar 23, 2018 12:57 pm

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Re: Writer's Branch

Postby sophiebybophie » Fri Mar 23, 2018 9:59 pm

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What is your favorite genre? I love adventure, friendship, and action!

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Extra information about you (optional): I love writing so much! I've stated many stories but I've never finished any yet,
finishing one of my stories is a major goal I'm shooting for~!!!
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Re: Writer's Branch

Postby Ranger of the North » Fri Mar 23, 2018 10:26 pm

Welcome along! :D
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