by cyrevan » Sun Oct 28, 2018 5:59 am
The winner is...
Ambrosia-Saffron!
I love your story, and especially the fact that it hints at future development between the two characters! I really like the subtle worldbuilding, particularly the part about the twelve gods, and your story took a unique turn that I really enjoyed! I know this kalon will be in good hands with you. Enjoy!! <3
And, of course, compliments for everyone else!!
@Yuroshi - I like how your piece demonstrates the characters personality, and how you incorporated emotions into it.
@Lorne-Purnima - This is such a cute idea and I love how you developed the character with your use of dialogue and inner thoughts.
@L the JackAce - That's a really nice concept, he sounds like someone I'd really look up to!
@knifekind - That idea is really unique, love the friendly ghost idea!
@doux - Your description of her is really a well rounded character, I love that she's a hopeless romantic!