Fire-of-Shadows wrote:I want to join the resistance!
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Welcome! And haha, yes, I'm surprised there really wasn't a Sonic club at all at first--well, an
active one.
I have to say, I almost forgot about this club entirely, mostly due to finals and getting into summer. Sorry for not responding, I've just grown a bit lazy lately when it comes to replying to things, even though I know that I should.
@Rocket ExecutiveThat roleplay sounds really fun, I like the idea of it! I think I'd like to see it more as a story plot, but It'd also be fun to see what everyone thinks of each of the emerald's personalities. If there were to be a leader of the group of emeralds, It'd definitely have to be green...mostly because it's either the first or last emerald they usually find, and since it's kinda the signature one by now.
@ZebrachuSorry for never replying to this, even though I read through it, heh. I like the plot! Infinite, despite me disliking his backstory, needs a bit more love nowadays. I like that Sonic is the only one to help, not from a story standpoint, but in acknowledgement of the character's personality. Infinite hadn't done anything too drastic to any of his friends, so, naturally as you stated, he'd be willing to help.
The only bits of criticism I'd give is capitalization, which I'm sure you already took note of. I love how you write, honestly. An example is "He did remember those 6, horrible, horrible months. vividly." I like the emotion placed in it that the read can conjure up. I also love the casual conversation between Sonic and Infinite, it just seems well, natural, in a way. It is kinda funny when you think back at how many times Sonic's own friends tried to kill him, often more than his enemies. Also, I don't think it's all that shippy, so don't worry...it seems more platonic or friendly--that's just how Sonic's character is. Anyways, it's really good, I don't have much else to say.