Re: Viscet #2648

Postby ~Teya~ » Mon Jul 23, 2018 6:19 pm

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~Prophecy~ -- Poor Oceana, she just wanted someone to play with. But she did end up getting her wish in the end! cx Sadly though, your form was just so short, I didn't get much feel for Oceana besides the obvious. If you would've put more effort into your form, you could have had a better chance at winning. ^^

Guardian Angel Wolf -- Seafoam sounds like a lovely viscet, and I really think it was a missed opportunity having the form so short. I would have loved to hear about her adventures with her little friend, or even just the two reminiscing about their parents they had both lost. I hope you can do more with them someday for another tryout. :)

And the winner isss... xostef202 !

I really adored your form! I loved how you added in pictures of sea creatures Ahti actually gets to see on a day to day basis, and TBH, I really like the name Ahti, definitely my favorite of all the names. Some criticism I could give you though is, you never used comas (,) which was a bit distracting. You also didn't properly use "their" (because you should have used "there") more than once. But all in all, your form was beyond a doubt the best one! And I'm happy to see you taking Ahti home, I know you'll take good care of him. ^o^
I'll go ahead and add you to the drawing and update my first post ASAP!
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Re: Viscet #2648

Postby Stitch~ » Tue Jul 24, 2018 2:09 am

Thank you! I love him so much already and I think I already have a mate for him! On my writing, yes I do struggle with it quite a bit. Thank you for the advise though!
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Re: Viscet #2648

Postby ~Teya~ » Tue Jul 24, 2018 12:31 pm

xostef202 wrote:Thank you! I love him so much already and I think I already have a mate for him! On my writing, yes I do struggle with it quite a bit. Thank you for the advise though!

No problem! My writing used to be the absolute worst, but others helped me through it. I'm sure you'll be a great writer someday, if you just keep trying :)
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Re: Viscet #2648

Postby magpiemochi. » Mon Jun 05, 2023 6:25 am

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