[Oshawott8888]

Soo I haven't drawn in forever haha
i tried
i know it's not very good

bless KodiakCentral for helping me and teaching me to art hahah


critiques are appreciated! I'm trying to get better haha
any help is appreciated :'>


i used a mouse oop

[trickycharm]

yES birB

[Coco Bunny]

Ahh, very cute!

The wing is quite awkward - it seems to just cut off and merge into the body? I'd recommend making the body and wing more distinct from eachother. You should work a little on the beak as well, it seems too rounded and flat for the bird.

Either way, this is adorable! Well done~
Also, legs are very hard to draw for birds I find, so you did a great job with that!

[Oshawott8888]

yES birB

Ahh, very cute!

The wing is quite awkward - it seems to just cut off and merge into the body? I'd recommend making the body and wing more distinct from eachother. You should work a little on the beak as well, it seems too rounded and flat for the bird.

Either way, this is adorable! Well done~
Also, legs are very hard to draw for birds I find, so you did a great job with that!

thank you!

ahah yes i noticed that, i'll be less lazy and change it next time lol

[charizard2002]

This is very good stuff here. It's perfectly fine. Great flow, the way the bird is lifting it's left leg it's like we're catching a glimpse of it a split a second before it flies away. The balance is perfect in all areas, good centralization, the slight tilt of its head gives it good character. Don't change a thing please as of my post. It's dang near perfect.

[Oshawott8888]

This is very good stuff here. It's perfectly fine. Great flow, the way the bird is lifting it's left leg it's like we're catching a glimpse of it a split a second before it flies away. The balance is perfect in all areas, good centralization, the slight tilt of its head gives it good character. Don't change a thing please as of my post. It's dang near perfect.

aaaaah thank you so much <333
i really appreciate your kind words ^-^