[obsceneSymphony]

How do you like her? I think I got the markings right, but I'm not sure.

Back legs ref

Crits are always appreciated, but please don't be too harsh.

You may not see it but I edited a bit :3

[TakeMeAway]

I like it but i dont think its quite intermediate.

[obsceneSymphony]

What is the point of just saying something isn't quite intermediate? Give freaking crit, how else will the artist improve to intermediate. Also, *it's.
Don't get all pissed at my snappy reply, see sig.

[Emma Saige]

Very nice! I realy like how you did the fur, The only thing I could suggest is to maybe work on the anatomy a little more, It looks a litle long, and the bit whare the hed meets the neck, is a little stout

[TakeMeAway]

Jeez i am not i was just trying to help you. That is before someone flays you alive for putting it in intermediate because thety think it should not be there. TRUST me they do it. At least I didnt.

[TakeMeAway]

Plus i said it was almost. I like how you did the paw and eye, just lenghtn the belly fur some.

[BengalFanatic]

It's nice, but as Tripleaaa said, I don't think it is quite to the intermediate point.

The color is beautiful and the fur is quite nice, but the dog itself is a bit out of proportion.

His neck needs to be longer, and his torso needs to be shortened. You may want to give his legs a more relaxed look, so he isn't so stiff. His tail is great but you may want to make it flow, and attatch better into the body.

I think his ears could be set farther back on his head, and his jaw bone could be more defined, but other than that is head is pretty nice. ;D

You may want to give him some back bone, and shoulder blades, and make his rump have more form, and give him some toes.

His eyes have a feline look to them, but his eye style is up to you.

Over all you did a nice job. Hope this helped you as you were looking for a constructive critique.

[Hanoverian]

I really do love this piece, and you are very near the intermediate level. But if you'd like, I can give some tips. :3

-The body is a tad long, but if you thickened him out a bit he would be pretty much evened out.

-I love how you did the fur details, but adding some muscle definition and more distinctive shoulders and rump could make it look more realistic. Also, the back should be slightly 'curved', not ruler-straight.

-For the legs, try to make them have a more natural, relaxed bend to them, with muscle definition. A dog's legs actually have quite a bit of detail!

-For the paws, they need to be a bit more... flat, you could say? I mean like more on the ground, or level. Adding some toes would be a nice touch!

-The tail is overall very pretty, but lowering it a small bit and attaching it completely to the body would make it look even better.

-The head is my favorite part on this piece, you got the snout down very well, something I can never do. But adding some more muscle and bone definition to the face would be nice, especially with the cheek bone and eyes. The ears could also go back a little further.

Great job overall, I'd love to see more art from you!

[obsceneSymphony]

Thanks for the crit, guys! I'm not sure where to add muscle definition, though.