- can people give me tips on how much I need to fix?
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help pls by sashiyaki
| Artist | sashiyaki [gallery] |
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help pls
by sashiyaki » Tue Sep 20, 2016 12:48 pm
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Re: help pls
by metonymy » Tue Sep 20, 2016 1:05 pm
what are you looking on improving? do you have any specific concerns?
i could definitely red-line for you but at this point it'd be nitpicking little things. i think you're doing pretty well here! :>
i could definitely red-line for you but at this point it'd be nitpicking little things. i think you're doing pretty well here! :>
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Re: help pls
by sashiyaki » Tue Sep 20, 2016 2:13 pm
metonymy wrote:what are you looking on improving? do you have any specific concerns?
i could definitely red-line for you but at this point it'd be nitpicking little things. i think you're doing pretty well here! :>
- like the facial structure, c:
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Re: help pls
by funnycarnival » Tue Sep 20, 2016 2:15 pm
I don't know if it's just the art style, but try rounding the face a bit more? Like give him a duller chin
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Re: help pls
by sashiyaki » Tue Sep 20, 2016 2:17 pm
Zoom wrote:I don't know if it's just the art style, but try rounding the face a bit more? Like give him a duller chin
- I'll definitely try that tomorrow! Thanks. <3
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Re: help pls
by metonymy » Tue Sep 20, 2016 2:24 pm
ah ok, that makes sense.
what sort of facial features are you shooting for? strong cheekbones, soft jaw, heavy brow...? i realize this seems nitpicky but the more info the better i can try and help. ^^;
what sort of facial features are you shooting for? strong cheekbones, soft jaw, heavy brow...? i realize this seems nitpicky but the more info the better i can try and help. ^^;
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Re: help pls
by i'm so sorry... » Sun Oct 16, 2016 4:05 pm
- SENPAI IS HERE
probably quitting
my sweetest love, my holiest angel.
don't quit after me.
it was just a decision that came up in my mind,
while you were ignoring me,
while i was alone in work.
and i think i might go along with it.
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my sweetest love, my holiest angel.
don't quit after me.
it was just a decision that came up in my mind,
while you were ignoring me,
while i was alone in work.
and i think i might go along with it.
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Re: help pls
by sashiyaki » Sun Oct 16, 2016 4:17 pm
NO
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Re: help pls
by i'm so sorry... » Sun Oct 16, 2016 4:19 pm
- YES
probably quitting
my sweetest love, my holiest angel.
don't quit after me.
it was just a decision that came up in my mind,
while you were ignoring me,
while i was alone in work.
and i think i might go along with it.
-a
my sweetest love, my holiest angel.
don't quit after me.
it was just a decision that came up in my mind,
while you were ignoring me,
while i was alone in work.
and i think i might go along with it.
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Re: help pls
by sashiyaki » Sun Oct 16, 2016 4:31 pm
n u
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