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JBD #683- Please Critique! by Wlyrout

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JBD #683- Please Critique!

Postby Wlyrout » Tue Mar 25, 2014 12:55 pm

I wanted critique on these lines before I colored and shaded. Anyone?
I hope that this is Intermediate worthy, but my art has come a long way and so I feel a little more confident posting here now.
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Re: JBD #683- Please Critique!

Postby sweetiewheatie » Tue Mar 25, 2014 1:39 pm

This is gorgeous! Maybe try to taper a little bit, it adds more depth.
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Re: JBD #683- Please Critique!

Postby ghostvvinz » Tue Apr 29, 2014 12:47 am

Maybe make the head a bit smaller and the paws a bit bigger.
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