[~twistedmetal~]

this is my entry. i will probably make another one later if there is anything i need to change please just tell me

edit: there you go. sorry if this is not to your liking

[Catastrophic]

Good points-
nice mane
nice horns

You could improve by-
don't think this is a real horse colour therefore brakes rules and colour rules
looks a little similar to another entry.

[~twistedmetal~]

oh ok :3 sorry about that, i haven't really had a look at the other entries i will fix it up now

[Catastrophic]

still this is not a real horse colour I'm sorry about this just trying to help it must be a real horse colour with markings that could be found on a real horse I'm just trying to help you out so if you read the front page it goes into more depth about colours.

[Catastrophic]

your going to hate me but it's clearly stated they can not come in apploosa just read the front page.