[Escap3TheDistance]

This was my first one i have colored on the Oekaki EVER and i know this may sound vain but I am pretty proud of the job I did!!

The grey one is Lightning and the palomino is Luna.

Also i am very eager to know what you guys think or suggestions that may help me edit better!!! So don't hold yourself back let me what you think!!

[Amanda]

Looks good to me I really like the blending on Lightning's legs.

As far as advice goes, I don't know if its just the brightness of my screen, but I can see you're edit marks around Luna's legs, like where you tried to erase your coloring layer or something, but I have a VERY bright screen so it tends to pick up even the slightest things. Oh, and you misspelled Lightning's name on the pic. XD But other than that, a VERY nice color in for your first ever oekaki! Well done!

[Escap3TheDistance]

You're right bout all of it lol thanks and i did not even notice any of that but I was really tired when i did it XD lol

[Escap3TheDistance]

Fixed it!!