Soooo these are the redlines you wanted! They look like not much, do they? And wazzup with the numbers? Well-
1-The ears should not be as long, and maybe slightly rounded at the edges, making the inner canal more visibly from the outer ear. Also, add another ear, unless both are lined up completely.
2.Instead of slanting perfectly down, the chest should be sticking out more and be more broad-Room for the heart and other internal organs.
3-Un less you want a bulky wolf, the belly should be curving up more, distinguishing the ribcage from the stomach. (Make sure it curves back down near the leg, though. xD)
4.Just a little thing-a wolf has an extra digit above it's other toes, and one more toe should be added as well.
5.The tail, instead of being thin, should be more fluffed up, and thicker in the middle, not at the stump-The stump should be slightly bigger, contrasting the rump.
6.The fur drawn emphasizes the muscles, rounding them out-They should be more curved, and tilted back, if you know what I mean-Legs cannot be at that angle without a more curved shoulder bone.
7.Unless your wolf is bulky, the bones at the base of it's neck should not be going up, unless it's arms are very strong..The neck needs to be clarified, too.
8.As for the forehead, it needs to be slightly longer-If the muzzle is considerably longer, the forehead shall be extended too, giving more rooms for the skull and brain.
*Mostly anatomy problems-But I like the legs-I could 't have done legs like that, mine would be slightly wiggly. xD Hope it helped!
1-The ears should not be as long, and maybe slightly rounded at the edges, making the inner canal more visibly from the outer ear. Also, add another ear, unless both are lined up completely.
2.Instead of slanting perfectly down, the chest should be sticking out more and be more broad-Room for the heart and other internal organs.
3-Un less you want a bulky wolf, the belly should be curving up more, distinguishing the ribcage from the stomach. (Make sure it curves back down near the leg, though. xD)
4.Just a little thing-a wolf has an extra digit above it's other toes, and one more toe should be added as well.
5.The tail, instead of being thin, should be more fluffed up, and thicker in the middle, not at the stump-The stump should be slightly bigger, contrasting the rump.
6.The fur drawn emphasizes the muscles, rounding them out-They should be more curved, and tilted back, if you know what I mean-Legs cannot be at that angle without a more curved shoulder bone.
7.Unless your wolf is bulky, the bones at the base of it's neck should not be going up, unless it's arms are very strong..The neck needs to be clarified, too.
8.As for the forehead, it needs to be slightly longer-If the muzzle is considerably longer, the forehead shall be extended too, giving more rooms for the skull and brain.
*Mostly anatomy problems-But I like the legs-I could 't have done legs like that, mine would be slightly wiggly. xD Hope it helped!
