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It's not much...

Postby BloodyBansheeScreams » Thu Jun 09, 2011 4:51 am

I wrote this, being bored. It's not much, yet. I wrote this mostly based on how I feel. I'm confused with something in my life right now, if it does happen, then I'll feel even more sad then I do right now. So I wrote this song based on those feelings.


Don’t want to leave
No, not again
It causes too much pain
And I know it will just happen again
All alone with no one to talk to
All alone with nothing to do
Knowing I’ll never see some of those faces
Now in my heart are empty spaces
Longing for them to be filled
And never again to be spilled
Too afraid to talk to someone
Feeling no one cares but one
Because they’re nowhere to be found
My voice is an unheard sound


As I said, not much. I'm still working on it. I'd appreciate it if you told me what you thought. I don't want all 'It was good' cause it probably isn't true.
~Thanks.
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Re: It's not much...

Postby BloodyBansheeScreams » Thu Jun 09, 2011 5:00 am

Just one small comment? I'm just going to go back to working on it...
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