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Re: Help Please
by KawaiiPanda58 » Sun Feb 18, 2018 9:11 pm
Hi! I read the first couple of paragraphs, as I am not really in the mood to read it all right now, but I really love your writing style! You are very talented!
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She/Her pronouns please.
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Re: Help Please
by cad bane » Sun Feb 18, 2018 10:21 pm
I advise developing your characters more towards the beginning of the book rather than having all of the dialogue. It's an interesting storyline though, and I wouldn't mind reading more of it if you decide to continue (:
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Re: Help Please
by bloom504 » Sun Feb 18, 2018 10:54 pm
I think it would be great if you told us more about how the characters look. I like the story, but I have no clue what to call it. Something like 'The Pirate's Revenge' (Since the captain wants revenge on the person who killed her father)
They need your clickies!
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