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Re: Free Writing Feedback!

Postby Hi My Name Is ____ » Tue Dec 10, 2019 3:00 pm

Scratch the part about the zodiacs... that was just something I had scribbled and forgot to delete.....
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Re: Free Writing Feedback!

Postby SteamPunk_9Skullz » Sat Apr 06, 2024 6:21 am

I'm looking for a bit of feedback on a story I'm writing for fun, I tried formatting it in a way that scratches the itch in my brain. Mostly I'm looking for is if you find the story interesting at its current spot and if the imagery is good at some level.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hklse8CYONCCNGOR9PJRHv6Gtp0DJ8DklELfKnLQagE/edit
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Re: Free Writing Feedback!

Postby g4rf13ld » Sat Apr 06, 2024 6:23 am

seeking feedback on this epic amazing digital circus fanfic i wrote https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-HV ... VAqAw/view
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