“I Think I Fell”(Need Critism)

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The grocery store
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33%
Romance 😉😉
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11%
Meeting Carson(also breaking up with Carson)
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44%
Being weird (playing video games or something)
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11%
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“I Think I Fell”(Need Critism)

Postby SingSangJisung » Tue Nov 28, 2017 1:05 pm

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Have you ever wondered what happened when you
find out your family has arranged you to marry someone you don't know, or
better yet someone you know but hate? Now imagine something happened
one day where you realized you don't hate just the complete opposite.
That is me and Kai... and I think I fell for him.


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Hi! I have plans I write a small book but I need some help so far I have
had trouble getting people so my work! So I want to do an interest check
to see if this idea would stick! I had a different wattpad before but it was
deserted so I created a fresh one!
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Postby SingSangJisung » Wed Nov 29, 2017 12:42 am

Every Two Days I plan on posting 12 pages on the wattpad format! I hope you enjoy!
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Re: “I Think I Fell” interest check!

Postby SingSangJisung » Sat Dec 02, 2017 12:41 am

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Re: “I Think I Fell” interest check!

Postby SingSangJisung » Mon Dec 04, 2017 3:18 pm

XxEchoTheCatxX wrote:Hi! I have plans I write a small book but I need some help so far I have had trouble getting people so my work! So I want to do an interest check to see if this idea would stick! I had a different wattpad before but it was deserted so I created a fresh one!
https://my.w.tt/UiNb/wBecZo1DqI
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Re: “I Think I Fell” interest check!(updated story)

Postby SingSangJisung » Tue Dec 05, 2017 12:45 am

XxEchoTheCatxX wrote:Hi! I have plans I write a small book but I need some help so far I have had trouble getting people so my work! So I want to do an interest check to see if this idea would stick! I had a different wattpad before but it was deserted so I created a fresh one!
https://my.w.tt/UiNb/wBecZo1DqI
EDIT! Part two is Up this i where i was looking for help!if you have any ideo you want or anything that might be confused i need help!
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Re: “I Think I Fell” interest check!(updated story)

Postby SingSangJisung » Tue Dec 05, 2017 6:35 am

XxEchoTheCatxX wrote:Hi! I have plans I write a small book but I need some help so far I have had trouble getting people so my work! So I want to do an interest check to see if this idea would stick! I had a different wattpad before but it was deserted so I created a fresh one!
https://my.w.tt/UiNb/wBecZo1DqI
EDIT! Part two is Up this i where i was looking for help!if you have any ideo you want or anything that might be confused i need help!
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Re: “I Think I Fell” interest check!(updated story)

Postby SingSangJisung » Tue Dec 05, 2017 3:25 pm

XxEchoTheCatxX wrote:Hi! I have plans I write a small book but I need some help so far I have had trouble getting people so my work! So I want to do an interest check to see if this idea would stick! I had a different wattpad before but it was deserted so I created a fresh one!
https://my.w.tt/UiNb/wBecZo1DqI
EDIT! Part two is Up this i where i was looking for help!if you have any ideo you want or anything that might be confused i need help!
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Re: “I Think I Fell” interest check!(updated story)

Postby SingSangJisung » Wed Dec 06, 2017 12:43 am

XxEchoTheCatxX wrote:Hi! I have plans I write a small book but I need some help so far I have had trouble getting people so my work! So I want to do an interest check to see if this idea would stick! I had a different wattpad before but it was deserted so I created a fresh one!
https://my.w.tt/UiNb/wBecZo1DqI
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Re: “I Think I Fell” I’m writing more tonight!!

Postby SingSangJisung » Wed Dec 06, 2017 2:57 pm

Bump! So far 25 read thanks to everyone who has been. I really want to get to one hundred before the new year! Hopefully by then I will have quite a few parts done!
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Re: “I Think I Fell” interest check!(updated story)

Postby SingSangJisung » Thu Dec 07, 2017 12:37 am

Part two is up make sure to check it out!
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