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"I Express Myself Through You" - [flo's challenge]

Postby munchqueen » Fri Jan 20, 2017 1:57 pm

Aha, welcome to my wonderful thread! I will be participating in Flo's writing challenge, which can be found here!
I have learned about this through the challenge thread of 200765; go check out their take on the prompts!

Please be sure to disable your signature when posting on this thread, to keep it neat. Without further ado; let's begin!

floki wrote:
50 shots wrote:1.// "Did you steal my Poptart?"
2.// "We could be heroes."
3.// "We should be lovers..."
4.// "SNAAAAAAAAAAKE!"
5.// "What do you mean, 'No'?"
6.// "THIS IS JUST BUSINESS!"
7.// "Maybe, just one more slice."
8.// "You can't leave! You'll die..."
9.// "I was a fool to believe..."
10.// "It all ends, today."
11.// "You must..."
12.// "You're just a silly girl!"
13.// "The show must go on..."
14.// "Just one more day, please..."
15.// "You can't just kill people!"
16.// "Seriously, who ate my Poptart?!"
17.// "I only speak the truth."
18.// "Don't let go Jack! Wait... you already did... rats."
19.// "I did not want this!"
20.// "What do you mean he's dead?!"
21.// "I haven't eaten in three days!"
22.// "Who am I? Not Jean Valjean..."
23.// "Did you just..."
24.// "Do. Not. Touch. That."
25.// "YOU JUST TOUCHED IT!"
26.// "I would never say that to you."
27.// "My receding hair line has been kissed..."
28.// "You have Elvis Presley eyes... I would know."
29.// "Dude, chocolates are bomb."
30.// "Could you... stay with me tonight?"
31.// "I can't loose you!"
32.// "Please... marry me."
33.// "I can't hug you..."
34.// "You call that a kiss?"
35.// "Since when did I ask for it to snow?"
36.// "I'M BATMAN" "No... no you are not."
37.// "NEVER SAY THAT WORD!"
38.// "I HAVE TB!" "No you have a cold!"
39.// "Can you not?!"
40.// "Tis only a flesh wound!"
41.// "Could you stop jumping for one minute?!'
42.// "Please repeat that, I wasn't listening."
43.// "You love me?"
44.// "Never do that again."
45.// "I dare you to lick that..."
46.// "What do you think of children?"
47.// "I like, like you."
48.// "BY GODS..."
49.// "I just wanted you..."
50.// "Damn it! I died again!"
50 more shots wrote:51.// "I'm a mess."
52.// "Hey! Little ears are around!"
53.// "Please, don't cry..."
54.// "YOU PLAGIARIZING PIG!"
55.// "Since when did Disney add this?!
56.// "It only get's worse"
57.// "Oh crap..."
58.// "Please tell me that is not what I think it is."
59.// "What did you think I was doing?"
60.// "ALL HAIL ...!"
61.// "Now why did you do that?"
62.// "You have beautiful eyes."
63.// "Let's travel the world!"
64.// "I DON'T SPEAK FRENCH!"
65.// "Whatever happened to Joel?"
66.// "No way in, no way out."
67.// ""I will have my vengeance."
68.// "Grow up!"
69.// "I found the ring!"
70.// "We should run... like now!"
71.// "Can you please shut up?" "No."
72.// "I found that cliff..."
73.// "Are you sure that is safe to eat?"
74.// "I TOLD YOU TO GOOGLE MAP IT!"
75.// "Who died and made you queen?!"
76.// "Ich Sprechen Deustch"
77.// "Now wait a second, buster."
78.// "I would kill for you."
79.// "The greatest thing, is you."
80.// "I am a literary vampire."
81.// "A stake through the heart would kill anybody..."
82.// "Bon Jovi is my jam!"
83.// "Kiss me.. now."
84.// "I seem to have lost my contact."
85.// "TURN THE LIGHTS BACK ON!"
86.// "DON'T SHOOT!"
87.// "Oh no... he has a sword too."
88.// "Are you sure it's dead?"
89.// "Ummmmm..."
90.// "I can't write anything good."
91.// "We aren't in Hogwarts!"
92.// "Please, stay with me."
93.// "He's not breathing!"
94.// "I...love...yo-"
95.// "She's gone."
96.// "Sir, where are your pants?"
97.// "I can't even."
98.// "I believe in you."
99.// "What can I say... you're welcome."
100.// "The sea... it calls me."


Welcome! In this quote down here, I will be documenting which one-shots characters have been in, and tallying who has been in the most! Who will win?
Current Victor; Blaire (expectedly)
Blaire wrote:"Did you steal my Poptart?"
"We could be heroes."
"We should be lovers..."
"SNAAAAAAAAAAKE!"
"THIS IS JUST BUSINESS!"
Koda wrote:"We could be heroes."
"We should be lovers..."
"SNAAAAAAAAAAKE!"


Angela 'Spirit' wrote:"Did you steal my Poptart?"
""We should be lovers..."
"THIS IS JUST BUSINESS!"


Rosie wrote:"We should be lovers..."
"What do you mean, 'No'?"




Calynn 'Taurus' wrote:"Maybe, just one more slice..."



Lucifer wrote:"Maybe, just one more slice..."



Samantha 'Soul' wrote:"You can't leave! You'll die..."



Tempest wrote:"You can't leave! You'll die..."



Lilith wrote:"I was a fool to believe..."
"It all ends, today."


Jason 'Ragnar' wrote:"I was a fool to believe..."
"It all ends, today."


Khaleesi wrote:"It all ends, today."



Emily wrote:"It all ends, today."



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"Did you steal my Poptart?" - [flo's challenge]

Postby munchqueen » Fri Jan 20, 2017 3:30 pm

"I'm serious, did you steal my Poptart?" Angela asked, her eyes boldly accusing, yet playful at the same time.

"I didn't, Spirit, I swear!" Blaire protested, tossing a pillow at her friend. Everytime Angela came over, she accused Blaire of stealing her Poptarts. Angela didn't even like Poptarts.

"I don't believe you!" Angela argued, though she was clearly amused. "And stop calling me that! It's a stupid nickname."

Truthfully, Angela disagreed with her last sentence; it was a super cool nickname, but she was too shy to admit that, and the way she had recieved it wasn't so flattering. When she and Blaire had first met, things were awkward; Angela was far too shy. Since then, however, she had really opened up, and they had become great friends. Most of their time was spent together, days and nights; this sometimes bothered both of their brothers, but neither of them cared. Angela and Blaire had agreed that they should just go find girlfriends already, they had been alone far too long.

"Are you kidding me?" Blaire said, inserting herself into Angela's thoughts. "It's the best nickname. Remember when I gave it to you, on your birthday? I still can't believe the fact that you're so scared of horror movies! You were as pale as a ghost, remember?"

Angela shot a glare in Blaire's direction. "And I still can't believe that you took me to a horror movie for my birthday, you know that I hate them!" She snapped, her eyes glowing like cold fire, but only for a brief moment; maybe longer, but no one would ever know, since she had closed them. "Anyway, back to my Poptart," the fair-skinned woman said, opening only one eye to look at Blaire.

"I told you, Spirit, I did not take it! It was Koda!"

But Angela waved this off, arguing, "Your brother is a gentleman, he would never steal a woman's Poptart!"

Yet again, Blaire disagreed. "You don't know him like I do," she said scornfully. "Plus, you lost that Poptart months ago! Why do you still blame me every time you sleep over here?"

"Because you did it, I know you did! You have always been a mischievous liar, and you're lying!" Spirit said heatedly.

"But —" Blaire began.

"Ah! Don't even!"

"I didn't —"

"Yes you did!"

Blaire almost swore that she could hear crickets, but of course, it was her imagination. Hopefully; Blaire did not want a basement full of bugs. She pretty much lived there, it would be a disaster. She stared at Angela, whose nose was very red; it always turned red when she was angry. The though made Blaire crack up, and, unable to suppress her laughter, a few giggles slipped out, her eyes still fixed on Angela's face. Blaire tried harder to hold them in, but the confused look on Angela's face made everything much too funny, and she broke out into more giggles, which soon became full blown laughter.

"What's so funny?" Angela asked, her voice slightly panicked. "Blaire, I'm serious! Why are you laughing?"

But Blaire continued laughing, falling onto her back and clutching her stomach. "You should have... Seen your face!" She wheezed, laughing uncontrollably.

Spirit put on a pouty face, but as always, she too began laughing.

"Blaire, stop laughing!" She sputtered. "Shut up! Shut up, you know I laugh when you do! Stop!"

"I, I can't!" Blaire spoke in between gasps for breath and more laughter. "I can't, I can't! Spirit, I can't... Stop laughing!"

Eventually, of course, they both did stop laughing, for they would likely die if they did not. They laughed a lot, they laughed everyday; laughter was almost the reason that they were such good friends. However, for the time being, they had to stop to catch their breaths...
But it was only temporary.

________________________________________________________________________


Starring;
Blaire, nearly twenty years old, is a character of mine, created for a roleplay along with her brother, Koda. She began with a rather appealing story, but she soon grew to more than I had ever imagined. I have used her in many roleplays since, but all relate to the original. She had and will always be one of my favourite characters, and, apparently, also one of my most ship-able...
Angela, originally Spirit, is just over eighteen in this story. She is a character created by Ultimatefangirling, for the same roleplay as Blaire and Koda. Well, she may have been around longer; I'm really not sure! Spirit is one of my favourite characters created by friends, you'll probably be seeing her around here much more.

Word Count; 650
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Re: "I Express Myself Through You" - [flo's challenge]

Postby 200765 » Fri Jan 20, 2017 3:36 pm

That was light and funny one-shot! Angela's and Blaire's friendship seems really genuine. I love your take on the "Did you steal my Poptart?" prompt. Still, there's one mystery left unsolved: What ever did happen to the Poptart? It could totally be another story for another time.
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Re: "I Express Myself Through You" - [flo's challenge]

Postby munchqueen » Fri Jan 20, 2017 3:39 pm

@299765
Certainly! I do plan on continuing with Blaire and Angela, or rather, Spirit. I am currently adding a portion on the background of the characters, so readers can get to know who they're reading about.
Someday, you will learn about the mystery of the Poptart; that is a promise!
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Re: "I Express Myself Through You" - [flo's challenge]

Postby 200765 » Fri Jan 20, 2017 3:41 pm

@Munch : All right, I'll eagerly be waiting for the mystery to be solved.
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Re: "I Express Myself Through You" - [flo's challenge]

Postby Pyjaks » Fri Jan 20, 2017 3:48 pm

Awhhh, they have such a cute dynamic! I honestly love reading these one shots that are so happy and genuine, its a nice contrast to some of the sadder/deeper ones I've seen. I can't wait to read more :D
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Re: "I Express Myself Through You" - [flo's challenge]

Postby munchqueen » Fri Jan 20, 2017 3:52 pm

Pyjaks wrote:Awhhh, they have such a cute dynamic! I honestly love reading these one shots that are so happy and genuine, its a nice contrast to some of the sadder/deeper ones I've seen. I can't wait to read more :D


Aah, I'm so glad you like it! I really love both Angela/Spirit and Blaire, and, to be honest, I kind of ship it... Ultimate doesn't know yet. c;
I love writing happy, upbeat stories, but I might get into some deeper ones yet... we'll see!
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Re: "I Express Myself Through You" - [flo's challenge]

Postby Pyjaks » Fri Jan 20, 2017 3:54 pm

Hah, I kinda ship it too (even if I've only read a little about them) x)
But yeah, I'd love to see your take on something more deep as well :D
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Re: "I Express Myself Through You" - [flo's challenge]

Postby Sugarkitza » Fri Jan 20, 2017 5:57 pm

Ultimate now knows!
And it's beautiful!
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Re: "I Express Myself Through You" - [flo's challenge]

Postby munchqueen » Sat Jan 21, 2017 2:20 am

@Ultimate
Yis, now you know! My next one shot is gonna be fun to write... I have an idea, and after I've finished today's finals, I can start <3
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