' flo's challenge to you //

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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Wed Feb 22, 2017 4:41 pm

I did one! Are you proud of me? :D

"What did you think I was doing?"

Not overly happy with it - I would have liked more emotion, but it didn't happen. XD oh well.
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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby emoji movie » Wed Feb 22, 2017 5:01 pm

Ahh I think it's lovely! Your writing's really nice!
Yes I am proud good job :'-]
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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Wed Feb 22, 2017 5:12 pm

Thank you! :D
I need to write more....
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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby blackbird. » Wed Feb 22, 2017 5:29 pm

      @badwolf
        yay good job for posting! baby steps yeah cx

      @inc. & lumi
        omg friends i'm not the only one who's new here
        wouldn't have thought that it was the first for you guys bc you're both super experienced at writing already unlike me lel
        and yes @inc i feel you so hard i was super nervous to post on this thread at first
        i was like "what if everyone judges my writing and thinks i suck??"
        but everyone's been so welcoming at nice
        (s/o @everyone - thank you for not hating on my sucky writing haha)
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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby Aα΄›ΚŸα΄€s » Thu Feb 23, 2017 6:52 am

        Ranger of the North wrote:
        Too many of the Lazy Writers joined smh


        This is actually sadly true, I think that they don't realize in order to actually get things done you must put forth at least some effort. It's not just a slap on and go process. That is unless, you're actually wanting to make it sloppy. Personally, I think about a lot of thing before I go to write, if I can't think of anything to add on or lose my muse, I find it helpful to describe an emotion said character is feeling, or the terrains around them. I'll even go as far as describing their movements.

        With that being said, I made a few tweaks to Number 20 - "What do you mean he's dead?!" and I'd really love some feedback on it <3
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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby Pyjaks » Thu Feb 23, 2017 6:58 am

Aα΄›ΚŸα΄€s wrote:
        Ranger of the North wrote:
        Too many of the Lazy Writers joined smh


        This is actually sadly true, I think that they don't realize in order to actually get things done you must put forth at least some effort. It's not just a slap on and go process. That is unless, you're actually wanting to make it sloppy. Personally, I think about a lot of thing before I go to write, if I can't think of anything to add on or lose my muse, I find it helpful to describe an emotion said character is feeling, or the terrains around them. I'll even go as far as describing their movements.

        With that being said, I made a few tweaks to Number 20 - "What do you mean he's dead?!" and I'd really love some feedback on it <3


Hey! Just wanna let you know I read it last night and loved it! I'll reread the revised copy when I'm home later this afternoon and I'll drop some feedback :D
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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby sammmy » Thu Feb 23, 2017 1:15 pm

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      this is my forst time ever attempting to do a writing challenge, and i do not regret it, not one bit cx

      i am a bit of a noob i have to admit

      i personally feel this one (#42) is the better of the seven i've written,i don't even know why but i'm proud of myself for making something that doesn't have screaming or anger in it


It's my first time doing a writing challenge as well, though I've been posting stories on wattpad for a few months now c:
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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby emoji movie » Thu Feb 23, 2017 1:22 pm



@blackbird.

omg thank :'-]
i wouldn't call myself super experienced :>
the only times i've actually posted was when i was so cringy :'-[
your writing is so good oml it is lit :U
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Re: ' flo's challenge to you //

Postby w0ah » Thu Feb 23, 2017 1:54 pm

    -- hey, this looks fun. I want to try and better my writing skills, so here I go.
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Postby rogan » Thu Feb 23, 2017 1:55 pm

      @samo,
      i'm TRYINg to write stuff on wattpad, and yet i fail to eve publish anything soooo cx


      @blackbird,
      i wouldn't call myself super experience, let alone experienced cx
      but thank yooouuuu! i also love your writing style, it's beautiful cx and your variety of characters is aaaah

      @atlas,
      wow i need to pay attention more i called you wisps oops my bad...sorry
      and i love the way it's written it's so beautiful aaaaaah
      i can't wait for more from you
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