RENAMED~ A Caged Phoenix (dropping whatever comes 2 mind)

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RENAMED~ A Caged Phoenix (dropping whatever comes 2 mind)

Postby kanni » Sat Sep 03, 2016 3:02 am

Edit: If you don't feel like scrolling through all of this to find the properly written story, it can be found at xxxxxx

Avalon let out a scream as Jackson was impaled by the beam of energy pouring from Senara's raised hands. She struggled against the chains that pinned her to the cold concrete wall, but it was useless. There was nothing she could do but watch as the boy she had fallen in love with was slowly drained of his life force, listen as he choked out a pained cry, smell the blood that poured from him. Avalon collapsed at the same time Jackson did, sobs racking her slight figure. "No.....no....no......" She whispered over and over again, tears streaming from her grey eyes. She couldn't accept the fact that he was gone. Jackson was all she had left, and now she was alone, forever at the mercy at Senara's merciless hands and powerful galia.

Sorry if this seems kinda stupid, it just hit me and I wanted to write it down. Delete it if its not ok.
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Re: just feeling kinda....inspired I guess. I don't know.

Postby IHaveNoFandoms » Sat Sep 03, 2016 10:07 am

Actually its pretty good :D
Why would someone delete it?
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Re: just feeling kinda....inspired I guess. I don't know.

Postby kanni » Sat Sep 03, 2016 12:35 pm

aww thanks tbh i don't really know why...lol. I might turn it into something more
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Re: just feeling kinda....inspired I guess. I don't know.

Postby birbmememaster24 » Sat Sep 03, 2016 1:21 pm

This was beautiful.
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Re: just feeling kinda....inspired I guess. I don't know.

Postby kanni » Wed Sep 07, 2016 10:57 am

thanks! I was having kind of a bad day I guess and I felt like someone else should feel that pain....should I make it into more of a story scene?
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Re: just feeling kinda....inspired I guess. I don't know.

Postby Ranger of the North » Wed Sep 07, 2016 2:37 pm

♥BeefyFish♥ wrote:thanks! I was having kind of a bad day I guess and I felt like someone else should feel that pain....should I make it into more of a story scene?

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I'd love to see this expanded! You should totally write more! :D
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Re: just feeling kinda....inspired I guess. I don't know.

Postby kanni » Fri Sep 09, 2016 7:19 am

thanks! I'll get write to work wink wink corny joke face
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Re: just feeling kinda....inspired I guess. I don't know.

Postby kanni » Sat Sep 10, 2016 8:29 am

The darkness of the dungeon faded as a gaurd with a flickering torch passed by, his magic coated armor barely making a sound. Avalon shivered as the shadows crept back in, the welcome glow of the fire having gone away to soon. She wished she could at least wrap her arms around her torso to attempt at keeping the chill at bay, but with her wrists chained high above her head, her arms could do nothing but absorb the cold of the concrete wall they rested against along with the rest of her. Another torch began to come into Avalon's field of vision, and she lifted her head, aubrun curls tumbling away from her upturned face. Another gaurd this soon was unusual. Someone else must be acting up. But not her, never her. If she acted up they would take Jackson away from her, draining his life force from him and leaving him to rot. Most likely Senara herself would do it, dragging Jackson from his hilltop house all the way down here, just to see the fear and anguish flashing in Avalon's storm blue eyes. Eyes that were currently filling with tears at their owner's morbid fantasies.
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Re: just feeling kinda....inspired I guess. I don't know.

Postby kanni » Sat Sep 10, 2016 8:30 am

I'll probably add more, just give me a moment to think.
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Postby birbmememaster24 » Sat Sep 10, 2016 2:03 pm

Ahh its so beautiful **Slowly wipes away tear** Su beautiful
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