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Postby coincidence. » Tue Aug 16, 2016 11:54 am

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I guess this is just random talking about some of my poems and what inspired me to write them.

trying again- I'm a bit of a soccer person. Although this never happened to me I thought it would be cool to incorporate a bird with a poem on recovery and courage.

chalk dust- This is about a funny coincidence that sort of haunts me. The purple/white chalk is because me and these to guys were fooling around with chalk and the guys started giving each other tick marks for every bad thing. They were just fooling around but it made sense to put it in.

ghosts- Most of the inspiration for this comes from the song Spirits. Don't ask me how though it just sort of came to me.

we were young- about my one friend but it doesn't really apply to her anymore. We actually hang out a lot know. She was there for me when I needed someone and my best friend couldn't help.

verses- All of these are kind of based on my one guy friend. Sometimes I feel that way, sometimes I don't. IDK I might delete them though because I feel sort of silly now putting them there and he probably wouldn't like it.

the naranja umbrella- Naranja is the word for orange in Spanish. It's about dealing with a hard time in my friend group. 2 people were being kind of mean, and wouldn't care less. So I left them and have better friends. The whole naranja umbrella thing seemed cool to add in.

stressful- That was just to vent out everything that was bugging me coming to the end of grade eight.

nutshell- The title is self explanatory. Yeah it was a terrible year. The teacher made so many people cry, even one of the strongest girls I've ever known.

blue fingers- Sort of talking about gifts and how I'm not satisfied with mine. I know jealously is usually the color green, but I once accidentally got die all over my fingers and turned them blue, so I wanted to incorporate that.

thunder- so I was reading this sappy little love story I wrote and just felt really low. I started crying and saw my lightswitch cover (which does say choose happy) and cried even harder. So I wrote a poem to get it out.

goodbye to friday- I thought back over the crap I had been through with two of my 'friends' and just cried. That was Thursday night and I cried myself to sleep. I wasn't ready to face them so I told my mom I had a migraine and didn't go to school on the Friday. I cried myself to sleep that night too.

brave- I get really scared to open up. I haven't actually told my friends why I didn't go to school that day. I am never brave enough to talk about it.

phantom- Just tears and gross crying.
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Postby coincidence. » Tue Aug 16, 2016 12:35 pm

i've done so many bad things,
my lies made stings,
my fists made bruises,
and i am the reason of many your scars.
i'm sorry if what i've done has torn us apart,
but your in my way,
i'm trying to climb the ladder.

climbing is too tough, i'm telling yah.
i'm telling yah i need wings.
wings of the angels would do,
but demons can't fly on angels wings.

yeah, i guess you could say i'm bad.
done many things my folks wound't of even dream to do.
ink marks me, haunts me, tells me my lies.
smoke twists me inside and out, my head pounds!
sorry to backstab you,
but your in my way,
i'm trying to climb the ladder.

climbing is too tough, i'm telling yah.
i'm telling yah i need wings.
wings of the angels would do,
but demons can't fly on angels wings.

if demons had wings i'd fly to the top.
maybe i'd be nice enough,
to give you a ride,
i'll have nothing to hide,
if only demons had wings.

climbing is tough,
climbing is too tough, i'm telling yah.
i'm telling yah, if only demons had wings,
wings like the angels.

climbing is too tough, i'm telling yah.
i'm telling yah i need wings.
wings of the angels would do,
but demons can't fly on angels wings.

i'm telling yah, climbing is too tough.
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(“★-trying again!!)

Postby coincidence. » Tue Aug 16, 2016 1:01 pm

lacing my adidas cleats,
wondering what's wrong with me,
a voice inside my head tells me I'm gonna fail.
just like before.

i remember hearing the painful crack,
and telling myself i'm not going back,
but here i am, facing it.

a little bird came to me,
and said it could set me free,
said i could redeem myself.
i didn't expect this.
so here i am,
i'm trying again.

ponytail whipping in the wind,
stretches come back again,
the game is wanting me,
haunting me.

anxious glances at my leg,
isn't helping to forget the pain.
facing it has never been this hard.

a little bird came to me,
and said it could set me free,
said i could redeem myself.
i didn't expect this.
so here i am,
i'm trying again.

my past is haunting me.
so will the game.
i've missed who i used to be.
you'll never be the same.

the little bird came back to me,
a small wink told me to expect something.
a little bird transformed into an eagle.

a small grin, a little salute.
back in the game.
i feel free,
free as a little bird in the body of an eagle.

a little bird came to me,
and said it could set me free,
said i could redeem myself.
i didn't expect this.
so here i am,
i'm trying again.
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Postby coincidence. » Thu Sep 01, 2016 1:14 am


      yeah, something happened
      and it's all my fault.
      if i hadn't said it
      maybe they would be ok.
      maybe their lives wouldn't be such a mess.
      i jinxed it.
      i'm a jinx.
      and the hurt eating me away
      leaves nothing but chalk dust.
      as the chalk
      white, purple,
      ticks a mark
      for every mistake.
      and all i see are white and purple,
      blurs of tick marks
      a tick, one for every time
      i didn't keep my mouth shut,
      didn't think before i spoke
      and the chalk dust,
      i disappear into it
      it swallows me up,
      swallows me whole.
      and i can't fight it alone.
      but i got people willing to stand by me.
      willing to erase the ticks,
      willing to wash off the chalk dust,
      so i can feel free.
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Postby coincidence. » Tue Oct 04, 2016 11:35 am

in the air,
its calling, its beckoning.
it wants my soul.

ghosts! ghosts!
they won't let go,
won't let go!
ghosts! ghosts!
yeah, they've got my soul,
they're in control,
'cause they won't let go.

i want my old life,
but i had to leave it behind.
i want routine,
but life has lost its sheen.
spirits and ghosts,
yeah, they pull,
pull at my soul.

being haunted, its not what i wanted.
being haunted its a nightmare,
won't get anywhere,
i'm stuck in my life's past,
I can't go on.
they won't let me go on!

ghosts! ghosts!
they won't let go,
won't let go!
ghosts! ghosts!
yeah, they've got my soul,
they're in control,
'cause they won't let go.

they won't let me go on.
these ghosts haunt me!
these ghosts want me!
they won't let me go on.
they're pulling, they are pulling.
i am giving up.

ghosts! ghosts!
they won't let go,
won't let go!
ghosts! ghosts!
yeah, they've got my soul,
they're in control,
'cause they won't let go.
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(“★-we were young!!)

Postby coincidence. » Wed Oct 12, 2016 8:32 am

a seemingly long time ago,
in a seemingly distant land,
there we lived.
there we were young.

life was a dream,
we always smiled.
then we grew,
and that happy land changed.
you were worse than before.

i was always in your way.
you always had something mean to say.
why did everything change?

oh, i dream of the times,
in that distant land,
when we lived.
when we were young.
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Postby coincidence. » Sat Dec 31, 2016 6:32 am

      sometimes life can be a war
    a tug this way,
    a tug that way.
    yet, its never ending.
    neither side wants to give up.
    worries and concerns built up inside.
    do you want to make a choice?
    what if it is wrong.
    do you want to know?
    its just to confusing.
    do you want to share your thoughts?
    what if people judge.
    my life is a raging war.
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Postby coincidence. » Thu Feb 16, 2017 10:02 am

i'm sorry for what i said,
please don't let my words get to your head.
i've done enough damage, i know,
but inside me its also a blow,
i almost cry over the past,
hoping you want friendship to last.
forgiving myself is a hard thing to do,
especially when i care about the feelings of you.
will you ever forgive me?
i'm so sorry



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      I'm crying inside
      Why did our link have to die
      I wish things were like the summer
      But summer can't last forever
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(“★-the naranja umbrella!!)

Postby coincidence. » Tue May 09, 2017 8:20 am

      Maybe you think what you did hurt,
      But it didn't.
      I let go.
      I have better friends now.
      Ones that won't leave me in the dust.
      They won't treat me like a backup.
      And I'm not crying, no, no way.
      I won't cry, no, no way.
      My tears are being blocked by an umbrella.
      A naranja umbrella.
      Everything is going well now that I've left.
      The naranja umbrella won't let you hurt me.
      A naranja umbrella won't let me cry.
      Naranja, naranja, naranja.
      A mix of sunshine and love.
      I have a weapon of defense.
      I won't cry, no, no way.
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Postby coincidence. » Sun May 21, 2017 4:35 am

      Stress is real
      Exams and grad are coming up fast
      Everyone says highschool is such a blast
      But I get nervous easy
      That is for sure
      Vacation makes me uneasy
      So confusing is my life
      Screwed that up bad so bad
      I fear new things
      Nothing is familiar to me anymore.
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