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[Asherwy]

ahhhh thank you ali
Just knowing you were reading from the shadows warms my heart -touched expression-
haha, disturbing indeed :P

[WolvesOfFire]

Usually I'm grouchy when a character dies. This death was almost fitting, well done.

[Asherwy]

Thank you so much Wolfy >w<
I had to think really hard about how I would end this haha
Glad all that thinking paid off :D

[ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s]

so I just sat and caught up on everythig
... Ohmyburntbiscuts
I did not expect any of that
I was like
Woah what- WHAT- WOAH- WAIT- WHAT!?
One thing I notice is you use a lot of grotesque words and descriptions that I'm always afraid to use xD
Which is good!
It makes for a very bold story
And... Idk there's something about ot that's captivating
Like why does he go all murder crazy
And I kinda wanna know about the doctors old patience
... But I think you ended it well
I really liked the switch to first person c:
Anyway
GOOD JOB
GOLD STAR
COOKIE
GOAT CHEESE

[Asherwy]

-accepts goat cheese gratefully-
CAP'N
THANK YAH
allow me to answer your questionsz

Murder crazy luke? Well not to fear, Luke actually has Mnemophobia, aka a fear of losing memories and stuff. I didn't mention it but yep, and actually the people he killed are the people who gave him some of the best memos he's had, so he was unconsciously getting 'angry' at them for giving him such wonderful memories only to have him lose them.

Patient doctor? Well Greg's brother has aspergers, his father has alzheimer's, and his mom is nice but she's really demanding so he got them patience from his family yo

thank you very much captain, i'm glad you asked these questions and i'm very happy you liked the first person switcheroo :D

[ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s]

OOOKAAAAY
that makes sense
...
I like that a lot, actually xD
good work brah, good work -pat pat-

[Asherwy]

-puffs out chest-
hurrhurr so proud of myself
captain likes it hurrhurr

ok that's enough ash