❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

[shadowloversmothie]

@Kawaiipanda58

Eh it’s probably average here’s a short story that I wrote a competition for a adoptable so it’s your decision.

A time they regretted something.


One foggy stormy rainy day, Jayden was trapped inside with nothing to do. His parents practically disowned him due to his dark humour and how he acts. Jayden sat up in his room that day, he went to his desk and started drawing a very dark image of his mum dead, it was very detailed. His mother, Veronica ran up the stairs and into his room because she heard the sound of the band Panic! At the disco. She slammed open the door with such violence that the door could have broken. She screeched

“ Jayden what the fish are you doing!? “ He replied quietly

“Uh just drawing why you ask?”

His mother walked up to his desk and slapped his face due to what she saw.

“ Why did you draw this Jayden johnthan slimth? “

“Because I can.” He replied swiftly yet quite enough his father wouldn’t hear.

His mother walked out and slammed the door, she hung a note on the outside of the door. It read,
This boy is grounded for a month. He isn’t allowed out of the house unless it is for school.
Love from, mum!

And that’s what he regrets.

Link to my original page I posted it: viewtopic.php?f=53&t=3755284&p=117316491#p117316491

[NopesaurusRexx]

*Casually slides in because I haven't been here in months*
I'm backkkkkkkk
Hopefully for longer than two days this time!

I read a few pages, but I'm so lost on what's been going on (me 99% of the time anyway) so I don't really know how to jump in lol.

Good news: I have been doing a lot of writing! I got so many chapters of Coyote cranked out the other day, I'm actually ahead of posting!
Bad news: I haven't slept properly since January, my senior seminar is KILLING me. The amount of writing I have to do as well as editing my stuff, reading 30+ pages per other person and editing their stuff has taken a toll. Just trying to survive until May right now

Anyway, I'm back!

[~Teya~]

Ahh hey guys !! ;0; Sorry I haven't been around for a little while ! I'm still working on the story (that I made questions for you guys on how to improve it like a month ago) and now, I'm --almost-- finished. I'm going to try to reread as much as I can today to spot mistakes, but I could always use some help! c:
Click here
If you're interested! I'd love to hear your thoughts about it and criticisms <3

[Ranger of the North]

It's so frustrating, honestly. I've got the chord structure worked out and everything, it's jst finisheing the lyrics and working out the melody that's stumping me!

Haha! Darn, those are both rather important XD Well good luck!! I wish I had the knowhow to help out more c':

Ahaha, I didn't win it ^^'

Aw, I'm so sorry!
Well I liked it C:

(Omg is this what Ranger feels like?? with all the quotes n replies aaaaa)

XD sometimes XD I'm pretty used to it now tbh XD


@shadowloversmoothie u need a nickname c; it looks like an interesting start c: Does Jayden end up reconciling with his family eventually?


Rexx! Hoorah :.D
Yess, I saw Coyote suddenly sped up XD
Shoot, that seminar sounds intense. STAY ALIVE!! Hopefully you can start sleeping again soon :p

[Krenko]

Hi, Rexx. *waves*

Avior, I'm currently on chapter 5 of Juno. One of the comments said it should be made into a movie and I agree. XD It's really good!

[avior.]

Avior, I'm currently on chapter 5 of Juno. One of the comments said it should be made into a movie and I agree. XD It's really good!

ahaha, thank you! I'm assuming then you also saw my comment about being a nuisance on set
oops
you'd better believe I wouldn't let them mess up my book cx

[NopesaurusRexx]

Hi, Rexx. *waves*

Hi! *waves back*

Rexx! Hoorah :.D
Yess, I saw Coyote suddenly sped up XD
Shoot, that seminar sounds intense. STAY ALIVE!! Hopefully you can start sleeping again soon :p

I wrote four chapters in twenty-four hours, I was on a roll! I'm withholding the others just so I have something to share and not disappear for months, oops!
Eh, I've gotten to the point I am learning how to take ten minute naps between classes, so maybe I'll make it XD

[Ranger of the North]

Rexx! Hoorah :.D
Yess, I saw Coyote suddenly sped up XD
Shoot, that seminar sounds intense. STAY ALIVE!! Hopefully you can start sleeping again soon :p

I wrote four chapters in twenty-four hours, I was on a roll! I'm withholding the others just so I have something to share and not disappear for months, oops!
Eh, I've gotten to the point I am learning how to take ten minute naps between classes, so maybe I'll make it XD

Oh, good going! Must've felt great while it lasted! cx
XD well I wish you luck with surviving! :p

[Krenko]

I'm just going to let you all know I was going to post a thing just now, but I just blew blood out of my nose so I'LL DO THAT TOMORROW.

[shadowloversmothie]

@therangerofthenorth

If I get around to it he might, I just wrote that story for a adoptable honestly so yeah I’m not sure.