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Re: War of Kings

Postby Ranger of the North » Fri Sep 23, 2016 3:22 pm

Spoiler alert; *free, don't read this if you haven't read the piece added XD
















Wait, they're twins?!?!
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*small voice* it's like he doesn't even care...
The world is quiet here.
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Re: War of Kings

Postby sparrow; » Fri Sep 23, 2016 7:14 pm

Ranger - Pfft, you thought I would hesitate even a moment before checking to see if there was a new part when I came back onto CS?
And yep, he's jut like, "oh btw you're a princess and my twin sister but that don't matter now go off into war yay"
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Re: War of Kings

Postby Ranger of the North » Fri Sep 23, 2016 7:49 pm

*free* wrote:Ranger - Pfft, you thought I would hesitate even a moment before checking to see if there was a new part when I came back onto CS?
And yep, he's jut like, "oh btw you're a princess and my twin sister but that don't matter now go off into war yay"

I don't like ruining things/disappointing people, so I decided it was better to be safe than sorry XD
Ikr :lol:
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Re: War of Kings

Postby anxious ghost » Fri Sep 23, 2016 11:11 pm

Tanta doesn't really know how to act. If Brynjar was there, he'd be telling Tanta what to do, how to act. He's never alone in social situations (pun most definitely intended) cuz Bryn wasn't ever stupid enough to make him handle it on his own. As a Captain, or in war, Tanta knows what to do and doesn't need help. But he grew up as an only child, which is nearly impossible for them. Twins are the norm. Add that to the fact that he isolated himself, and BAM -
If he acts like he cares about her, then he can't deny that he cares, and it'll only hurt more when one of them dies (not saying they will, just how he thinks) cuz he's lost the rest of his family already.

I got some up for chapter six! Cue Gale, Lyra, and poor, poor, seasick Mack *confetti*
And I should've named this chapter "Spencer is a very Possessive Kitten" since that's kinda what happens (#jealousy) but whatever.
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Re: War of Kings

Postby sparrow; » Sun Sep 25, 2016 9:17 pm

Spencer and Toby. Those two are just perfect.
Also, because I'm weird, I coded a signature:
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Re: War of Kings

Postby anxious ghost » Mon Sep 26, 2016 3:07 am

Omg free that's adorable!

Also, just got a new phone so if you see any typos, please just let me know. I have to add stuff to the personal dictionary so names and such may be whacked out.
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Re: War of Kings

Postby sparrow; » Sat Oct 01, 2016 8:32 am

Oh yes! I love sirens!
they're so much cooler than mermaids
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Re: War of Kings

Postby anxious ghost » Sat Oct 01, 2016 8:57 am

sparrow ♫ wrote:Oh yes! I love sirens!
they're so much cooler than mermaids


Lol. It depends on what theory you look at. To some, mermaids are as evil as sirens. I prefer to see them that way.

Oh, btw peeps, plot twists are imminent. I have a plan. Once I remember how to write, that is.

Oh and also, I may be completely rewriting soon. I'm not happy with Delta at this point, and she's holding me up. If I do, I'll let you guys know.
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Re: War of Kings

Postby anxious ghost » Mon Oct 03, 2016 8:34 am

Ok everyone. The rewriting starts now. I'll post once I've finished with each chapter. Just know that you'll have to read it again after this. I'm taking some stuff out and adding some in.
I apologize for any inconvenience. (Lol no I don't, I never said any of this was final.)
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Re: War of Kings

Postby anxious ghost » Mon Oct 17, 2016 9:54 pm

Chapter 1 has been edited, so it's done (for now). Don't know what I'm doing with that stupid prologue. I'm halfway done with chapter 2. Should work on it some more tonight. New poll is up. Vote if you wish, it doesn't really make a difference.
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