❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Aliria » Sat Dec 09, 2017 9:11 am

What's the weirdest thing you've searched up for a book?
How to pick a lock, how to jump a train, and various information about living on the streets (particularly as a minor). Also what it feels like to be knocked out and Victorian English currency.

What is the weirdest thing you've written?
Hard to say... Weirdness is a hard thing to quantify.
My current project is about punk kids who live on a space station where everyone is named after flowers and there's no concept of gender who are fighting against a corrupt government.
Another story of mine is set in a small town where every inhabitant seems to be the main character of some ridiculous adventure story, where the main characters are a cyborg who just wants to be left alone with her books and a kid who has no memories so everyone is convinced he's some kind of demon for no good reason but he's pretty sure he's human (though he technically has no proof either).
In a very different vein of weird, there's the mostly pretty typical high fantasy story (except for the fact that I forgot to actually put in any magic) where the main character is the prince of a country which was recently conquered and every member of the royal family except for him was killed, so everyone wants him to lead the country in revolution and take his place as king - but he doesn't actually think he'd make a good king so he decides to help lead the revolution and then bring the country democracy.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby winged-backpack » Sun Dec 10, 2017 5:26 am

Hey all,
So I just finished day 9 of my advent challenge and I'm just so happy with it! I wrote a little commentary to go along with it to kind of put some context into it in the post following it, and I really hope you all like it as much as I do!

How's everyone else's advent challenges going?
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Shrewd » Sun Dec 10, 2017 5:53 am

What is the weirdest thing you've written?
Haha, I once wrote a story about two snakes falling in love
but immediately die right after.


Whats the weirdest thing you've searched up for a book?
I believe the search entry was, "what do you call the seating plush pillows that remove?" and "genital bone name."
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Ranger of the North » Sun Dec 10, 2017 9:18 am

Silver Pandorica wrote:@Ranger- Nah, the credit is linked in the “C”.

I have become far too obsessed with Overwatch tho. Send help. XD
Oh, sweet!

Hahahaha XD

cosmic-quark wrote:If you had to die, what would be your preferred way of going out? What death do you fear dying, and hope to escape?

Elaine: ~snip~
Woah, that was intense 0.0


winged-backpack wrote:Okay, I've just realised I've not had Femie speak Spanish at all yet?? It's her first language, how did I manage to just forget?
It was IRL Writer Friend™ who made me realise, because one of his characters speaks Portuguese and we were translating all of her outbursts and I just had that penny drop moment where I was like - "hang on, whoops!"
Anyways, anyone who's keeping up with 10,000 Doors, I'm going to be going back and changing Femie's dialogue a little into Spanish, mainly just her exclamations and short bits. She's still going to be saying the same things, just in Spanish because I'm an idiot and forgot that my Hispanic character speaks Spanish...

Honestly, I was wondering why the first indication anyone gets that she's Hispanic was when she talks about her Quinceañera :lol:
It's all fixed now, she's actually got dialogue in her first language now!
Oh, of course! I didn't notice that, either; oops XD
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby anxious ghost » Sun Dec 10, 2017 3:05 pm

I'm back, I guess. I haven't really written anything, but that's not new.
I just skimmed through cuz it was like ten pages.

Welcome any new peeps! I'm Quincy/Mori/whatever. Beware of carrots

@Ranger man, I'm sorry about your budgie. We have two; a green girl named Miss Lady (she's mine) and my sister's is a blue boy named Taq. I can't imagine losing Missy, I'm sorry.

@the advent thing (don't remember who started it) could someone repost the prompt list, if anyone has it?

Thanks to everyone who responded to the thing i posted c:

I really wanna write but I've been dead and really depressed so I've just been coding lol
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby passione » Sun Dec 10, 2017 7:45 pm

I'm actually not sure if I want to continue the advent challenge anymore.
It was a good idea but I'm not too stable at the moment and I need time to myself because there's this thing I want to write, just to vent and stuff. It's a slam poem. I'm at a thousand words and I'm still going. Geez. There's a lot on my chest.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby winged-backpack » Mon Dec 11, 2017 12:12 am

@none
Hiya, the original prompt list is this (I put it in code to make it easier for you and take up less space):
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1. Winter
2. New chapter
3. Yesterday
4. In the walls
5. Gift
6. Ritual
7. Music
8. Comfort
9. Life Of The Party- All Time Low
10. New chapter
11. Lie
12. Your younger self
13. Poison – Alice Cooper
14. Apocalypse
15. Countdown
16. Labyrinth
17. New chapter
18. Future
19. Coffee
20. Rat
21. Museum
22. New chapter
23. Rooftop
24. Rockstar
25. Beauty

The 'new chapter' days are days I set aside to work on my book, so you can change them into prompts if you like, and obviously you can change any of the prompts as you want to.

@morioh
That's understandable, I kind of get how you feel. Most of my poetry is just me venting my feelings, though I tend to keep mine short, not some Paradise Lost kinda length you got going on there - kudos!

@Ranger
I'm glad you didn't notice, I felt like such an idiot when I realised :lol:

(little off topic, but guess who made their sig all Christmassy but still kept the same theme ^^)

EDIT:: I have a question as I'm working on the next chapter of 10,000 Doors
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[b]What's your biggest worry when writing a character of a different race/religion/culture to you?[/b]

My biggest worry is trying not to be racist. I'm fairly knowledgeable about Spanish culture and such, but I still worry about whether that knowledge is biased or insensitive. It worries me because as my only character, if I write her wrong then the whole book is kind of made obsolete.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby TheSongOfTheStars » Mon Dec 11, 2017 8:55 am

What's your biggest worry when writing a character of a different race/religion/culture to you?
Making a faux pass against their culture, having the character do or say something that is unimaginable in their culture. Also just missing some important aspect of their culture that is critical to their lives and to the character.

If crediting me for art/character design then please use TheSongOfTheStars on Toyhou.se
or FiveSecondsToFly on deviantart for anywhere else
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Ranger of the North » Mon Dec 11, 2017 9:13 am

none of this exists. wrote:I'm back, I guess. I haven't really written anything, but that's not new.
I just skimmed through cuz it was like ten pages.
Welcome baaaack!


none of this exists. wrote:@Ranger man, I'm sorry about your budgie. We have two; a green girl named Miss Lady (she's mine) and my sister's is a blue boy named Taq. I can't imagine losing Missy, I'm sorry.
Thanks, man. It's pretty tough :(


none of this exists. wrote:I really wanna write but I've been dead and really depressed so I've just been coding lol
Aw, poor Stevie *hugs*
Hope you feel better soon! c:


morioh wrote:I'm actually not sure if I want to continue the advent challenge anymore.
It was a good idea but I'm not too stable at the moment and I need time to myself because there's this thing I want to write, just to vent and stuff. It's a slam poem. I'm at a thousand words and I'm still going. Geez. There's a lot on my chest.
Oh wow, that's impressive! Hope you're okay <3


What's your biggest worry when writing a character of a different race/religion/culture to you?
That I'll do it wrong, or put too much of /my/ culture into it. I like to try and find people from said culture, so they can steer me in the right direction, haha :p But that can make it really hard, so tbh I mainly just invent my own XD


winged-backpack wrote:@Ranger
I'm glad you didn't notice, I felt like such an idiot when I realised :lol:
Hahahaha XD But hey, at least you did realise! C:


winged-backpack wrote:(little off topic, but guess who made their sig all Christmassy but still kept the same theme ^^)
(Ha-ha! Clever :p)
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Silver Pandorica » Mon Dec 11, 2017 9:23 am

@Ranger One of your birdos is gone? Aw fren, I’m so sorry :((

What's your biggest worry when writing a character of a different race/religion/culture to you?
Getting something wrong and offending those people. That’s kinda why I just tend to not right for other cultures...I would really love to, but I’m afraid I’d get something really wrong. I do have a Hispanic character though, so I mean? I suppose as long as I do my research it should be okay...
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